Date: November 22 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
So both sisters are using it. I cannot wait to see how that douche bag of a boss gets his just desserts!
Author's Response: Definitely him, and quite a few others will get their comeuppances, and a great many more will get killed in the process.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2016 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've never seen writing quite like yours. It's so unique yet easy to read and this story overall is amazing and it's only at three chapters! Clare is definitely going to be my favorite character lol. I love the way she accepts her new goddess-hood unlike her sister. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, nothingness! I appreciate the kind words. Yeah, Clare is definitely not like her sister, and I think she might've been spoiled when she was younger. She's definitely going to go a different path than the one Sarah takes, that's for sure.
Date: November 21 2016 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far this is turning out to be a damn good story. I like the fact that the aunt takes naturally o this, while the mother remains unsure. You have the playful, devious giantess juxtaposed with the benevolent and reluctant diety.
I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter out soooooon.
Date: November 12 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
hope to see a new chapter and recipe soon
Author's Response: Ooga chaka ooga ooga ooga chaka
Date: November 08 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope to see a new chapter of this story soon
Author's Response: Currently working in the chapter right this second.
Date: November 03 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story!! Post more and dont stop!!!!
Author's Response:
well, its a commission, sooooo.... lol. Thank you for reading, man!! :)
Date: November 03 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hopefully the mother gets the whole dose of the serium I hope she embraces her role as a goddess. Hopeing for more growth as well
Author's Response:
well, its a possibility :) Thanks for reading, o lord slug!
Date: November 03 2016 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
So...
I'm a bit relieved. I'm liking the story. But I got to the recipe... you've got to understand... I LOVE strange humor, I find non-sensical stuff especially funny. That first recipe left me feeling strange, I knew it was a joke, yet I felt a bit like I'd just had an unfriendly encounter with someone in a foul mood. It was nice to read your comment about mounting hostility pertaining to the second recipe.
I think, since the recipe was so short I didn't have time to take it in before I felt like someone was launching barbs. Eh. Whatyagonnado? It's the internetz. It's overworked brain perception.
But, now I know WTF is going on and I'm looking forward to some angry recipe singes. I am impressed with your writing. Easy to read and focused. Still trying to balance the horny son/religious mother equation in my mind. Whatever. That shit is interesting and I don't need it spelled out. Thank you for your effort!
Author's Response:
yeah. i feel like im getting lazy with these recipes and theyre just coming off as begrudging. I may lay off for a while or do them less frequently. it also maybe be a problem that ive done MOST of the recipes here, but some of them, like the two specifically on the story here, i have NOT done. Ive always wanted to bake a pie, but ive never had the wherewithal or even the time/money to do it- whereas the marinara sauce, simple breakfasts, shakshuka are all tried and true for me, and so those have more emotional feeling behind them, yknow? I think i should take a break from the recipe thing, maybe regroup and do some cooking. seriously, the only thing thats better than gtses is cooking for loved ones. I think thats why they take such prominence in my gentle pieces- theyre expressions of love. Speaking of love, the son/mother 'fyi i wanna f your a (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LHIKf0f9E40)' is gonna develop soon enough. let it flow, bruh.
Date: November 03 2016 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear, hope the Aunt doesn't use the syringe or else things will get dicey. Best to inject the rest into his mum.
Author's Response: Heh.
Date: November 03 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story looks promising. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it continues to meet expectations. Thank you for reading!
Date: October 30 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter hope to see more soon
Author's Response: Seriously guys, thank you so much for reading. Yallre amaZing
Date: October 30 2016 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story can't wait for more
Author's Response: Das ist gut
Date: October 30 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good idea to put this out on its own, easier for the reader to follow.
Author's Response: Das ist gut
Date: October 30 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
This one seems like it's going to be interesting. I will check out the next chapter for sure.
Author's Response: Das ist gut