[Report This]Date: November 30 2017 12:24 PM Title: Living in a shoe
This is great so far. I love the way Mandy treats the old man. I hope we'll see more of that side of Mandy as the story goes on.
Date: November 27 2017 2:31 PM Title: Living in a shoe
I haven't been this intrigued and excited for a story in a long time! Fantastic work! Looking very much forward to how this plays out. I especially love how the story paints a picture of turmoil, stress, and suffering in this universe that is Jennifers shoe. Meanwhile she is up above, enjoying her life, with nothing but insults and demeaning chuckles to connect these characters to an outside world she stripped them of.
Waiting desperatly for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you are intrigued and like the set up. I am trying something new, and I am realizing there is potential for a novel here. I promise I'll do my best to meet your expectations.
Date: November 27 2017 2:15 PM Title: Living in a shoe
Please don't take it the wrong way, but the 1st thing that came to my mind was - omg what happened to "are you still alive?"?
You didn't abandon it, right? right? right? :D
Author's Response:
I did not, the next chapter is written, but I need to work on it, I think it's thin.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2017 4:38 PM Title: Living in a shoe
I LOVE JENNIFER!!!
Looking very forward to more.