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Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2016 12:16 PM Title: To Save a Friend

this was a fun story to rread. I like male vore and this was a nice surprise. also great style and all, keep it up.

Reviewer: Prodi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 7:34 AM Title: To Save a Friend

Well well well, this looks like we're headed for a really interesting finale. Really, your stories never disappoint, even the shorter ones such as this one. Eagerly awaiting the grand finale.



Author's Response:

Thanks Prodi! I'm already working on the outline for the last story, but its going to be a while still :( Don't worry when we get near the release date Ill post a comment here on this story announcing when the first chapter will be coming out, so be sure to check back here in January/February!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 10:47 AM Title: To Save a Friend

Awesome story, great ending, I like open endings actually a lot giving room for more. Also like m vore or m/m and f/m combinations. Great little story. Keep it going.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 4:50 AM Title: To Save a Friend

I liked it at first while reading. But then sadly not that much anymore after Simon was shrunk and swallowed too, that was somehow a "killer" for me for this specific plot idea. I am a bit weird and things need to be in specific ways and follow rules of my mind, otherwise I don't like it. I would had liked it a thousand times, if Simon would have been shrunk and swallowed by Tommy, who would stayed unaware about it and even made fun in some ironic conversation about him. But having someone swallow and then shrunk too in a double shrink destroys it for me, because that literally "wipes" out the first swallow and makes it obsolet.

Reviewer: Miniature Mystic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 3:28 PM Title: Coming Out

Good story, as always. Been enjoying your Voreverse series and looking forward to the last story, though I hope nothing bad happens to Karey. She's one of my fav characters.

 

Keep it up, dude!



Author's Response:

Thx 4 the review! I really appreciate it

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 1:07 PM Title: To Save a Friend

Really liked the ending!! Don't bother me too much about what happened to Simon, he, but please never kill of Tommy :p This chapter was totally the best of them. I liked the ironic  “We’ll find him,” Drake said. “I’m sure he’s out there somewhere. So’s Emma.” Keep it up, can't wait for that final story you talked about!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the ending! What did you think the male vore tho? I put that in just for you!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2016 8:13 AM Title: A Small Problem

Awesome 2nd chapter! I love payback / unfortunate events a lot. Chapter had good length again. Really interested how it continues.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Thx 4 the feedback :)

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2016 5:00 AM Title: Coming Out

hope to see more soon. always loved your work



Author's Response:

Thanks! Nice to see you back!

Reviewer: grpvore Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2016 11:25 PM Title: Coming Out

Didn't know you returned here until now!
Gotta be sincere: I didn't knew you were back because without you I just don't check this page, so you can see how much I like you stories.

Also, congratulation on your new girlfriend, hope everything goes better with you two. 



Author's Response:

Aw thanks. This really made my day :)

 

And thanks about the gf too. Were doing really good right now

Reviewer: Prodi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2016 11:02 PM Title: Coming Out

Glad to see you're back once again.

This story is off to an interesting start already, so I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad to see u again Prodi! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2016 12:24 PM Title: Coming Out

I was hoping you would return :] So happy to see a new plot to start. Still secretly hoping for more ironic twists and maybe Tommy gulping down someone without a slightest idea, or maybe in a future plot. Keep it up!!



Author's Response:

Thanks zol always great to get your feedback! Who knows what the future will bring with regards to male vore, but i can promise some ironic unaware girl vore in the next chapter!

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