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Reviewer: wannabecowboy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2021 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

this is without a doubt my favourite story, cant stop rereading. any chance youll be continuing it anytime soon?

Reviewer: Ashentiny Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 14: Lyrics

 

Are you going to continue this series?

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

Hope this continues



Author's Response:

It will be! I promise you that!

Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2020 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

Fantastic story my friend! Please finish when you can!!!😭💛



Author's Response:

I will be continuing both my stories, soon! It's been very difficult the last few months, due to the obvious circumstances, and thus very difficult to find time for free activities. Thank you for beng patient though, everyone!

Reviewer: VirusWare Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2019 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

Hopefully I'm not too late 😬

Just found this story last night and finished it this morning. When it started I was thinking "oh this is just some cliche where the girl goes, shrinks a guy and kills her." But you've subverted that and turned it into something really special, you took the stereotypical tiny and giantess and created lovable characters with arcs and personal depths. I've loved reading it. Personally I'm not a fan of micro, or murder or anything like that, though I was still able to enjoy this despite that. I began to appraciate the story so much that I stopped reading it as erotica and just read it for the story, lol. I don't usually comment on GTS stories, but I appreciated it so much that I had to let you know that you're doing great work.

I notice you havent updated in a good couple months now, and I hope that's just a temporary thing, because it would be a real shame to see a story like this go without a conclusion. 

Keep up the great work 😊

Reviewer: BigAndLetBye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2019 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

I adore this story — my favorite on the site. I just finished writing an incredibly long review for a different story, so I'll keep this comparatively short. I simply love the dynamic you've created between these characters. It isn't pure smut, and in fact up to this point has been very little smut at all. It isn't purely love, and it isn't strictly abusive. It's this strange cocktail of all three that make the abuse and maltreatment gripping, and the sexier parts don't feel pornographic, but intimate and, in a way, special.

On a more personal note, there's a couple of qualities I love in giantesses: teasing, dominating, using, loving, gentle, possessive, obsessive, protective, manipulative, and straight-up horny. Usually, at least a few of those traits run counter to each other. How do you have a gentle, protective character who's also an obsessive user? I consider myself lucky to find a story with a giantess that has maybe six or seven of these, and the more emotionally intimate ones are always ideal. This is, in my experience, the only story that has one single character combine all of those traits, and a damn good character, to boot. Downright impressive. I beg you to continue, and soon.

Reviewer: Godzilla 2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2019 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Moons of Earth

O man what a great story mira is so sexy I really hope Anthony and her  become a little more then just romance between them very good job I hope we get more chapters soon

 

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2019 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

So a little while ago I binge read this over the course of two or three days and have a lot to say, so I'll break it up into parts

Anthony- a very likable character. He's the all around definition of a good man, making him an excellent compliment for Mira. He takes his situation in stride, despite all of the curves thrown at him and, even though he panics often, it's understandable considering the myriad of situations he finds himself in. What I, and probably your entire fan-base, really want to know is the origin of the tattoo on his back. He is aware that Mira has murdered people in numerous ways before, and yet he thinks that the tattoo marks him as something just as bad (at least that's how it came off when he first addressed it). What could he have done or been that makes him worse than a demoness who was almost beyond remorse for her killings? I'll let you reveal that at your own pace, but know that I'm waiting eagerly to learn

Mira- she was undoubtably going to rub me the wrong way at first, purely because of our natures. I side with the tinies in almost all giantess scenarios. My own stories usually center around one specific theme: how mortals can earn the respect of gods. So whenever tiny beings are treated like insects, even though it's a turn on, will inevitably make my blood boil. However Mira is proven more complex than that. Though she still sees most people around her as lesser beings, she is capable of holding someone in high regards, possibly in higher regards than herself. She's seductive, beautiful, playful, mischevious, downright evil at sometimes, but never beyond redemption. My personal favorite moment of hers is the first time she resists killing Anthony and her reaction to having almost eaten him off of her spoon. I really can't wait to see what kind of character she becomes at the last chapter of this story. Despite my grievences over her disregard of human life, I'm rooting for Mira the whole way through. I want her to succeed and be happy with Anthony, however many bumps in the road she hits

Your writing quality- it's top notch. You pour a lot of effort into description and detail, making this thing read with the quality of a professional novel. Your hard work shows. You balance great narative and fleshed out characters with just the right amount of fetish material. I'm turned on when the characters are, and I feel for them when they're feeling something as well. That's why I'll never tell you what I think should happen in this story, as you already know the way it needs to play out. Simply expect more comments from me from time to time. Your work deserves to be popular

Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2018 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

I haven’t forgotten about this story. How is the update coming? I’m chomping at the bit because this story is so good!

