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Reviewer: Dannymanny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2024 8:16 PM Title: Forward

Best story i ever read, i really want to know when your next one is coming out and which one it is, thank you!

Author's Response: So, I already have a few shorter stories completed and in progress. As for my next novel, it’ll still be a while before I really jump in to writing it; right now, I’m working on tweaking the outline and getting a few scenes written here and there, but I have other, small stories I want to complete first.

Reviewer: LordVenom189 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2023 9:37 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 10–What if Chris ended up with Rachel?

Hello there, I've been reading some of your stuff for a long while now and I really liked this chapter especially. 


Not just because of the reference of the movie, (which was an awesome touch btw) but the interaction that Rachel and Chris had with each other. It really had my mind picture how the story would go if you continued doing the story with Rachel, and honestly I'm surprised nobody had done fanart for the story at all. And I'm planning a story for myself based on a roleplay me and another are doing right now


it is completely different from this and has a very bigger plot story into 


So the one best thing I'm trying to say, please continue writing awesome stories like this because its what's inspiring me to become a better writer in a way



Wish you great luck my man 



Author's Response:

Well, I always appreciate the feedback and read count. I think, if I had to do it over again, Rachel would play a bigger role in the story than I initially planned. In any case, I think it was a reader suggestion that led me to this alternate chapter with Rachel; it gave me a chance to play out a little of the scenario, and practice writing a couple of shrunken interactions that I plan on using in the future.

I still have plenty more stories to write, it just has been taking me longer to write lately.

Reviewer: Ride Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2023 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 37

I like the story, but this is by far the best chapter you've ever written. Well done!



Author's Response:

Well, thank you. I’m curious as to why you liked this particular chapter so much? Whether it be the unaware scenario, or Chris being brushed away like a piece of dirt.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Angel615 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2023 12:31 AM Title: Epilogue

The best story about giantess I've ever read! I've always had this fetish for as long as I can remember, and I've always loved reading these kinds of macrophilia stories, until I found this one that stands out above all the others!

The way the story is written, the dialogues, the texts, the cliffhangers, the characters, the plots, the stories and alternatives, everything is amazing!
I really got addicted to this story, so much so that I finished all 60 chapters in 1 week hehe but everything is wonderful! There was always something happening in the story that you didn't expect, it was never predictable at any point and I never got bored in any chapter, they are all very very amazing!
The only thing I didn't like was Shannon's ending, I grew very fond of him despite what he did to Chris hehe
But everything else is wonderful.
I wish there would be a spin-off of this series in the future, to find out more about these characters, or an alternative history of:

What would happen if Shannon became a giant the size of a building?...

Or what if Chris cringes from Rachel or Sue Ann, and they find they can't resist the urge to have Chris and play with him?...

Or what if Chris stayed with Shannon and they lived together in the Caribbean forever, as an alternate ending?...

There are many places to explore this story! You can also continue the alternative stories that are already there, like part 2 of Rachel taking care of a shrunken Chris and seeing how he sometimes has fun with him.
Or a part 2 of Mr. Carson.
You could even follow up with a bigger and bigger Shannon part 2!
There are also many alternative stories to enjoy!

I hope that one day my request can be fulfilled, as long as it can of course hehe
I congratulate you for making such a good story.
Regards!

Author's Response:

Well, thank you so much for your review and encouragement! 


I have had requests to do some more spin-off chapters, including one where Shannon grows into a giantess, but as I’m not used to writing that kind of story, I’ve put it on indefinite hold until I can find the inspiration and drive to produce a good quality chapter.


In the meantime, I’ve been working on a couple of new projects: the biggest being one my next novel: “Little, Big Brother.” (Check out the preview in my “Upcoming Stories Preview”) However, while you have given me a glowing review on THIS novel, I’ve received some constructive feedback from other readers on things I need to work on. So, for the last several months, I’ve been working on a story to do just that. It’s going to be more scenario focused as opposed to plot focused, with the overall goal being to hone the various interactions, situations, and scenarios that I’ll want to use in my larger works, as I really want my novels to be of the highest quality. 


With all that being said, I invite you to check out my other works and leave feedback on what you think, along with feedback on this upcoming work. I really want to know the story details you like and dislike, and for some suggestions on my encounters so I can focus on how to improve them and provide a satisfying experience for everyone.


