Date: March 19 2019 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I rather like this story for some reason. Must be one of those days. Is there any way I could convince you to write more in the "Evi's Executions" universe. Be it with Evi or another of the "camgirls".
I'd be happy to use Daz3D to create some fan art of Evi (or another character). If an art trade isn't to your liking, I could be persuaded to pay you for a commission instead. I sent you a private message on Giantsss City with some art samples. If you have a Discord that'd be perfect.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2018 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
damn, forgot the stars!!
Date: February 24 2018 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story! When does Michelle come out? lol
Author's Response:
Thanks!
And that depends on when Evi last ate, I suppose. =P
Date: February 23 2018 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
youre_my_slave
If I were lodged somewhere up your butt, any scars you have would not be an issue with me. Though rather than die I'd just rather live up in there; permanantly! Ya, that's probably TMI and grossing you out, just had to admit it to you though. {Big Smile}
[Report This]Date: February 23 2018 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dammit now I want to be a camgirl even more. But my body's just fucked up enough that unless somebody's got a scar fetish, it ain't happening. Also Evi's probably on one hella embarrassing trip to the emergency room when Michelle gets lodged somewhere in Evi's large intestine, her rotting corpse finding a permanent humiliating home on the ER doc's "Most Interesting Things I've Removed From a Person's Ass" shelf. (I didn't even make that part up. Doctors actually have those).
Author's Response:
LMAO when you were like "I didn't even make that part up" a part of my mind was like WHAT? You know an ER Doctor that's removed a tiny person from someone's ass?!
And I got really hopeful for a sec. :D
Glad you enjoyed the story and were kind of inspired by it.
Date: February 23 2018 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty darn good. Very interesting ending too with the various other sites. Though one does have to wonder just how long Michelle survived up Evi's butt.
Nice pace and nice concept.
Author's Response:
Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed. I REALLY struggle with the 2,000 word limit in place for the contests, but I'm finding they keep me reigned in so I don't meander all over the place with the plot and it makes for the narrative staying tight. It definitely worked with this one.
And as for Michelle, I'm guessing not too long, but I'm hoping long enough for Evi to have time to rub one out off camera. ;)