Date: May 05 2024 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 51
Hey this was a really great story but was this episode the finale and if not, I wonder when the finale will be released
Author's Response:
Hey!
Sorry for the late respond.
I have one more chapter left that will be released eventually.
It does not conclude the story however.
Date: October 19 2023 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 50
That's sad to hear but it's understandable. Will u do another story in the gulliverse world though.
Author's Response:
Yes, I love that world.
I just dont know when.
Date: October 01 2023 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 50
You going to continue the story. I really want to see Kelvin come back into the story. Also Madison death really surprised me.
Author's Response:
Thx, glad you like the story.
There is one more chapter coming.
But to be honest, my motivation is gone for this story. So I cannot promise that it will ever receive a new chapter in the future.
Date: April 26 2023 8:03 PM Title: Are we even now?
Great chapter!
It was an impressive turn of events at the end of the chapter.
The lillies with Brob scenarios is one of my favorite, and the characters and the ways their stories are going is very exciting
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the kind words!
And yes, indeed what a turn of events. And all in favor of a certain person ;)
Date: September 03 2022 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 46
Cool, it's definitely my favorite story of yours. Can't wait for Vianna to return and have her fun with lillis
Author's Response:
Thx man!
Glad you liked it!
We will definitely see more of Vianna in the future
Date: February 23 2022 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 42 Time for fun part 2
Loving the story!
I wonder what would happen if any of these ladies got a hold of Sophie's ring. :D
Author's Response:
Thx!
Glad you liked it!
And that is indeed a very interesting thought...
Date: September 29 2021 8:50 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
always stings to read about little kids losing there lives in these stories. great chapter! so glad you are still working on it
Author's Response:
Thx!
And yes, writing about kids in agony is not a hobby of mine also. I always have to say to myself that its all just fake and that these characters and these happenings do not really exist :)
Date: September 27 2021 9:10 PM Title: The transport
Nice to see this story is still ongoing. Still, with how callous brobs are towards smaller races, it's a mystery why they haven't exterminated or enslaved them. And as for the smaller races, don't they have any ways of fighting back? At this point, the whole "coexistance" thing kind of falls flat. The fact that three brob girls can snatch and crush a guli bus full of kids would surley get some outraged reaction from the guli community.
Anyway, looking forward to seeing this mess Sophie has created boil over. I kind of want to see fight at this point.
Author's Response:
There have been many exterminated or enslaved, but many more are still there. This coexistence has never worked in the first place. It was just a flimsy hope of a portion of society. It has always been wonky.
But who says that those three brob girls dont get reprimanded or even punished for their deeds? Consequences will be there, but it won't stop this tendency of mistrust to one another.
And trust me, it will come to a climax with what Sophie has set in motion. I know. this story is a slow burn, but that's what I like about it.
My other stories are more fast paced, but I like to keep this one at a slug's pace. It gives me room to zoom in on certain aspects and to give more depth with certain characters and their sidestories.
Date: March 09 2021 11:20 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
glad i found another great story. im intrested in why lillis even bother in reproducing tho since life is so unfair and hellish for them.
this story is amazing though im loving it and cant wait for more chapters.
and fuck sophie and claire lol. i hope we get to see more of kevin
Author's Response:
Thx again!
Glad you like the story!
LoL.... I think this is the first time I see someone saying a thing like 'fuck sophie and claire' :)
Usually people want to hear more about those characters instead of others.
Well, to each his own, right? ;)
Date: March 09 2021 5:43 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
this was the first time i ever felt bad for a character dying on this site. rip ashley
Author's Response:
Thx!
I take that as a compliment.
And yes, writing that piece was hurtful for me as well
Glad its just a story :)
Date: February 06 2021 8:03 PM Title: What goes around comes around
This was an interesting development. The Brobs are worried the Liliiputians are going to pay them back for all the devestation they've inflicted over the years. would be an interesting dynamic flip as Brobs have to kiss up to Lillis or at least put a proper effort in punishing their own troublemakers.
As for Sophie, it was fun seeing her squirm in worry. She clearly cares about Madison and their relationship. I hope Madison puts two and two together though about her mom.
