[Report This]Date: January 13 2019 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Seems like Hans just continues to put people into 'capture' situations, little worried about the 'permament' Silicence of Paul so far I don't recall anyone dying, might Paul be the first?
Great Chapter keep up the awesome work!!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Indeed, that seems to be one of his jobs. ;) Lisa and Roberta didn't stay at the spot Hans recommended could that change the fate of these ladies?
Something made Paul stop in screaming in fear.
Glad you enjoyed it, Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2019 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 07 - Twin Peaks
Great Chapter, can't wait to see what Helga and Wendy do next. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouraging words, Last_one_33.
Thank you and other reviewers up to this point for showing interest in this story.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2019 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Finally more Wendy, Helga, good seeing Sam, little embrassing what happens at the mansion... Glad to see Chapter 7, please let it be weeks rather than months for chapter 8. Thanks great chapter
Author's Response:
Chapter 08 - "Different faces of terror" is on its way. It is half done. I hope I can speed up the frequency too.
Thank you for your comments. :)
[Report This]Date: January 05 2019 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 07 - Twin Peaks
Another nice chapter. I was really looking forward to this!
Samantha has a crush already? It feels like they barely interacted, but that could be because of shyness of course ;)
I really hope there is a way for them to grow a bit quicker indeed, so they can finally fully utilize their house and the girls can put both of their crushes/bf's in their pocket.
I also wonder what the purpose of the sheltered house in the facility is. I'm still not sure if Helga is actually evil or not.
Thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
There were little hints. Yes I made them barely interact.
Could it be possible to grow faster? Sam seems to think so. Indeed they could fully utilize the house if they could grow, but should they grow larger than 5 times their original from before the procedure, they wouldn't fit in anymore.
Good wondering about the purpose of the sheltered house in the facility.
Helga is complex. The next chapter we get to see more of Helga interacting with some other people without Wendy being present.
Thank you for your comments, meereneten01. :)
[Report This]Date: January 04 2019 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Greet new chapter, Sam and family seem 'normalish' for three fairly rapidly growing ladies. Sam likes Mark, she might do what she suggested to her daughter do with Jason to him if Roy comes through. Roy has a 'large' romantic intrest as well.
Wendy's first day on the job, and two of her volenteers are 'shagging' hope and expect she will be nice and that it will be Helga giving the verbal repremaind. Looks like they have had some interesting observers before, with Helga and Wendy they should be ok.
Can't wait for the next chapter, please continue! Thank you!
Author's Response:
"Sam likes Mark, she might do what she suggested to her daughter do with Jason to him if Roy comes through." That would certainly be a possibilty. ;)
You are right in point. Verbal reprimands maybe get accompanied with some punishment games. ;)
Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Found this story looks good, only wish you would update it more, keep up the great work, let us review it more, you can always edit chapters and we can delete jerky reviews :-).
Again thank you for the effort and work you put into a great story, please MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank for your review, Battlemaster-3d. I want to update it faster too and have been trying with chapter 07. I have made a summary what will be in it. In this chapter I really have to be careful of every small detail in my eyes.
The more reviews the better. ;) It encourages me to work harder on the chapters.
Glad many people show interest in the story.
The story will continue, let's see if I can make progress in the weekend when I finally have some free time to work on it.
Date: October 18 2018 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Orientation Part Two
Very good story so far!! Maybe add some body exploration with 50 to 100 people on the bodies of the giant women? :)
Author's Response:
@tinykev49. Nice to hear you enjoy this story. I think there are some parts in certain chapters that somewhat accomodate your needs. ;)
Date: October 16 2018 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
going through the story a couple of questions come to mind:
How are did their daughters grow so large? With Helga did she and her husband/mate/lover with or without help of the labs on the island conieve her two daughters after the process and then at least every female from Helga on down is going to be a giantess? or did she put them through the process as well? What about Sam, she's only been under the process for a year, did her daughters go through it as well? Does having a close kin (mother/sister/even father/brother?) go through the process spill over to their relations? It would make sense that girls who are still growing would grow faster then the 'already completed growing' Sam. Seems a bit wrong to be subjecting children without choice to what is still an experimentail process... Though it would be harder to raise them being 70 foot tall and their 3 feet tall/long, maybe safer to have them roughly the mom's size?
Just a couple of questions, like the story, hope it won't be another two months before the next update. Thank you for your work, thought and effort you put in.
Author's Response:
@Last_one_33. Thank you for your review.
I don't mind those questions at all, I like them. Don't worry, I like the detailed logistics about all your questions. I have all the answers to your questions detailed over the course of the story. These pieces of explanation of how things work I have already written and have to check in which chapter to reveal something.
I want to answer your question why subjecting children without choice to an experimental process. But I can't, I would spoil to much. The growth procedure is much more complex and or a reason.
