




Date: September 13 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2: Beer Pong Problems
Bravo to you necromanswer, you are a true artist. Perfect chapter. And i was right. Mandy is definitely up to something. I vote for Mandy





Date: September 13 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party
Simply amazing! Seems Kristi is a little shy. Wonder how her character will develop. Seems Mandy is up to something.





Date: September 12 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Beer Pong Problems
Fantastic addition! I vote for Christine, love the domination dynamic and it's clear deep down she likes it too.





Date: August 31 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party
Hmm. Interesting story so far. I like the size differences, so it seems like James is the size of an action figure, maybe 5 inches since Mandy held him in her hand comfortably.
While these girls seem lovely, I'm wondering if they have any hot moms that would also be interested in James. Also, if these girls are that tell, imagine their mother!
Even John's mom could be a factor. I know I'm really pushing this idea and the story just started, but since it's a possibilty, I will just throw it out there as a suggestion for now. I think that Leggy Leah is stuck in my head.
I can't wait for the next chapter!





Date: August 29 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party
Amazing start, you built a really cool world! And the characters, super intriguing - especially this Christine girl, love her abrasive demeanor. Looking forward to this beer pong for sure!