You are very good in building suspense and I just love the feet parts of the story. You weren't kidding when you said this chapter would bring some changes.

Something tells me we are gonna have a colossal Rachel looking for Chris now tha he is coming back to normal. It is just my especulation, but, she could be spotted by Shannon, both have a fight and end up spilling the chemicals all over themselves and... grow. Maybe Rachel mother comes in to help her daughter and ends up spilling chemicals. Maybe Chris will have to run for his life while several giantess run after him. Maybe he will be the one to save the world from being flatted under his girlfriend and babysitter soles...

I could be wrong. Only you know kkkk. Please, keep up the good work and the feet parts. As I said, your writing is very good. Thank you for your hard work on this story.

Whoa! I can’t believe I missed your reference to my suggestion! You gave me a hint, and I completely overlooked it! I’m so glad you mentioned rereading the Mrs. Carson parts.

So I was reading the parts of Mrs. Carson this chapter and I didn’t notice anything while she was taking out the recycling. However, later in the chapter when Rachel finally came home, I just now realized that Mrs. Carson was sitting in her “favorite chair” in the living room!

Not only that, but she was reading a romantic novel which I can only assume was turning her on in that chair while wearing that nightgown. Imagine if she was reading a book about a sexy giantess playing with a little guy. I’m getting excited as if I’m unraveling a mystery.

Chris is with Sue Ann now, but after reading that scene again with Mrs. Carson, I kinda want Chris back in Rachel’s house again. Haha. I’m just imagining Chris finding that chair, most likely the butt imprint still visible on the seat with a wet spot in the middle. Whew! I’m getting flashbacks to that suggestion now.

Thank you so much for pointing that out to me! I try to mention everything in each chapter that stood out, but for some reason, that moment didn’t click in my head.

Now I’m super excited for what you have planned for Mrs. Carson next chapter!

Author's Response: I’m glad you skimmed the chapter again. Just pay attention to Mrs. Carson and what she does and says in the next chapter. I hope all will come to fruition by Labor Day. Until then, stay tuned. 😉

Well, well we’ll. Another chapter, another person that Chris has a chance to get intimate with. I will say, Sue Ann is someone that I have been hoping Chris gets to be with for a while now. However, I kinda forgot how she looked and such. I’m aware that Chris likes her, but I kinda forgot her age, body and demeanor.

Hold up, so Chris just bounced out of that trash bag? I thought Rachel tied it up tight last chapter. Perhaps Chris was so tiny, that he got through the opening? I’m not sure. But knowing Chris and his “lucky bounces” he tends to escape situations and get stuck into other problems often.

Love the drawstring aspect when Chris was hanging on to Rachel’s pjs and bouncing onto her crotch. I wished that was Janet in her nightgown instead that Chris was bouncing off, but we know Chris has an eye for Rachel.

So Sue Ann is back. I remember when the only girls were just her and Shannon. Back then, Sue Ann was easily my favorite giantess. Now.... not so much. I mean, there are plenty of good options here. We got Noreen who has a gym body, then Janet who is a sexy milf, and then Sue Ann who is the hot baby sitter. I’m a big fan of all 3, but I’m not really sure who is my favorite. I haven’t seen any of these ladies actually talk to the tiny Chris, so it’s hard to say. It’s all about personality at this point and with the story mostly unaware, that’s hard to decide. Maybe since Sue Ann seems to be alone in her own house, she might be able to be the first one besides Shannon to be aware of Chris and then she can keep it all a secret from everyone including Rachel, her new spy buddy.

But back to this chapter. So Sue Ann is stalking Shannon, but since Shannon isn’t really doing much other than planning Chris’s capture, I doubt Sue Ann will gain any intel. Rachel won’t either since she won’t see anything while Shannon is inside and is even “banned” from Chris’s house.

Hmm. Shannon has a tracker on Chris.... doesn’t she? So did she track Chris traveling from Rachel’s house to Sue Ann’s?!!! Now that would be crazy! Battle of the babysitters!

So there could be a few ways things can go down where I can predict. I could see Chris remains unaware, Shannon shows up, demands Sue to tell her where is Chris, Sue Ann is confused and thinks Shannon has him, Shannon then could realize that Sue Ann is telling the truth and waits for Sue Ann to leave the house, or Shannon explains that she can track Chris and accuses Sue Ann for kidnapping.

