[Report This]Date: September 03 2016 2:26 PM Title: 13 inches (Pandora's Box)
You brought me this close...||...to tearing up, Big H. Nicely done!
Date: September 02 2016 12:59 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 7:35 PM Title: 15 inches (Richmond)
LOL!!! that was a surprize and a half, well I saw the whole cheating thing coming, u know HE has a guilty conscious, then POW u flip it and she fks him over!!(while getting fucked over herself in the process) GOLD! But then DEATH TOO!!! =O
so now he is in the clear =P
Date: September 01 2016 4:34 PM Title: 15 inches (Richmond)
That is not where I expected this story to go, but I suppose I can see why you had to do it to continue to move the story of Andy and Kimberly forward.
It really makes me glad to see a writer taking their characters and situations seriously instead of just forcing an unlikely pairing together. Your characters are internally consistent and make for interesting dynamics!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kudos. Within a few chapters, I fell in love with these characters and wanted to give them a good story. I think the suspense will make later romantic scenes that I envisioned from the beginning all the more exciting.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 2:54 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
In the words of Switch from The Matrix: "Not like this, not like this"
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 2:46 PM Title: 15 inches (Richmond)
Intense. :(
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 12:28 PM Title: 15 inches (Richmond)
As they say in southern Calfornia:
"Whoa! Downer."
But, that's how real life is at moments such as this. So, good job at depicting their reactions so realistically!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 12:19 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
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English translation: I honestly didn't see that coming.
Date: September 01 2016 8:31 AM Title: 15 inches (Richmond)
.... I honestly didn't see that coming...
Why you do this to me? :(
Date: September 01 2016 7:37 AM Title: 17 inches (Last Weekend)
Knew it! that or she would cheat on him while away. Figured you'd have to get rid of Alecia someway before the story could move forward without drastically changing Andys personality.
Oh and another chapter after this! Happy Day! I have been checking every few hours since I started reading this just to make sure I don't miss anything.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story. Originally I had planned for Andy and Kim to have sex at the pool, but I changed my mind after deciding that I didn't want to fetishize adultery. It would have killed the Andy character for me. At any rate, I think it was a good decision overall, because it's opened more opportunities for storytelling.
Date: August 31 2016 11:50 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Nice story.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2016 5:06 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Omg ! He's stupid ! *_* Amazing chapter !
Date: August 30 2016 4:00 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Another awesome chapter and series overall!
Date: August 30 2016 10:10 AM Title: 20 inches (The Pool)
No kidding. But this is why I am really enjoying this story. Development is making me checkhart every day religiously lol. I really hate the wait for stories like these to complete but it's worth it
[Report This]Date: August 30 2016 10:02 AM Title: 20 inches (The Pool)
Don't give up, Kimberly!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2016 9:46 AM Title: 20 inches (The Pool)
Wow! Andy's got more willpower than Hal Jordan!!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2016 9:41 PM Title: 1 foot, 10 inches (The Mall)
Really fun to see Kim being jelous now, instead of Mr Speed.
Makes me curious to see how she will handle these feelings from now on. Being so young and probably as inexperienced. Those feelings since youth, with the events in the dinner night, together with a slowly newfound sence of power knowing how much her body and size difference is affecting Mr Speed - With so much arousal and love (she feels more for him), all this being denied to sate for so many years, may lead to a explosive action on instincs. Maybe growing possessive, or more teasing, or something she can't control. The more helpless and in need she see the one she craves most.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2016 5:20 PM Title: 1 foot, 10 inches (The Mall)
you are a master of your craft Happy!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2016 12:20 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
I want the suit love this story *_*
[Report This]Date: August 28 2016 11:10 AM Title: 1 foot, 10 inches (The Mall)
Hmmmmmmm! I have to wonder: was Brooke really teasing her Dad, further? Or was feeling up Kimberly a sign of her suddenly having non-sisterly love for her?