Reviews For Classroom Trouble
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2017 4:42 AM Title: Classroom Trouble

Fun story. Nice build up. A possible idea. Same basic scenario but he's standing in the isles between the seats and the teacher, Mrs.Nelson walks down the isle handing out papers. You know the rest.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: Frizzlenidifizerizid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2017 12:49 AM Title: Classroom Trouble

Interesting read. Did a good job of recreating the enviornment and the actions of Julie. Was able to paint a clear image of what was going on no problem. I'd also like to add how refreshing it is to read a story with above average vocabulary, though I must admit that for a normal reader your choice of vocab could actually cause some confusion, and a trip to the dictionary, so I'd recommend toning it down just a tad, but otherwise I enjoyed the read.

 

Good work.

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