I’m sure there are other ways it could play out which I can’t think of at the moment, but those would be my best guesses.

So Sue Ann tells Rachel about her plan and then initially refused to let Rachel help her. Lol. What’s the point of telling Rachel everything when you don’t want her involved? Of course Rachel will be interested after hearing her plan. That sequence could be re-worded in my opinion. I liked how Sue Ann finally lets Rachel join on with her plan. Basically a spy for Sue Ann. Nice!

When Rachel crushed that “bug”, cmon, we all knew that wasn’t Chris. Lol. You still didn’t make him grow did you? He has been the same minuscule speck that has been carried like a bee carrying pollen. Would love to see Chris grow to that “bug” size.

Chris then winds up inside Sue Ann’a car, alone with his sexy babysitter. The whole journey where Chris tries to get to Sue Ann in the car was unnecessary in my opinion. We could just have Rachel swipe Chris off, and he lands at Sue Ann’s feet by the pedals. While I do like Chris’s adventures, reading about him walking around a car isn’t really that sexy compared to Chris trying to climb the leg of a giantess. I appreciate the details of the layout of the car, but I would rather have Chris gaze at Sue Ann and describe the layout of her figure, if you know what I mean. ;)

One small detail I liked which was random was when Rachel told her mom that she going to get dressed and Janet said “hunh” in response. I really could picture it. I think it’s more of a “huh” but I guess it doesn’t matter. Point is, I really felt that scene play out in my head.

So Chris’s next adventure is now with Sue Ann. I remember when Chris was with Noreen and Shannon came back looking for him. If Shannon doesn’t track him right away, no one will look for Chris leaving Sue Ann to toy with Chris herself. Now that would be fun. The fact that Sue Ann earlier said she wasn’t brave enough to stomp on a bug barefoot is clearly foreshadowing when Chris becomes big enough to be a bug sized human at the feet of Sue Ann. While I’m not exactly the biggest feet fan, I’m really excited for Chris growing to this bug size that is referred to a lot in this chapter.

I can’t help but agree somewhat of what the other reviews are saying. There is a lot of Chris doing random stuff with the environment, but not much action with the giantesses which I believe is what most people want to see and read about.

During the Shannon chapters, Shannon was constantly humiliating Chris and playing with him and never letting him out of her sight. You know I’m not the biggest fan of Shannon, but the stuff she did was way more entertaining than Chris climbing through grass, interacting with a dog, getting stuck in a drain, and then ending up in a trash bag. We could replace that with climbing through public hair, interacting with Janet, getting stuck in her panties, and then getting stuck in Rachel’s boobs. While some of that stuff I mentioned happened, it feels like Chris spent more time with the environment rather than actual people these last few chapters. (For example, when Chris was exploring Sue Ann’s car.)

So the story is going longer that we expected, right? So let’s have some chapters where a giantess interacts with the tiny consistently at his current size to make it entertaining. I’m sure most people read this wanting to feel turned on rather than actually knowing the story. Yes, the story is important, but the sexy stuff is what sells and makes people go “wow! That was hot!” Even I had a feeling like that here and there in this story. Last one was when Janet used Chris on her dildo. Seriously, that was amazing!

I can see you like to keep Chris at this small size still. It’s hard for me to think of how a giantess can interact with a tiny at this size which is usually why I like them bigger. However, if you do intend on keeping Chris this small for a few more chapters at least, then maybe we could get some sexy Sue Ann body exploration scenes or something. At that size, she must be a goddess to him.

In addition, I see you also want to keep it unaware. This doesn’t have to result in Chris being on the floor calling for help all the time. (Chris has called for help way too many times recently. Lol.) Chris could somehow wind up on Sue Ann’s person and she won’t even notice due to his size. If you make Sue Ann aware of him, we could get some sexy dialogue back. One thing I loved about the Shannon scenes were when she was telling Chris what she will do to him for punishment, when he escapes and so on. If Sue Ann could pull something like that, then that would be new and sexy. I imagine her to be the more gentle giantess, but since we are just meeting her officially, you could make her have any personally you want.

While others are requesting for more story progress, I think it’s more of them wanting you to get to the sexy parts as soon as possible. Last sexy scene was the Janet scene and that felt like a while ago. (Months ago). It’s like watching porn, but you just see the foreplay, and then the next upload is more foreplay and so on. Most stories that I favorite on this site are usually ones that have a chapter that I find irresistibly sexy. There has been 2 chapters in this story like that for me, but they happened a while back ago.

