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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2018 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 11

Yep! We're all just cogs in the Great Money-making Machine. Or, to paraphrase Sting of The Police:

"We're all just spirits in a material world."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

Sic transit gloria, Marcus.

"All glory is fleeting."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Male or female, bullies are all the same. They never like getting a taste of what they dish out!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2018 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

And before he can be broken once and for all, he sends out a message. He may have screwed up their plans again, unless they detect and intercept the message.



Author's Response:

Exactly.  I'm debating which way to take the story from here.  I thought about them screening all the calls and texts going in and out, but idk.  We'll see I guess.  Thank you for commenting! 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2018 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

I sense a turning point coming. It looks like Marcus is starting to break.

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Date: March 13 2018 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

I like this turn of events. It's good to see a relatively giant Samantha. Now let' see what else is going on here.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2018 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good addition to the story, and thanks for bringing Bridgette back.

Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2018 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

RIP, Marcus. :-(

Author's Response:

I think it will be a likeable chapter.  My boys usually lose, but you can never count them all the way out. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

No, Samantha. The real reason YOU can't stand him is he hit the Nerve of Truth! Over-reactions, like yours, are always the irrefutable proof of that.

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Date: March 04 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh, dear!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for updating this story, I really enjoy it.

I actually hope we will see Bridgette back at some point.

I don't really have much else to say about this story because its so good.

See you next time!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2018 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Holy crap! Prayers answered, I do hope Claire's interactions escalate to even more sexy stuff!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well this was a surprise. Let's see the full extent of his operation.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, Claire is by FAR my favorite! Hope to see more of her, perhaps in a sexual capacity.

Reviewer: DankMip Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2018 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I actually really like this little bit the most, in chapter 1:

 

She only chuckled as she reached for me again, scooping me up. This time I was glided through the air until my face met the glass of her outward facing window with the sound of a bird striking it. I groaned out, as Bridgette used me to clean a small smudge on her glass

 

The idea of like, some controlley secretary woman just casually picking up a shrunken person, and using him for some humiliating mundane task like cleaning a smudge off a window really gets me going for some reason >.> 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Fun stuff! At his point, you can keep going with Marcus, and talk about what the other supervisors and managers do with their power. How much of it is based on legitimateissues vs excuses to have fun with employees?



Author's Response:

That is the dynamic I'm trying to work on.  Stomping on Marcus wasn't some huge ordeal for Bridgette.  Whether or not she enjoyed it, it was just part of the job for her.  Which is why she didn't mention it later.   There are rules to it all that I'm going to explain later.    Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

At first I gave Marcus the benefit of the doubt and thought that maybe Bridgette w as so cruel because she had a crush on him, but it seems that he has also been mean to his co-workers. And even more he is still mean to the poort girl even though she is a giantess. Really dumb of Marcus. Now he has to face the wrath of three gigantic coworkers. I would start looking for a new job if so were him.

Also, thanks for adding a new chapter so quickly, your writing is really good!

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 22 2018 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very nice.

I'm really enjoying how nothing seems to be going right for Marcus and the enjoying how his "coworkers"  ,if there's anythign "co" about their relationship, treat him.

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

A new Giantess. He's in trouble.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2018 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

This concept us a lot if fun! Make the most of it and keep it going.

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