Once again, thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2023 12:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Hello! Passing just to wish you a Happy New Year. May 2023 be full of
peace and inspiration for all of us!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2021 4:27 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Let me elaborate a little more on why I don’t think Sue Ann should grow and fight Shannon. First, we already seen her Fighting Shannon in the ‘cannon’ storyline. Second, Rachel offers more room to work with emotions and turmoils by taking the growth serum.

I also fell Sue Ann’s arc with Chris is already closed and her feelings for Chris, as well as her will to take a fullblown revenge Against Shannon, are not as deep as Rachel. At least now.

Mrs. Carlson... I know she has some fans, but I don’t feel as invested in her as I am in Chris and Rachel dynamic. And with Rachel’s growth, her mother can get a more impactfull role at the end of the story (maybe Chris wil get hurt by Rachel and Mrs. Carlson will come to the rescue).

All in all, I think an end more foccused on Rachel and Chris will offer new possibilities and something for everyone to like (seeing Rachel once again truly angry at Shannon and and worried during this part I sparked the ideas I hurriedly laid out in my previous comment).

Last but not least, one questions: do you have an idea of the size this new storyline might have? Sorry, I am already anxious for more XD

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2021 2:50 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Coming back to these characters, I can’t help but feel a mix of joy and exitement. Rachel and Chris playing is just as sweet as the first time. And I missed your detailled writing so Much!! Took me the entire night, but I finally came up with a scenario I think is interesting

Shannon growing... there are a few questions about that. First, how big is she and what is her state of mind after becoming a real giantess. It’s easy to assume her ego will skyrocket and she will act as a dominatrix, I am sure that’s what some of her fans expect – Shannon having her way with houses or even buildings. but there could be other side effects that will settle in as time passes, like with her obsession over Chris getting a huge boost. But finding him just became a lot harder now.

So she might just go for the obvious and march back to where it all begun. It’s not rational, but, again, I don’t believe this new formula is 100% safe, especially in large doses. For all we know Shannon could be more monster driven by desire than human now.  This will put Rachel and her Family in danger and Chris once again in a colision course with his nemesis.

Shannon rampages and then goes after Rachel and her mother to get to Chris, destroying their house... buuuuut..., the growth effect start to wear off. Shannon flees the scene with Ray (still trapped somewhere in her body) and a very angry, very traumatized Rachel in her hands, wanting to make more formula. Obviously she is still very big, so Sue Ann and Chris are fast on her track.

Shannon demands an even more powerfull formula. Ray is actually too scared to argue, but, truth to her vow of protecting Chris, Rachel take advantage of Shannon deranged state and manages to drink the formula herself.

As she grows bigger, scenes of what can be described as a nightmare flashes in her impressionable mind, mingling with reality. Shannon torturing Chris, Chris begging for her help on the floor of her house, Shannon destroying their home... She will make her pay.

The growth serum doesn’t seem to stop, making Rachel increasingly unstable towards the now almost unrecognizable tiny world beneath. Thinking this is all his fault and believing Rachel will never hurt him, Chris marchs on to distract his girlfriend (putting a stop to the destruction) and convince to take the shrinkink serum.

I am just so excited to see na update from this, I tried to write a comment as fast as I could. Sorry for any mistakes or confusion, I wrote this in a hurry because of work. You can spin this ideas around as you see fit.

I think this will give everyone something to be happy, while not being just a reenact of the final fight we already know. We have Giant Shannon playing with the city, we have her retribution at the hands of Rachel and Rachel herself rampaging and having more moments with... well not tiny Chris, because she will be the one who is big XD (which can be either sweet or heartbreaking... or both?)

You can spin this ideas around as you see fit.

Thank you so much for not abandoning this project. You are a very talented and very honest writer, one of the top on this site!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 12:41 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

I love love long stories and the fact that this is long with alternate endings is incredible. This may be my fav ending yet! Can't wait for more. Love it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. Any suggestions on this chapter moving forward?

Reviewer: wisecrack3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2021 3:53 PM Title: Epilogue

Definitely my favourite giantess story ever, I've read thousands of stories similar to it but nothing quite matches the writing skill on display here. I'd murder to see a short sequel post epilogue. Maybe Chris gets stuck due to some unforseen issue with the antidote (Running out, it spills, he's immune to it, etc.) and has to wait for a specially made one to come in for him.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate them right now considering the backlash with my current story: “With Great Power...”. If you have read that one, and have paid attention to the reviews as of late, many people did not like the ending to that story.

