Date: December 11 2021 9:33 PM Title: First Date
It boggles my mind that this story doesn't have more reviews on here. You're one of the best vore writers on the site, and this story is one of your best. You've been a big influence on my own writing, and an inspiration to get into creating content like this myself. I hope you continue writing great stuff like this, and that Mandy stays safe!
Author's Response:
Sorry I took a while to get to this! I’m not terribly active on this site now days.
Thank you for the compliments! I’m really happy I helped you find your creativity, it’s always good to see someone writing what they like.
haha man I wish I had more feedback, but it is what it is. One day I might make it on the featured list, then you never know!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2019 3:10 PM Title: First Date
Gershwin has a real skill for writing characters. The characters really make this sotry interesting and exciting. One my favourites, great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm really happy the characters work well for you :) I have a massive next (likely final) chapter that needs finishing, but real life has done it's best to prevent me from sitting down and doing it. I'll get there eventually.
Date: June 05 2018 12:14 PM Title: First Date
I appreciate the re-done first chapter of this story, that was my favorite section when I initially read through this. I hope you keep finding the time/ energy for writing!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. On a break for a bit but I’ll be back :)
Date: April 26 2018 7:33 PM Title: Dangerous Games
Nice chapter. I wonder if next chapter is going to include more soft vore. Hope so I really enjoy it, and I can just see Mandy covering herself in sauce, and hiding in one of their meals after she finishes eating.
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it. There will definety be more soft vore. It won’t though be in the style suggested as that doesn’t really fit with the story or world setting. Keep in mind that Mandy isn’t “tiny”, she’s big enough to fill and even stretch a stomach, so “hiding” in a meal wouldn’t really work anyway. She could, however, oil her self up in some sexy situation. We’ll see though, I’ve not planned chapter 4 at all yet!