Author's Response:
Yeah, we're definitely going to see some lilli brob interaction with the power dynamics reversed in the future ;)
As for Madison, well, lets see how long her naivety will hold up when the hard facts are pushed into her face.
Date: October 10 2020 9:37 AM Title: Claire's latent inclination part 3
So this is the path Claire is taking. Interesting.
Author's Response:
It is, isnt it.
:)
Date: August 07 2020 4:41 PM Title: Claire's latent inclination part 2
This is getting me intrigued. I wonder where this will go.
Author's Response:
Hey thx for the review!
Sorry for the late reply. Been quite busy.
Good to hear you like it! Stay tuned!
Date: April 26 2020 2:25 PM Title: The new guy
I just read the story from beginning to end. And I gotta say that this is certainly something else. Claire's parts are especially enjoyable, she's such an interesting character. I do wonder sometimes if she's truly gone to the deep end, or if she'll take a different route in the future.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the kind words!
Glad you like Claire.
To be honest, she became kind of drag for the story after the climax with Kelvin and Ashley.
I had trouble to make her interesting again for the story, but I have a few amazing ideas still left now though.
Thx for the review.
Appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2020 6:37 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Hope you had a good holidays!
Really looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response:
Hey!
Yes it was nice!
At the moment, Im working at something.
The next chapter is done already, just as the chapter after the next, together with some more writings.
Date: November 05 2019 3:37 PM Title: Mom and I
It's always nice to see things from cute Madison's perspective. Despite what she's learned about her mom, she still loves her and misses mother/daughter time. And Sophie's moment of gentleness was a surprise, saving those tiny people. Of course it could be because she's venting the sadism and stress towards Melanie.
I rather like that trope. A person indulges their lust and cruelty in private and gets it out of their system so they behave totally sweet the rest of the time.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thx for the words Lightwing!
Sophie doesn't really give a damn about what other people might think of her.
She does however highly values the love of her daughters.
Appreciate your trouble ;)
already busy with the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2019 4:58 PM Title: Seeing things in a new perspective
Oooo nice twist man. Also, good to see you going back to this one. I enjoy reading the perspectives you bring in your stories. Thanks for this!
Author's Response:
Thx!
Yeah, sometimes I switch to other stories, but I always come back to this one.
Appreciate the words!
Work in progress!
Date: October 01 2019 10:15 PM Title: Seeing things in a new perspective
Woo! I'm glad to see this story is still going. Sophie's going to have fun with her new ability, that much is clear. It also looks like some ironic punishment is in store for her victims.
Madison is still the sweet girl she always is and while she wants to help her tiny friends, she also doesn't want them to leave. Maybe some poetic justice lies in the future: Madison gets the shrink ring and shrinks her mom and sister. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I aint leaving this story anytime soon ;)
Things can go anywhere from here with Madison.
Thx for your words :)
Date: October 01 2019 6:37 PM Title: Seeing things in a new perspective
I figured the first thing Sophie would do with her new power was shrink her boss down, and I'm glad that came to fruition. I know it'll probably be a while, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
What i didn't expect was Madison's attitude on helping New Oakton. Or rather, she's fine with helping them, but not so keen on giving them up. She's a gentle girl at heart, but with the right kind of circumstances I wonder if she'll be tempted into showing she takes more after her mother and sister than we thought... Again, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thx for the review!
Sophie cant wait to serve a little bit of payback ;)
And yes, Madison suffers from an internal struggle. We will see how things fold out for her.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2019 11:21 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Man, I just discovered this story and I am having a tough time making it through it! Every time I try to read it, I quickly bust a nut. It's exhausting! Haha! Awesome work man, I freaking love this story. Keep it up please!
P.S. I loved Sophie's backstory. That chapter was a blast. And she is definetely my favorite character thus far!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, when I started reading your post I was already cracking my mind of what could be wrong about my writing, but than I saw the real reason :)
I take that as a compliment. Because lets be honest, that's what these kind of stories are for!
Great to hear you loved Sophie's story. There is a chance I will add another in a future chapter.
Thanks for the kind words! :)