Reviewer: Thestupidman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2019 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well, the story was great, but i feel like it could have been way more longer, it seems to stop so fast!

Reviewer: dingbing Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't want this to seem like a negative review, because if you, the author, are satisifed with how your story has been wrapped up, then that's all that really matters. But I have to be honest and say that I as the reader believe this story had so much more potential that it does not have a chance to live up to by ending this way. So many great possibilities ended by a blossoming tale cut short. I thought there were likely a few more unaware chapters coming, with the main character possibly getting to become familar with Carly's fetish as he watched from below, still too tiny for her to notice despite his best efforts to become discovered, learning that they share so much in common when it comes to their interest in feet. And eventually he could have been discovered by her, and you would have had an incredibly unique opportunity to tell a story where these two characters are able to share and enjoy their fetish together. I'm very tired as I'm writing this, hopefully it's all making sense.

Also, some of this ending feels rather rushed. For example, the item inside the package that Jason's girlfriend tells him not to open, which he does, leading to his shrinking... this was never really explained, but I'm assuming his girlfriend had ordered it for them to enjoy together, so that he may shrink under her supervision? And if this is the case, wouldn't she have noticed it had been opened, and know to look for her now tiny boyfriend?

Again, please don't take this as a negative review. I've enjoyed the story as it has progressed, there are just many unanswered questions that we're left with her, and I definitely feel great disappointment seeing it end without coming close to reaching its full potential. 

You're a good writer, your stories are always improving, and I'll be looking forward to reading your next work! 

By the way, if you're ever looking for someone to bounce story ideas off of, chat about story details with, feel free to send me an email, I'd be happy to talk :)

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: redcars Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

very well done, love unaware plots the most

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope she finds him and destroys him with the smell of her feet

Reviewer: Oblivious Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

You're one of the few authors whose works I actually look forward to reading. I like the premise of where this is going based on the description, hoping it turns out well! Regardless, keep up the good work. 

Author's Response:

Thanks oblivious, hope it gos somewhere you like