[Report This]Date: October 19 2016 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Wake Up
This story is fantastic, it has great potential and the scenario is really exciting.
Thank you for writing it.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Excellent so far. I like the characters and the descriptions are nice. All the characters are very different which opens up a lot of interaction in the story, and the giantess content so far is great as well. Keep it up!
Date: October 18 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Nice! It's a pretty good start. I think the massive variances from centimeter tall people to basically miniature landscapes will help you to keep it interesting in the long run. It's got potential, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Seems interesting enough, though the English needs a little work - tenses shouldn't change in the middle of a sentence, for one thing. I've seen worse in that department though, and I am eager to see how this turns out :)
Author's Response: I hope the story has elevated your interest over time, I realize all of my grammar mistakes, but I felt too deep into he writing to want to make a significant change.
The later chapters definitely have more solid English haha
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
The plot device is a little weird (stuff randomly popping into existence or being transported and changed from elsewhere), but I like how it's potentially set up for multiple sizes and different kinds of possible interactions.
Author's Response: I hope the story has developed to your liking! Originally I was going to explain why the random things would just pop up out of existence, I still might do that as an epilogue when I wrap up the story, we’ll see.