[Report This]Date: July 13 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Natasha is a person. I can see her and feel her. Her video has so many nice little touches that make it feel personal. You sell her arousal; it's a hot read.
It all flows incredibly well. You have a great way with action. I had a very clear visual of the movements happening the entire time. It didn't feel rushed. When she brushed her hair out of the way to hear him; I loved that. And when she turned that camera on herself to smile into it. Nothing here felt wasted. Didn't lose me for a line.
The ending especially; that was a nice turn.
My only regret after reading this is that I didn't read it in 2007. I found your writing through your painting, and had no idea you wrote all the way back then. I think this would have put into words fantasies I had trouble wording at the time. We have similar femdom tastes I feel. I wish I had written this. A beautiful piece of writing. I appreciate it very much.