Date: March 02 2018 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. Short and to the point, yet with just enough details added to paint a picture for the reader (e.g. the night sky, the silver letters on the wood panel wall).
Keep it up, perhaps write about the rest of their honeymoon or how he got up there in the first place and for how long before Kendra went for help.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time for reading the story! It's probalby going to be a little while before I write something that will expand upon this, but I did have quite the chronicle in mind.
Date: March 01 2018 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
A well written story. Good flow and great descriptions. I would have added more about his feelings of being taken out. His pain at being pulled out. The pain of the Doctor's grip. But a nice story. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. I made the decision not to, as I intended for him to be unconcious. I do understand where your coming from, as people want the "inside-scoop" when it comes to these kinds of stories.