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Reviewer: CCreation Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2021 4:22 PM Title: Playing With Their Food: the Official Story

I don't like that there was surprise M/m action, and that you described Paul's mouth in more detail than Jackie's. M/m should have been been included under the size roles on the table of contents. Otherwise not too bad.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2018 10:16 PM Title: Alternate Endings

hope you write more. really well done. I enjoy m/m too and I love unaware



Author's Response:

Thank you man! I think you will really like my next story that is just about to get released! I will let you know though that it is more brutal than this story.

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