Reviews For Eve's Toy
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Reviewer: Donnert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2018 10:05 AM Title: Taught a Lesson

Fantastic story! Please continue this.

Reviewer: BestLife Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2016 12:46 PM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

Best story I've read in a very long time. Please continue this :) Apperance of scat in the next chapter would be nice ;)

Reviewer: littleneil Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 10:30 AM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

Really cool!

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2016 7:13 PM Title: Taught a Lesson

I like the way this is going! will be waiting for the next chapter! thanks!

Reviewer: newschool2626 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2016 3:33 PM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

I usually like more character depth and set-up, but for some reason I thought just jumping right into the shrinking and ass play worked! Maybe it was the type of character or the fact we could see what the previous relationship between the two characters would have entailed if you got more detailed. Either way, I thoroughly enjoyed the intro!! I have no notes on what I want to see other than the places you want to take the story. Just hope she's very much keen on the idea of keeping him in her butt and not just "trying it out", mainly because that seems to be a weird place to start out lol Oh, & always have an end in mind! Unfinished stories are the worst!

Reviewer: Hexxingale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2016 6:29 AM Title: Taught a Lesson

Just as good as the last.  Keep up the amazing work. 

Reviewer: Hexxingale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2016 2:54 PM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

Love this so far. Can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Gizmo2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2016 10:57 AM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

Absolutely love it so far! Please continue :)

Reviewer: 101st airborne Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2016 9:14 AM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

Incredible start looking forward to what comes next

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2016 9:03 AM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

this story is in credible so far keep it up

Reviewer: vanillaTHUNDAR Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 9:24 PM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

I like how you don't get too into her looks, leaving us in to fill the blank. Also, jumping straight into the ass stuff is always great in my book. An ass man can't be all bad.

 

Reviewer: Donnert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 7:06 PM Title: Eve's Enjoyment Begins

Amazing beginning! I cannot wait to see where this story takes us. We'll done!

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