The last big story progression moment was Shannon inviting her ex, shrinking him down, and getting more of the shrinking potion. This was just one chapter. It was new, exciting, and strangely a turn on to know that there is a potion to keep Chris small forever. I loved this chapter and that chapter wasn’t even a sexy one! Now imagine a sexy chapter that happens to be that deep. You have the potential, I just think you need more erotic chapters with that level of detail.

Right now Chris is in the lovely home of a sexy babysitter that he has a crush on. Take advantage of this and create a sexy chapter for us to enjoy. No need for another “climbing to get attention” chapter. Let’s change it up a bit and go full throttle with Chris at the mercy of this hot woman. Chris, could grow a bit, Sue Ann could be aware of him. These are just two factors that could make this chapter and the next few chapters even better.

I really like this story. Right now it’s around an 8.5/10 for me. However, you could bring back that spark that this story started off with by adding a surprise sexy chapter next time. It’s clear you are slowing down the story to add more details, so why not add another sexual encounter with another sexy giantess. It doesn’t have to advance the plot, but I’m sure others wouldn’t mind some erotic action.

So my tip is to have something sexual that readers can look forward to. Chris traveling from a trash bag to Sue Ann’s car isn’t that much to enjoy. Its a great setup if Sue Ann’s house is some sort of sex dungeon. Actually....that’s not a bad idea. Just have Sue Ann accidentally carry Chris down to her basement and we get Chris’s reaction to see her dungeon. There could be all sorts of tools, chains, locks and kinky items there that could make Chris’s innocent eyes go wide. It doesn’t change the plot much, but it would be hilariously entertaining. Its random, but hot. It might give the readers the idea that Sue Ann is a freak in the sheets which makes Sue Ann finding Chris a much more exciting moment.

Sue Ann is basically a new character. I may have mentioned this before. (Wow, this review is long, but I love discussing this story!) Since we don’t know much about her, you can make her character any way you want. To me, sexier the better.

I hope Chris gets some action next chapter. I swear, if he is on the floor by her shoes calling for help... (sigh)... well, I might have a chuckle, but it would be another redundant theme in this story.

Your plot twists are great, especially that Shannon scene where she shrinks her former boyfriend. (I keep praising that scene.) Now let’s combine a plot twist like that with Sue Ann. Let’s say Sue Ann is actually the current girlfriend of the guy that Shannon shrank. Sue Ann knows that her boyfriend gave Shannon some of the shrinking potion and is actually spying on Shannon, not just for Chris, but also on her boyfriend to see what happens. Meanwhile, at her house, Sue Ann actually has her own share of the potion and used it on some unfortunate guys that she met. She explains how some of those guys harassed her and she shrank them to be her slaves/pets and keeps them locked/tied up. Chris grows to (let’s say) and inch and he discovers some of these shrunken guys all tied up. They are all shrunken like him, but they are a double his height, about 2 inches each. He talks to them and they beg him to free them. Chris gets scared and backs up and spots a boy around his age on a separate table. The boy, also tied up, begs Chris to free him. Chris listens to the boy’s story as he explains how his friends made a bet with him to spank Sue Ann’s ass. He did it, and immediately, she tugged him by the ear around the corner of the next building where none of his friends could see. By the time his friends came around the corner, all they saw was Sue Ann. The shrunken boy, stuck in Sue Ann’s cleavage called for help when his friends showed up. However, his friends got scared when they saw their friend missing and didn’t even attempt a rescue or even ask Sue Ann about him. Chris feels sorry and decides to free him. The boy gets free and thanks Chris. Chris smiles, but then screams as the boy tackles Chris and ties him up. Chris was no match to the boy who was twice as big as him. Chris was tied up and left exactly where the boy was originally and yelled at the boy to untie him. The boy left the table, leaving Chris alone with his thoughts. That’s when Sue Ann’s footsteps made their way into the basement. She glances at the two tables of men and smiles, glad that none escaped. From her perspective, an inch difference isn’t much to Sue Ann and Chris knew it when she walked over to him with a grin on her face.

