[Report This]Date: February 01 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
This is written really well. I like it.
Author's Response:
It means a lot, I've been reading Saturn Seven since it came out! Thank you
[Report This]Date: January 31 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Your back lol... I got so worried this would end up like other great stories and die off. So happy to you continue this great story.
Author's Response:
I'm still working on it, I don't plan to quit on it any time soon.
Thanks for your support!
[Report This]Date: January 13 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 21- Miranda and Ana’s Pedicure Part 2 and Exploration
This is becoming on of my favorite stories
I really like how miranda might start to do more things with her people and I cant wait to see more
[Report This]Date: January 13 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 21- Miranda and Ana’s Pedicure Part 2 and Exploration
Awesome as usual, would really love if ana could switch it up and be more aggresive towards the tinies probably wont happen though but anyway great work.
Author's Response: You never know what could happen as time goes on, people change :)
Date: January 07 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Miranda and Ana's Pedicure Part 1
I really, really like this story so far. I'm a huge nano-, giga-sized fan so naturally, I'm having a blast reading this. I also like how you're mixing in unique personalities per girl and creating some conflict between the roommates. Thus far, I'm rooting for Lacy and Jessica. Lacy is my favorite probably because she's a bit more complex than the other characters--not by much though. Instead of being 100% benevolent or 100% malevolent, she's sorta in the middle. I like that. I also like Jessica because she's the only girl so far to eat some of the tinies. (Yea, I'm also a huge vore fan.)
Ana and Miranda are cool too. I like Ana more than Miranda since she's a tall girl and killed off a million or so people in a single footfall--that was hot. Miranda had a good start at the beginning of the story, but she seems too goody-goody for my tastes. (This is all personal preference and not a fault in the story, so please don't take it as such.) I didn't really care for Isabella. I guess I'm more interested in the main cast of girls.
Keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
This story just gets better! i hope to see even nore from you keep it going
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
The latest chapters with Isabella...o_o you described her so sexy and the way she foothandled the city...I...I can't even... I hope she becomes aware that the cities are actually cities and gets more "intimate" with them. Nice work on uploading three chapters in one go. Your doing great don't stop, this story is amazing! :D
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Really great next 3 chapters looking forward for more. One thing is ana and being nice to her city mean there wont be much action with her character.I really liked her unaware chapters and was hoping for more of her anyway awesome story u are making one of my favorites.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Lacy and Kiyoko's Passion
Ooh, three chapters!! Merry Christmas to you, too! Let's see...
Chapter 14: Nice to see Ana getting some unwanted attention, :).
Chapter 15: I'm really liking how civs continue to constantly keep popping up, and how this wasn't all a one time thing. Good job at keeping the story fresh. You're better than many at pumping out chapters relatively quickly. Thumbs up x 50 for not randomly abandoning the story when it gets good, as it has happened before (fingers crossed).
I'm curious to see what will happen to Coffee Table Land with it being in "neutral" territory and everything. I mean who knows what would happen if Jess found one of the super tiny lands... so far she's only had experience with "big" skyscraper type stuff
Chapter 16: lots of action here (good thing). I liked Jessica before, but I'm really liking Lacy now.. (as well as her friend). Awesome awesome chapter, hopefully there will be more like it.
Also, I like how there is already some tension between the Four: Lacy calling Jess a bitch, Miranda not trusting her and waiting until she leaves to reveal the newly arrived Coffee Table Land, etc. It could lead to someone getting mad at someone and getting revenge on them, things that otherwise wouldn't happen. For example, Jessica playing with Ashton City, a place that otherwise would be far less likely to be messed with by Miranda.
Oh, and the part with the candle was very creative; love seeing things like that, and I really love how Lacy thinks.
Sorry for the long review. I bet it's tough coming up with new ideas, but you're showing no signs of slowing down.
Keep 'em coming, PZ!!
Date: December 27 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Anastazja's Rude Awakening
Love Ana and her blue toes! I hope to see more of her. She's something special.
Date: December 27 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Anastazja's Rude Awakening
Love Ana and her blue toes! I hope to see more of her. She's something special.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2016 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Interlude I
Really enjoying this story so far! keep it up.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Have to say this has become an all time favorite story for me. Just keeps getting better and better every chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: December 17 2016 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Damn, I've been looking for this story and now that I found it, I gotta say, it's freaking HOT! I mean Jessica, what a goddess! "Swoons." Please keep up the good work 'cause you are a very promising writer! ;)
[Report This]Date: December 10 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
This is such an awesome well made story and i hope u continue it. My favorite character so far is ana and would to see what happens with her. The persoective change is also really good seeing how the cities react to the girls various activities.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Thank you for the story :) See this is the thing, this is going to be one of those stories that's so fucking good, but it never gets finished. I can tell. All my favorite stories doesn't have an ending. :/ I hope you prove me wrong.
Anyway, I really like the chapter where Miranda puts her stinky foot next to the city. Can you please do that again with the other girls? I think 2 girls should be good and 2 should be bad. Don't have Miranda turn evil. Keep her good, we already have evil giantesses in here. Why do we need more? Keep Miranda good, Jessica and Lacy bad, and Anastazja... you should have keep Anastazja unaware for awhile longer. But have her be good and maybe just have her be unaware again later on. Maybe make her forgetful. So she forgets that there are cities and that she has to watch her step, but when she does step on them by mistake, she feels bad and maybe even cries. Where as someone like Lacy steps on them by mistake and just doesn't care.
[Report This]Date: December 05 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Scale of Things
Nice update! Good to see things might be really picking up soon. The whole thing's been great so far! I too thought the Jessica part with the skyscraper was my favorite so far, the way she didn't even hesitate to make her intentions clear.. Also I loved Lacy's intimidating, don't-mess-with-us attitude towards Ashton City. I'm liking how there are four (looks like maybe five soon?) main characters, each with different personalities.
Looking forward to your future updates! I'm curious to see what Anastazja does or what happens to Baleares when she gathers her thoughts. ;)
Date: December 03 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Just read the most recent update. I'm really loving this story. There's so much you can do with it.
Love the idea of tiny cities and civilizations suddenly appearing in a house full of young women. Enjoying the floor scenes but also love when they appear on different furniture and things.
Great job crafting the characters, I do appreciate when an author attempts that on here. Puts some substance behind the smut. And it's a great way to build up to the crushing.
I'm particular to Jessica, she's been the cruelest thus far and the part about her plucking skyscrapers was to die for.
Hopefully some of the other ladies turn evil as well. Would be awesome if by the end they're all sitting in chairs with the cities at their feet. Demanding pedicures and food and other tasks, teasing and crushing them. That's what I'd love to see.
Anyway thanks for the hard work! Please keep it up, there is so much you can do with it!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the support!
[Report This]Date: November 08 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
I actually created an account to leave this review....
This has some really great potential and I appreciate the changes in perspective. I really like the personalities you've gone with for the various women and look forward to you continuing this one!
-TV
Author's Response:
Thank you for making an account and leaving a review, I really enjoy the feedback
Date: October 20 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Jess and Lacy
Cool that they are finding these tiny cities. Great story.
Later,
Diesel