You certainly are the first one who’s asked for a sequel/spin-off with Chris and Sue Ann. Well I don’t currently have any plans to write a sequel, I’ll certainly keep it in mind as it seems to be a story that many people like.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2021 10:46 AM Title: Epilogue

LOL! You got me all hyped thinking the story was updated! Ok. About the giantess Shannon chapter, it doesn't have to be one chapter. You cand divide in many chapters and post as an alternative babysitter trouble.

If I have any new ideas I will post (unfortunately, work is taking up most of my time and imagination right now T_T)



Author's Response:

Yes, as I said, I didn’t mean to get anyone’s hopes up. I absolutely couldn’t believe that when I looked back at the chapters, all the formatting was off. The biggest issue was that apparently all of my apostrophes and “”  marks turned into “?”. It was practically every chapter! Slowly but surely I’ll get them all fixed.

And also yes, the ultimate ending about Shannon being a giantess is going to be big....Like, really big!  It’s possible it might even turn into a multi chapter alternate ending. Where I plan on picking things up for the story arc are around chapter 53, when Shannon has Ray stuck in her ass, and because it’s going to be a big project (at least from a single chapter standpoint), it’s going to take a lot of outlining and planning. I’ll be sure to update everyone as to its progress.

Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2020 3:51 AM Title: Epilogue

Rating of the whole story: 7/10.

I can say right now, your strengths are that youre descriptive. You know how to set up a story and setting and youre very good at dialogue. One of the things i really enjoyed as a whole of this entire series was the character developement of shannon and a few of the others. How their quirks were slowly revealed. It was like reading an official book.

 

This leads me to talk about the shortcomings too: first, i would say remove the vore tag. Apart from 2 mouthplay situations... the vore is beyond an utter disappointment as there basically is none and this undeserving of the tag which can be misleading to vore hopefuls. If you desire examples on good vore stories where the prey survives, i can recommedn "Holly the freshman" and "a weekend adventure". Those show vore and mouth done superbly.

Another thing is when you have a 60 plus chapter story, its hard not to make situations repetetive. It actually became alittle laborious to read through near identical situations where Chris is underfoot/in ass/in pussy shouting the same help me lines from 3 chapters before. The only thing that kept me from skimming over them was my desire to be thorough so i can present a valid review.

 

All in all: great story telling, developement and descriptive events.

 

Work on: fulfilling vore when it is a tag, avoiding overusing repetetive situations and lines excessively.

 

All in all a solid series



Author's Response:

First off, thank you so much for your review. This type of review categorizing my strengths and weaknesses really does help me grow and improve as a writer.

To each of your points, I went ahead and removed the “Vore” tag because you were correct, there was really only one chapter (plus an alternate) that dealt with mouth play.

When I started this project, I wasn’t expecting it to turn out as long as it was. If I’d have known I was writing a novel, I would’ve changed several things at the beginning of the story, and several others moving forward. Since you read the whole thing, you could probably tell the writing improved as the story progressed, and I agree, several things became repetitive, probably because I had so many things I wanted to have happen with several characters.

Moving forward, I’m planning out my stories better, and trying to gage how long my future stories with be before I even start writing. If you haven’t checked them out yet, I urge you to read my short story, “Honey, Don’t Squish Me”, and my current multi-chapter project, “With Great Power...”.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2020 4:33 AM Title: Forward

Also forgot to mention, congrats on 200 reviews!



Author's Response:

And congrats on being review #200!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2020 4:32 AM Title: Forward

Well, well, well. Look who's back! When I saw this on the "most recent" page, my heart almost skipped a beat but then I asked myself, "wasn't this story finished?" So I read the story notes and I see you added this little plot synopsis in the beginning. I'm not sure why it's called "forward" though. I'm curious as to why you picked that word. I would've expected maybe "intro" or "background" or something. But that's just a minor detail.

 

Anyway, my favorite chapter is the alternate chapter with Mrs. Carson but you probably already knew that. It's easily my favorite because my favorite giantess gets to play with Chris! 

 

Lastly, it's great to see you back online here, which will always make others including me wonder if you might consider making a new story or sequel or something else in the future. I'm not expecting much since the world has gone crazy and it might be difficult to write something new now. However, if you do continue to write, I would be glad to read it sometime. 

 

I can't wait for your next story/update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry to get your hopes up, but I’m glad to see you’re still a fan, and I wonder how many ticks of that read count are you reading and re-reading the Mrs. Carson chapter. I also wonder if you picked up on her shrinking a tiny bit after sniffing the empty vial that once contained the shrinking potion.

