Not sure if you're still active on here but I just wanted to say, as many others have, that your writing is excellent. This story, and specifically chapters 7, 8, 9 and 10, when Val eats and digests Crystal, Anne and Steven, might be my favorite content on this whole site. There's just something wonderful about how wickedly self indulgent and guilt-free Val is as she torments and consumes people. The line: "They were people, and worth remembering, and she wanted to get to know every single one of the ones she caught before sending them down into her bowels for good." -always sounded to me like it was suggesting that there were many, many more encounters around campus involving Valerie and other unfortunate tinies, and we might get a series of one-shots from you in the future? Wishful thinking on my part perhaps ;)

Holy crap, an update to one of my favorite vore series ever.  I always hold out hope that you'll eventually get back to it ;D ;D ;D

But anyway, jokes and references aside I've been watching this story very careefully since it's beginning always excited to see a new chapter released. With this chapter I planned to do a review, but life got in the way.

First some thoughts on your Author's Note. For a first foray into the wiriting world you hit it out of the freaking park. Every moment hit and I feel like now that it's complete I need to go back and reread the entire thing to get a sense of how everything fits together. I understand losing a lot of what makes a story appealing the further in you go but depending on what it is you felt was appealing I think you still had it going all the way through.

To me the story was about "Ms Hyde", about Valerie and how she changed, what kind of person she became and even why. It all started with Crystal and just kept going from there. One experience changed her entire life, her entire perspective and this is just a chronicle of that change (not to mention all the things she went through before that). Even when Valerie reveals to Sierra in this chapter how eating Crystal changed her life, it felt very intimate and human (not to mention the other intimate stuff going on). I could feel the remorse of Valerie losing her best friend and feeling her life spiral out of her control. This entire story, she's had massive ups, shes had sour downs and each has shaped who she is and who she will become. That's what I think in the end made this so appealing, was not just Valerie herself but her struggle going forward with this new nature.

Anyway, that's just me and what I took away from it. I'm really sad to see this story come to a close but really excited to see what you have planned next. This truly has cemented you as one of my favorite vore authors. If you post it I'll read it, even if I don't review it. ;) Thanks for this story!

YEEESSSSSS the power reversal in having a humble tiny grow and have her way with a once arrogant normal is the best, would hope Valerie would give Laura to Sierra though as she reminds her of Rachel and it's like having Laura digested by her once prey. Love it! Can't wait for more!

Ok ngl, it's still cool, but I don't know what's going on rn and miss the campus serial snacker Val :(

You know, I was on here looking for that divine inspiration, something to really call me back to writing this stuff after years of hiatus... This might have done it. I *love* Val, she's absolutely messed up in a very detailed and intimate way. I've only read up to... She just ate Anne and Steve. Delightful. Gotta go to work, but imma read more later.

I hate Laura with a burning passion but hot damn.

Superb chapter like always. But damn I really hope Laura meets a bad end and someone please save Robyn.

YEEESSS AN UPDATE. I'M SO EXCITED!!!!! 

Yay we're back! Glad you're writing again, excited to see this story continue. Kinda feel sorry for Sierra lol, so eager to end up inside Valerie or some other girl.

I can't take these character deaths anymore. Legit killing me :( RIP RACHEL