Date: October 15 2018 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Stumbled on to this one, so far so good, agree with the comments. One thing I think most didn't fully pick up on, Bruce and Genie as well as Sea King. Helga has set up Wendy to find out that the place she is interning for is kidnapping poeple. She "owns" the pair, if it's her and Helga likely the 'test subjects' will be plianent and cool (and Wendy and Helga will be professional, likely gentle and kind), but I sense Helga will leave for oh about and hour after proding, or stubly hinting to Wendy or Bruce and Genie how those two got to the Island. Wendy if she's who I think she is will be horrified when she finds out one they were kidnapped, two what Ming and Lyn did to them and three that Helga and her youngest captured them.
Helga will take the hate and explain as best as she can, Bruce and Genie will likely back her (espeacily since they are being treated by her and Wendy likely having much better conditions and being treated like humans!). When the stuff hits the fan what will Wendy do? My guess is folks like Helga have a plan and want Gene-tech to be a force for good for humanity, that they are likely not in a postion to ensure that and that Wendy and others they are bringing can help so that Gene-tech can be such a good instiution.
All I can guess is a lot of Wendy's wonder will be lost, I think her, Helga and others will do the right thing. It would be ironic if while on a 'recreation' hike (Wendy carrying the pair in her pocket or the like)the information slips when Helga instructs her to 'secure' some tourists in the wrong place which would prod Bruce and Genie t spill how they were captured...
So far a good stroy, thank you for your effort in this.
Author's Response:
@Ugly One. Interesting reasoning and thank you for this detailed review and liking this story.
Date: October 15 2018 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Orientation Part Two
Island in the Pacific, Lots of German influnce (Hilda, Helga, village, de Veers-is that Wollen Deutch?)-Pre-World War I colony maybe, or maybe Odessa?
Helga seems to be a good person, she seems to try to look out for those smaller then herself and wants Wendy to do the same (though as with their travel to the village Helga wants Wendy to get to her 'answer' on her own, with only slight postive reenforcement, likely knowing Wendy from her mother is already a decent soul). Hilda haven't seen enough of, but if she's in Helga's sphere likely she would think roughly the same. Lyn seems to be decent(saving Bruce when it would annoy Ming), but in an enviroment (with Ming) that is cold, and unfeeling at best (could be cruel and torturous at worst). Dr. Ming seems at best amoral, mocking of someone standing up for a loved one against all odds seems villainous (I can see Helga being a bit pissed at getting cut, then having Lyn secure Bruce and say something like "this sucks I know I will do everything I can to make sure you and her are safe and well, but fighting me isn't the way, yes your were very brave but it won't help against two giantesses, please remember that and be careful...)
Find it intresting that Gene-tech is known for a manure distrubitor, I would presume that 70 tall women (and possibly men, though we haven't seen any, I would guess a woman as smart as Wendy is she would pick up on that by now... a Man got her to the facility, men drove in a PZKW VI for her strength test, she's held a man, and LIKED it until she felt guility) would provide for such trade, along with other agraculture they would be in postion to distrubite their formulas to most of mankind in less then a decade (everyone has to eat).
Which gets us back to 'Odessa' again lots of German items, who are the Elders and council? Ming doesn't quite match, but during WWII Japan and German had some shared bases in the Pacific, could this be one? Ming is not Japannese, but Japan did have the pupet state of Manchuria, could they have supplied resources and personal to a joint base in support of their masters?
Hoping you maintain a gentle storyline with heroines and heros,
It seems that some power is keeping an eye on Wendy (shower), NATO? US? presuming all they know could they reverse engineer the process?
Seems Sam likes and is protective of Mark (as is Helga and Wendy, but those two are protective of the whole village :-) ), Mark is also going to be part-time in Gene-Tech could he be an unknowing test subject? Maybe get him a bit closer to Sam in hieght?
Lots of questions, is the island ran by ex-axis/nazis? Are there even token male giants? Why expirement in growth (other than being a story on Giantess world LOL). Again hoping for Heroines and Heros in a gentle or gentlish story, Humilation and slave markers a bit worrying, but if we have folks in the mold of Ming I can see it. Destruction, well if you have 70+ foot tall Giantesses fighting OF COURSE theres destruction.
So far a great story, like the world building. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Wow, very perceptive with your detailed review and very good questions too. Maybe you are on to something. ;)
Ming is indeed not Japanese and we will find out more about her in the later chapters. The different sections of the Hive facility will also be explored.
"de Vries" is one of the most common surnames in the Netherlands and someone with at least some roots from the Dutch province of Friesland.
I think you will like the character development, story development and interesting situations, scenes and events. I don't like one dimensional characters either and many things have a goal or purpose.
Date: October 15 2018 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Liking this story its nice to see different size ranges. Wondering how it all began and whats going to happen to the initial couple.
Wonder if Mark will end up getting lucky with Sam.