Author's Response:

Hey there Hank! Thanks for the short mention! Honestly this time of year is extremely busy for me as many might have seen in the previous years in updates. But rest assured I haven't abandoned the project and the newest chapter is simply waiting for my last additions and edits. Just honestly been so busy. Trust me, I'm chomping at the bit too to post more of our adventures, and I promise, I will! Thanks so much for being a fan.

Reviewer: bulfrog3232 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

Agreed. You better not make us wait another 9 months. I can't handle another heartbreak like that.



Author's Response:

Not at all! Work has me training and working for a new high level positioon, I have just been busy and the next chapter is nearly done! Not to worry! n-n

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2018 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope

I’m really hoping we aren’t in the middle of another months long hiatus. You just got back. That would be sad.

Author's Response:

Not at all friend, check the review above you! Thanks for waiting!

Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2018 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

What an excellent story! I honestly look forward to every update. What’s the progress on the next chapter? This story has built up some nice character tension and has found a current crux. The switch from Mira being super protective of him to switching to downright not caring for his wellness really shocked me. Keep this going please!!

Author's Response:

Hey there, friend! Thanks for your support and I'm glad you look forward to reading every chapter! The time between posts is about 7-10 days. They always run more than 7k words and I have to say sometimes I worry if that's too much. I can't help but write that much, so hopefully the wait is worth the payoff! This latest chapter got through my editing with loads of mistakes too, so i might take extra care for the next installment!
Thanks for reading, and especially reviewing!

Reviewer: SS944 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2018 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

You're latest chapter was simply excellent.  What I've been enjoying is the unpredictable nature of the whole thing. She at any point feels as if Anthony isn't truly safe. Now more than ever because she could he heart broken,  and now not even feel any pleasure in her favorite activity because of him. Who knows. Either way, I feel you have pulled off an amazing story and I look forward to more ^^

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2018 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope

Sorry for not reviewing last time. You always have a lot to tell in your responses, it makes the reviewing so much more interactive. I usually feel a bit guilty about not having more to tell.

Those guys kinda had it coming and Mira is right. They would have destroyed Mira and Anthony if Mira hadn't done anything. But I must admit that it must also have looked a bit scary how Mira handled the thugs. On the other hand, Anthony should maybe be a bit impressed about how protective Mira is of him.

The thought of loosing Anthony awakened something powerful within him.

And well, at least Anthony has some time now.

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

Please, friend, theres no reason to aplogize for not reviewing. I only asked for the first time in a while for it because it lets me know I'm on the right track, and followers of the story are enjoying themselves. I often, though I never like to admit, get self-conscious seeing some works doing so well with so few words actually written, either by comparison to my work, or indeed overall. I know I've essentially got my foot in two camps with this story, trying to appease my want/need to create a narrative, while also attempting to cover a subject matter most people are looking forward to being more direct, sexual, and short, but I can't help but enjoy doing it.

Also, "a bit scary?" Lol. I sometimes imagine what any of us would be like if placed into our fantasy, which we swear up and down we'd enjoy being a part, despite the sheer terror of the reality. Personally, if I watched my girlfriend do some of the things I've fantasized about, I'd probably be scared shitless!

Anyways, as always man, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope

As expected, this was a very tough situation for Mira and Anthony's relationship.  Him witnessing her kill them all, especially in the cold and uncaring way she did it, had to be really hard for him. What I didn't expect was her sudden change in demeanor aand retreat to her room. Hopefully Anthony can quickly correct her prognosis that their relationship is without saving and repair get past the cold exterior that has suddenly formed around her.

Though, I love the diety guy. I think you do a good job writing him, as a mysterious figure with unkown intentions who seems to have at least some care for Mira and Anthony, but at the same time has a bit of fun conversing with Anthony when he can. He provides a necesary outlet for some of Anthony's feelings when he can't express them to Mira.