In any case, I have plenty of stories coming up: some short, single-chapter stories, and several multi-chapters stories. In fact, I was just recently inspired to do a short story involving some “giant couples” interaction. But as for my next project, If you’d like to see, check out the “With Great Power...” preview on my page. I’ll be posting a “forward” for it soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2019 3:20 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow, you uploaded a few chapters since I last reviewed and I can’t believe how behind I am! I mean, you already finished! I don’t think I actually expected it since there have been way too many past authors I followed that would never finish their story, so I’m kinda glad you reached a conclusion.

Although, I’m not the biggest fan of Rachel, I like how you created her; the girlfriend, but loves Chris so much that it almost terrifies him to an extent. There have been multiples times where Rachel’s clumsiness has comprised he mission.

Sue Ann really has grown as a character for me. I remember always wishing for you to introduce her back to the story and I removed you would take forever, but once you got her into the mix, I got really into her.

However, by the time Sue Ann returned, Mrs. Carson was the one who stole my heart. She was the one that turned me on the most and I loved how she interacted with Chris, not just for the alternate chapter, but also the multiple close calls in the main story.

I liked the involvement of all the main characters in the last few chapters. I also liked the big surprise of Shannon stuck under Mrs. Carson’s foot. Lol. Also, a tiny Sue Ann made me scared since I actually feared maybe Rachel might step on her.

Hmm, I noticed a heavy amount of feet content in the final battle, I don’t think I need to include examples since it was about a third of the battle. I didn’t mind too much since I was able to breeze through it.

Let’s not forget that Shannon managed to stick Chris inside Sue Ann’s pussy. That was the best scene in the battle for me. It almost made Sue Ann struggle to keep her composure due to how turned on she was. Glad you referenced that moment in the epilogue.

I thought it was strange for Sue Ann to keep Shannon as a pet. In addition, it seems like Sue Ann actually tried to take care of Shannon really well which I find strange since they were enemies for the entire story. I thought maybe Sue Ann would torture Shannon or something instead.

Lastly, I loved the epilogue. I wanted Sue Ann to be kinky with Chris but all we got was the gentle version of her during the story. Now in this last chapter, we get to see how Sue Ann truly felt when Chris was inside her. She wants him and I like how she remembered that he was 18 before having sex with him. It shows that she cares about his age unlike Shannon.

After reading this epilogue, I couldn’t help but imagine some side story with Chris and Sue Ann. Imagine a tale where Chris could visit Sue Ann everyday for the summer and get a daily does of shrinkage for some giantess fun and then he could use the antidote to return home without his parents worrying again. There could be times where his parents would go away for a weekend and Sue Ann could keep Chris shrunk all weekend. They could even sleep together ;) Also, 3 inches is my favorite size for Chris and I’m aware of all the little fun that they could interact with at that size. Boy, Chris is one lucky guy.

Congrats on such an amazing story! I can’t wait for your next installment!

Author's Response: It’s nice to see you back; I was getting a little worried.

I’m glad you liked the direction I took all of the characters. I hadn’t intended on including a couple of them when I first started the story, but they kind of took on a life of their own.

I’d always planned on having Shannon shrink permanently at the end of the story, and for Sue Ann to keep and take care of her; However, I hadn’t planned on having Sue Ann shrink too, nor for Chris to enter the micro world. I suppose, given how I made that rivalry between them, that it would be odd that Suanne would keep Shannon as a pet. I did think it fitting, however, for Shannon to be stepped on and stuck to somebody’s foot; Like I said, karma at its finest. Oh, and that part about Chris being shoved inside Sue Ann by Shannon, that was inspired by YOUR suggestion, I just took some artistic license.

I’m glad that you like the epilogue; After introducing Rachel, I thought it best to have them end up together, but I always wanted to have a scene between Sue Ann and Chris. Although I currently have no plans to revisit the story, if I ever do, I’d probably continue it where things left off, and explore the fun things that Sue and Chris can do together.

Lastly, I want to see how much I appreciate all of your reviews, suggestions, and support over the course of the story. You are probably my favorite reader, and I always enjoy reading your reviews. I was actually wondering if you weren’t a fan of the end of the story, since you hadn't posted a review for a while. I certainly hope you add me to your favorite authors, and read and review the other stories I plan to post. Thank you so much for your readership!

