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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2019 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8: Perplexed Feelings

How did I not found this story before? I like the romance kind of story. Gentle with some action and I loved how you took your time build up Alex character and relationships. And loved even more when he run to embrace Barrie. Also curious about Lacey and how this love triangle will play out.

One question: the story is marked as a shrinking story (to micro size). Will Alex shrink? Would really like to see that happening :DD

Please, don't abanddon this story! It's really good! Thank you for updating and please keep it going. Also, sorry for any mispealing. Although fluent, english is not my primary language.

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2019 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: High School Woes

I missed you ! Glad ur back man!

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2019 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: High School Woes

hey!

Author's Response: Hey!

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 7: Are We Friends?

pleas add more to this story and your other storys you are one of my favirote authors on this site so pleas keep wriying



Author's Response: I will add more!

Reviewer: Dauetha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2018 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 5: Awkwardness

DIS
IS
BEAUTIFUL
ples, ples ,ples plessssssssssssssssssssss write more, is so good XD



Author's Response: I will try

Reviewer: pete445 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: Confused Feelings

try to cut double line raps it makes it hard to read



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will try!

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4: Confused Feelings

I've just finished reading your first four chapters... You have a potentially very good story here, but there are certain very distracting features: the massively huge open spaces between paragraphs...  Can you not somehow eliminate them?

You also frequently skip words or letters in your text, that leave one to wonder what it was you meant to say.

Of a more minor nature: breasts are plural, and whenever you are not referring to a specific one (left or right, or otherwise understood to be one or the other) they should always be referred to in plural.

Otherwise, keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

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