I do wonder what Anthony will find in Mira's room. What is she hiding? Will him being in there backfire on his goal to salvage their relationship? This is so tense, I can't wait for next chapter!



Author's Response:

Its a situation I think no matter how long down the line, was bound to come up. Being faced with the reality of who someone is sometimes takes time. They may try to hide it, or maybe even lie to themselves about it ever existing, but in the end, you can't contain who you are inside. And while in this case things might be obvious, its always up to the individual to decide for themselves who they want to be.

And yes, I love the Black Demon. He's so easy for me to write by comparison to other characters. As I explained in an earlier comment, I, as well as most authors I'm sure, put a little bit of myself into everything I write. In the example of this story, he represents a side of me not often shwon to anyone else.

 

Thanks, as always, so much for reading and reviewing Kanto. It's people like you who honestly keep me writing and enjoying myself. This is all, in a part, possible because of you.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 12: Death of Hope

Holy fuck, I really enjoyed this. The mood swings and the ending gave me chills! Love the demon though; he adds a whole new layer to the story! Keep up the amazing work!!!



Author's Response:

I love giving people a that awesome feeling! I tried very hard to capture a persona that I've always been in love with; cold, calculated, intimidating, but also, caring, gentle, and kind on rare occasion.

 

I also basically have inserted myself into this story in more ways than one, half of me is represented by Anthony, and the rest of me is poured into the Black Demon.

 

Thanks so much for taking the time to review the story again, friend!

Reviewer: SS944 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2018 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

I am so glad I stumbled across your wondrous story! The interactions with Mira and Anthony,  their development towards each other, and Mira struggling to contain her desires, plus Anthony in some form...wanting to be part of it is so beautifully realized. I can't wait for your next chapter into the story. Mira and Anthony seem to have a tough time a head.  One thing I was wondering though is what happens if she gives in and destroys Anthony,  but Anthony enjoys it for the most part until death? If she even will kill him. Hard to say with the developments, however keep up the great work and thanks again for weaving such an amazing stroy thus far.



Author's Response:

Hey there 944! Thanks so much for your high praise, this is the reason why I love to write and especially share the material I come up with. I am glad I have brought something to you that you have found so much enjoyment in. Be sure to stay tuned for more coming out tonight or tomorrow, and thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm sure in time all your questions will be answered!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2018 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

In response to your response to my review...

It doesn't alienate me that it's more than just smut. My least favorite stories are usually ones that are exclusively smut, and just try to wrap it in a weak story. My favorites are well-written stories with proper character motivation, developement, and arcs, with smut slipped in here and there every 5 to 10 chapters or so. Now, I do get a bit sad when there's NO smut (I mean, that's why I'm here), but I really want it to be part of a good story, which yours definitely is.

PS - Girls on power trips is actually one of my favorite parts of the genre. I generally prefer gentle, but I really like the part where the giantess and the tiny work out the power imbalance in their relationship, and how the tiny is entirely dependent on the giantess.

 

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 11: Predator

Really, really well written chapter, especially at the end! You've got me really excited for the next ;)



Author's Response:

I'm always excited to keep writing! Personally, it makes me happy to write anything, but I know this is something I'm, "knowledgeable," about, and something I know for sure others can understand.

Thank you for your approval!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2018 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11: Predator

I wasn’t expecting this. But good chapter. It’s an interesting situation. Anthony has always known Mira has murdered dozens, of not hundreds, of people, but he didn’t have to face that reality head on. He could assume that maybe she’s changing because of him. But now she just murdered 4 people right in front of him. I wonder how he’ll react once he gets another chance to speak with her.

Although she has changed a bit. At least she was apologetic (to him) about what she was about to do. But she was right, there really wasn’t any way for them to get out of that situation otherwise, with him about to shrink.

Author's Response:

I appreciate your compliment on the chapter!

I really want to make this more than just smut, and I know that sort of alienates a large demographic, but it's what I enjoy writing like and about. There's absolutely a LOT of stuff that's going to happen in the future, and rest assured my first shot at inappropriate writing will not be my last. But I just love conflict, resolution, and the journey of discovery.

 

...Also girls on a power trip...

 

...A whole lotta that...

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