I don’t know about you guys, but I got excited from that little tale I just wrote. I guess I have a new tip for you. Write something that turns you on, and it probably will turn us on. (Ok, that sounds weird, but you get my drift.)

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: First and foremost, I want to say how much I appreciate all your reviews, suggestions, and feedback over the course of this story. If I’ve never said it before, it’s YOUR reviews that I’m always on the lookout for whenever I post new stories/chapters. I’m taking your latest suggestions to heart and will definitely keep them in mind in future stories and chapters, and I didn’t realize how long it had been since something juicy happened. Hm, I might have some adjustments to make in the next chapter.

Now, as far as Sue Ann goes, she’s more of a kind, gentle giantess type. I don’t see her character as being cruel to Chris if she should find him at this or any small size. Rachel, being a teenager, might find the situation somewhat amusing, but ultimately, she really cares about Chris wouldn’t do anything to purposefully hurt him. I actually think the alternate chapter I posted with Rachel gives a pretty accurate description of her character and demeanor. I really wish I wouldn’t have had to split up the last chapter with the next, there’s so much coming! But I won’t spoil it. I think you’ll be very happy with how it ends, so keep checking back. As always, thanks for reading!

All right... I like your writing and how you discribe the scenes and Chris perils a lot. But, I am not gonna lie, it's very frustrating that after months of waiting, he just waltz out of the Carlsons house without being noticed when everything worked in that direction - the dog and Rachel dreams. Chris was noticed before and with less than half the effort we saw in this arc. Moreover, even if he gets noticed now by Su Ann, it will not be the same, because I (and probably others) have waited in suspence for the characters to grow (no pun intended kkkkk) as to move the plot and that didn't happen. This chapter was anti-climatic.

That said, in past comments you pointed the importance of Rachel and her mother for the plot as well as Chris development. So, I will trust you know where the story is going.

Do you think the story will end this year? Please, don't get demotivated. Keep up the good work and thank you for all the effort you put in describing the scenes.

Seems like we've been here before, Chris yelling and screaming, being in dangerous situations and no one able to hear (but Chloe the dog and no one is really paying her any attention either).

It does seem Rachel does have feelings for Chris and that Mrs. Carson is worried about him as well, but it seems like there is a BRICK wall beteewn that worry and actual action against Shannon.  Every benefit seems to go Shannon's way...

Hoping Rachel and Chris get a happy ending and that for once on this board Karma is repaid to the story's villian.

Thank you.

I love your very descriptive writing and you know how to make suspense. I am invested in the story, dying to see how everything will play out. I just BEG, please make Rachel aware of Chris! So painfull to see he pass through all these ordeals and not have a rest. Please, Chris deserves to be noticed by her already TT_TT

Thank you very much for all the effort you put in writing these long and detailed chapters. I am quite literally begging you for more XDD. You are, in my humble opinion, one of the best authors in the site :D

Just catching up on this one, good so far.  Hoping there is a happy ending for Chris (with Rachel!).  Kind of expecting he will be shrunk, and tortured by Shannon if thats the case tell me now and I will STOP READING.  Evidently every writer on this site has the villian get away scott free while the guy who's a decent person is either punished or killed and if thats how this stroy is ending I would prefer to be my time in more productive avenues.

Maybe Rachel could find him and the antidote, have Chris wig out a bit (not sure it's and antidote) Rachel tests it, she cures him, Shannon and Ray get their just deserts while Rachel starts to grow and devolp much faster and further then she should...

Good story so far, thank you.

Just wanted to thank you for all your work in building an actual story, with such wonderful cast of characters. I must say you are very talented, knowing how to use the fetish parts without losing sight of the development of your characters and the plot. Once again, thank you. Hoping to see Rachel and cia. strugling to protect and even interact with a very tiny Chris in a giantess world XDD. 

Yes! I love how this chapter ended up! I had my doubts that Shannon might shrink him, but after reading about Ray’s story, I thought they both had a deep connection.

Turns out, only Ray was the one who loved Shannon that much. Shannon just wants to use Ray for the formula. I don’t mind if Shannon keeps Ray while another sexy giantess keeps Chris. I was never a big fan of the Shannon and Chris relationship, but I love this on with Ray.

Ray loves her so it won’t be so bad for him, and the way he struggles is so much more entertaining than Chris in Shannon’s hands. Chris gives up too easily, but whenever he is around the other giantesses, he provides more effort and I think Chris just likes the other women more. (Or maybe that’s just me.)

