Reviews For "Swallow Her!"
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Reviewer: ILike Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2021 6:25 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

really great story idea, but my god, why did you have to chose the most non sexy girls you may come up with? olga? fulda? seriously? that totally ruined the entire story.

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2021 12:56 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

I just loved the ironic ending of how they agreed to not tell anyone like it never haoppend and nothing bad happend right.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2019 1:15 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

loved the cruel ending of them making a pact of it never happened, who will ever find out, no one, it never happened, where was the harm, right.... right....

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2019 11:00 AM Title: "Swallow Her!"

Love it!

Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2019 2:23 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

Why write something so horrible your one sick person I don't get off on killing like you have you had a family member beat or torcherd and and have two or more drown them well I Have you make like killing person is a joke.

 



Author's Response:

pound sand, nevermore.

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2018 7:03 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

really hot story. would like an unaware story with something like this in the future. keep it up

Reviewer: ChrisBel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 1:52 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

Very interesting the way you described Anali's digestion. Very detailed,  I liked it. 

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2018 2:44 AM Title: "Swallow Her!"

awesome story. hope you write more. I love cruel plots and dark ironic endings.

Reviewer: Vintovka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 11:32 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

I really like the idea of shrinking people for internet points becoming another expression of "it's just a prank, bro!" that, of course, eventually goes too far.  And I enjoyed Olga and Fulda, but might be biased on that.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 11:14 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

First off, major improvement since the last story! Second... I nearly was in tears when Anali dissolved into nothing.. the way you wrote her passing.. like it meant nothing to Olga and the others except Fulda. It was so cruel and heartless that it really got to me... 

Expertly written. I'm certainly keeping an eye out for new stories by you.

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