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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story so far.

This is such a teaser.

You need to continue with a full chapter.

 

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

please continue this, look good so far

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool so far! Any chance for some feet in this story? Didn't see it in the tags

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty cool story! I like the chapter of exposition before any actual shrinking happens. And it didn't feel like it dragged on either. Keep up the good work.

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