I don’t blame you for taking a month for this masterpiece of a chapter. It almost doubled your word count, but it was well worth it. The chapter was so fleshed out and you included so many details.

Now that Ray is taken care of, the focus will be back on Chris. The question would be who finds Chris first? If it’s Shannon, well, the story would probably end right there with 2 sex slaves for her. If it’s Rachel, she will hide Chris but probably nothing sexual happens much between them. I think she will friend zone him. For Mrs. Carson, I think she is the best option because eventually she would show Chris to Rachel, but not right away since Mrs. Carson May have a few questions and things she wants to explore. ;) I think some unaware pleasure leading her to find him will make her believe he is a naughty boy. I could go on and on from here, but not today. Haha.

Anyway, I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it. I knew exactly what I wanted to have happen in this chapter, but it took me a while to get all the details and dialogue just how I wanted. Describing Ray’s backstory was especially important; if I had the entire story to do over again, this is probably how I would have introduced all the characters, that way you get a look at both their psychological and physiological profiles. The dialogue between Shannon and Ray is what took the longest: I wanted their conversations to be intimate and believable, and for it to flow naturally. Now that Shannon’s planning her escape, Chris has no idea how much trouble he’s really in.

Wow, I never realized that so many chapters actually occurred in one day. It made me realize how fast things happen in your story.

It’s also crazy that Chris’s parents will return Saturday as while that seems very close, I’m sure there will be plenty of chapters until then.

I like the increased drama this chapter. The stakes have dramatically increased. Janet knows about Shannon, Sue Ann is already into her, and now Chris’s mom is onto Shannon.

If I was Shannon, I would admit that I lost track of Chris, or he ran away and didn’t want to get blamed for it. Maybe someone will believe her, but it’s better than saying nothing and continue this “sick” story. Lol.

I also like how Rachel knows about her mother knowing about Chris’s situation. I think it would be great for her to tell her mom about her dreams and connect it to the dog sniffing their feet. While Rachel may not put the pieces together, I believe Mrs. Carson is smart enough to think of it, even if she won’t believe it right away.

Also, let’s not forget Chris is still stuck in that drain in the laundry room. I expect Janet to return there soon, perhaps making sure Rachel got the clothes or something.

In addition, Shannon mentioned Chris’s position would wear off soon. I mentioned this countless times, and I know only a few days have passed, but I still think Chris is supposed to grow slowly and I think a little growth spurt is due soon. Maybe he grows and pops out of the drain, I’m not sure. Would love to see him reach an inch soon so he is at least able to be seen by the giantesses.

The whole “shrink and keep someone forever” is one of the sexiest themes there is on giantess world and I love how you included it. While I would rather have another giantess say it, it fits Shannon’s character completely.

Shannon’s plan involves keeping Chris forever, but that includes finding him. Chris doesn’t want to be with Shannon and no one wants to let Shannon be with Chris. So I have no idea how Chris winds up back with Shannon, and I hope it’s not anytime soon. Haha.

I reread my suggestion from a past review about a 2 foot tall Chris being used by Mrs. Carson and the crazy part was that that review was in August. Crazy how time flies. Hopefully Chris grows a little in no time as well.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: 1) Yes, I didn’t realize either how many chapters occur on the same day. The first 11 chapters take place entirely on the first day! We are getting through the week, but so much happens on a day to day basis. There are still a few more chapters to go, but trust me, we are approaching the end.
2) It true that this chapter was more about plot development and less about “encounters”, but it’s a rather important one. I needed this chapter to focus on the other characters instead of Chris, especially getting back to what Shannon’s been up to. As more people suspect her, Shannon becomes more desperate, and things are starting to unravel.
3) I’m actually exploring more and more how Rachel reacts as events unfold. I think she may play an even bigger part than initially anticipated.
4) The potion will start to wear off again, and both Chris and Shannon know it, which is obviously why she needs another supply. She’s doesn’t want to tell anyone about Chris predicament, and has only told “Ray” the bare minimum. I will say that the “shrink and keep him forever” theme was always going to be my endgame. Will it work?
Lastly, it has been a long time since I started the story, and there are several tiny details I seeded into certain chapters. Those details will start to come to light in the next few chapters, leading up to the big conclusion, but we’ve still got a ways to go!