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Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 7:22 AM Title: Hallway Harassment, Prayer for a Partner & Diary Debacle

Not bad, not bad. I agree with WrittenVoreArt, more details would have been lovely. Looking forward to more



Author's Response: Thank you. The big problem with the details is, that I write it in a different kind of document, and it makes the font and paragraphs look larger, so I feel like I'm done dinner than I am.

Reviewer: WrittenVoreArt Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 10:43 PM Title: Hallway Harassment, Prayer for a Partner & Diary Debacle

Though the three part format is interesting I feel that each part should get a bit longer and hopefully more detailed. I honestly laughed at the whole Travis bit. I noticed a spelling mistake or two, but other than that, I thought the whole story was alright.



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'll try and take this to heart and work more on the length.

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