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Reviewer: Kostics09 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2026 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1...Awakening

Also Chad talking to a black woman and comparing the racism black people faced to ingress and humans was ridiculous and straight up wrong lmao


"Peace and love" didnt get black people rights dawg

Reviewer: Kostics09 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2026 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1...Awakening

Im ngl the morals when it comes to humans and ingress in this story are incredibly inconsistent 


In the original story, people doing awful shit to leila was portrayed as bad and Aaron beat up a guy trying to rape leila.


But in this story HUMAN prisoners get mutilated, eaten, and sexually assaulted but they deserve it since there apart of omega? Shit is stupid 

Reviewer: Kostics09 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2026 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1...Awakening

So now when it comes to omega its "kill all prisoners" but in the last story leila got off the hook? 



Reviewer: Hulksmash123 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2017 1:40 AM Title: Final chapter...The choices we make Pt.2

Whoooo! What a ride! Am both happy and a bit sad it's over, and a big thank you for writing it!!! Will there be more to come? 



Author's Response:

Eventually yes. The next saga will most likely be about the next generation. Thanks for being such a fan :)

Reviewer: gemm1mt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9...Love Can Hurt...Love Can Kill Pt. 3

Awesome man. I hope that Max's plan fails big time And Chad wins. Plan and simple. Please?

Reviewer: Hulksmash123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1...Awakening

Please never stop writing. Love your writing and this universe you've created.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind words and the first review for this series 😀

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