Nice world building keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Yes, those smaller are people who are still in growth or failed experiments who didn't grow anymore or super slow. The end result if succesful is 10 to 12 times their original sizes. Wendy was the exception and grew in one go to a little more than 12 times her original size.
How it all began I already have written. ;) That is a very interesting story in it self and it will be explained in the later chapters. Good questions. :)
The initial couple wil certainly get some story time in the coming chapters.
Thanks for your review, Grandmaster B.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Orientation Part Two
So nice to see a story on a site called giantess world that actually contains giantesses. That island is getting more interesting by the chapter. At first it looked like the giantess thing was kept a bit under the covers but now it seems the whole island not only knows but also participates.
It's also good to finally see a story where a Dutch girl grows ;)
I'm looking forward to see what is going to happen in the next chapters and I want to thank you for writing!
P.s. Mark would maybe have a little bit more space in the car if they ditched the childseat :P
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, meereten01. Interesting point you made about status/level of secrecy. More on that will be revealed.
Date: September 30 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
It’s been 2 months that you haven’t update any chapter.:/
Author's Response:
Thanks for interest in this story. I will try my best to post faster. I do my best for this story.
Date: August 23 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 05 - Orientation Part One
Amazing chapter love the slow paced action so more characters can be introduced and developed. Keep the story going.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouriging words.
There will be more characters introduced and with some growth scenes along with it. A lot of different things will happen. I want keep writing and want to post chapter 09,10 and 12 and 15, because I find them satisfying. But for the sake of the story and the pacing it is possible they will be much further along and I can't post them yet. I want to show them, but chapter 6 have to come first.
Date: August 23 2018 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 03 - The Incredible Growing Wendy
Amazing chapter... lovely growing description... hope for some more similar scenes... and some more Wendy "giantification"
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Tantro. You won't be disappointed with the events that will happen over the course of this story.
Date: July 07 2018 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
I started to read this story yesterday and I'm really enjoying it. Good job!:D
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, Pterodactylus. Thanks for the review. That keeps me going to write more. :)
Date: June 11 2018 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants
Nice start to the story, liked the pictures since it a closer glimpse into the story. Good to see a story with giant scientists thats a plus for me. Wonder what the scientists have in store for the couple and the other subjects also whats going to happen with Wendy growing so much.
Keep up the good work can't wait for chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the inspiring words and glad you liked it, Grandmaster B.
With the pictures in chapter 1, I wanted to exactly convey a certain emotion to the reader that wasn't possible in my eyes with my writing alone. Have to search for a talented 3d/poser/daz studio artist who can create pictures accompanying my chapters.
I have many chapters already written en know the direction the story will go. The only problem is that there are so many possible scenarios and in what sequence I should let certain events happen and make it all fit nicely together.
Chapter 5 is almost complete and will try to post it within the week. Thanks to these reviews I'm inspired to write further.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 03 - The Incredible Growing Wendy
This chapter is a growing fan's dream! Even has the old fashioned growing out of cloths niche for good measure.
I like how all of the actors have their functions and this is not glossed over giving the story a sense of realism.
Wendy falling on the big mean tank and turning it into a potato pancake was hilarius too!
Great just Barrowman and I'm definately looking forward to the next chapters as it would appear that the plot is indeed thickening.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive words, Croc. I put in a lot of time and effort in this growth scene.
From now on they're going to be more interesting developments in this story.
These good reviews is what keeps my writing.
Thanks, reviewers.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 02 - The Intern
Hmm. It seems that we will be looking through this world with the eyes of Wendy. (What a lovely name!)
While the other couple just ran off and got caught by this giantess, this girl just gets to walk into a facility that helps her. Part of me couldn't help but notice the great difference between the couple and Wendy and how they got introduced to this island and the scientist.
I'm assuming Wendy is good-hearted and has a soft spot for cute and tiny things. I believe she might be initially against seeing the giantess use the couple as a test subject.
The facility is "top safe", yet that couple found the giantess within minutes. Doesn't seem that much of a secret with a giantess lurking around. With a giant woman, comes a giant facility. Shouldn't be hard to miss.
Well, we learned that the scientist can also change sizes at will, and change other people's size too. We know that she can make people grow, but can she make people shrink.
This woman, Helga, is the same woman that captured the couple, right? If so, I'm guessing that she has caught more people before. The way she handled the couple seemed full of expertise, so I wouldn't be surprised to find more tiny people (regular sized people) within the facility.
I love the mysteriousness of the story. We don't know why Wendy is there or what will the couple face while being captured.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your extensive review Tom :) You make some interesting points and are maybe on to something. About the facility, much more will be explained. ;)
Date: July 31 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 02 - The Intern
Really nice story. I like it so far; though the grammar is a little off. Please keep writting this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for review and liking this story, D W. I will try my best to improve.