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2019 10:47 PM Title: Epilogue

Great final part! Cant wait to see what you create next!



Author's Response: After I finish he last alternate chapter for this story, I plan to post some shorter stories, or stories with at most 10 chapters. I’ve had several commission requests, however, so those might be next in line.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2019 8:34 PM Title: Epilogue

You were absolutely right. I loved the epilogue. Rachel and Chris made sense in the universe of the series finale, but, this epilogue with Chris and Sue Ann was just soooo sweet! I know you won't do a continuation now, but I sure hope to see it some day.

Thanks for everything. You are in my favorites.



Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you liked it. I thought an ending where Chris and Sue Ann hook up in the future could be really sweet as well, especially making his childhood dream come true. If I ever decide to revisit the story, I might add another alternate chapter catch, or I might pick things up in the future with an older Chris, Rachel, and Sue Ann.

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 25 2019 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue

Well....I dont know how to feel about the epilogue....

I loved him and Rachel together....and I hate the let's take a break to see other people thing....

I like that him and sue Ann had a cute moment together 

But I prefer him and Rachel

I thought you were gonna do an alternate ending with him and sue ann

So the epilogue was cute but I prefer it never happened. 

Sorry for my complaints.

Merry Christmas and a happy new year.



Author's Response: Eh, don’t worry about the complaints. Like I’d said before, Chapter 59 is technically the last chapter of the story; the epilogue is more of an afterthought. As long as you enjoyed the bulk of the story, that’s what I really care about.

Reviewer: The greatest hit Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2019 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 59

I thought it was a great chapter but honestly am thinking what a lot of other people seem to think. It’s bitter sweet to see it come to an end, even if it is a good one. I was looking forward to seeing the interactions between Chris and Rachel while he was much smaller, especially since later in the series she seemed very excited about it. But what do I know, you always seem to throw curve balls through the series. Either way, great story and I’m glad I caught up in time to see it come to an end. Can’t wait for the epilogue.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Feel free to subscribe and follow me for new stories when I post them.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2019 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 59

Wrapped up my two reviews into one. Sorry for the mess :(  I need to organize my thoughts better before writing.

I am conflicted. On one side, I am really happy to see Chris, Rachel And Sue Ann adventure conclusion with a happy ending.  On the other side, I am sad because it ended.  Your writing was amazing, beginning to end.   Even when I thought you had made mistake, like when you had Chris found by Sue Ann first instead of Rachel, you turned the tables on me and made me like character I wasn't all that invested at first. You seemed worried about the micro part since it was your first time, but your descriptions once again were the best.

So, now that we have reached the end, I must thank you once again for all the efforts I know you must have put into creating these characters and their story. I have nothing to add. If you wait eagerly for the epilogue and Hope for a spinoff or a continuation. Who knows? Maybe in a spinoff we will get to see a showdown between a Rachel and Sue-zilla vs Kaijuu Shannon.

Even better: a soinnoff where Sue Ann also fell in love with Chris after he saves her from Shannon. Shannon shrinks and remains in Sue Ann care. When Sue Ann is alone, Shannon thinks that Ray might have keept some formula on his house. She convinces Sue Ann to bring her back to normal and she actually get back to normal. What she doesn't expect is for Sue Ann to spill most of the formula on herself too.

Sue Ann grows and grows a mile high, not only in size but in her craving for Chris too. She will not stand for Rachel keeping her little hero all to herself! Chris is her hero! Her knight in shining armor. And we have a showdown Rachel vs. maddly in love Sue Ann.

You could also make a series of spinnoffs with each girl growing... 

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. That 2020 may bring inspiration for the both of us and everyone else who wants to write their own stories.

PS. Seems I am unable to write a review for this story without also writing a fanfic at the same time kkkkkkkkkk



Author's Response: Just a guess, but I think you’re going to enjoy the epilogue and alternate chapter. I had thought about Rachel finding Chris, which is what I explored in her alternate chapter (which I thought turned out well), but I really wanted Sue Ann to show up in the second half of the story, and I figured it made a little more sense.
As for the alternate chapter, I’m certainly considering having more than one giantess fighting each other, but I’m still up in the air. I’ve still got some time to consider all my options, so I think carefully.

Thank you for all your reviews and suggestions. I’m glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2019 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 59

Finaly got caught up with this story. I loved the descriptions of the unaware parts with Rachel in this chapter. Keep it up! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it!

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