[Report This]Date: November 02 2016 9:53 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 4)
You could always write a side story about Brook hooking up with a shrinking boy in college!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2016 1:58 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)
Only, Half the size, of one of her plugs? And, he's going to sneak into her bedroom...
Poor, poor Paul!
- Savored your eloquent descriptions; as he climbed onto her bed, slowly continuing his journey up onto her magnificent chest. The letters across her butt, disappearing one by one, ...I loved that part -made it easy to imagine- her rolling onto her back.
...all that weight, just missing him as he steps out of the way...
Great storytelling! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Brooke is definitely way more woman than Paul can handle, and she's going to show him that before this 5-part chapter is over.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2016 11:58 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)
And, here, I thought Paul had learned the error of his previous ways. But, he proved just the opposite is true the way he "Brooked" no interference in sneaking into her bedroom.
Hopefully, she'll teach him a much longer-lasting lesson.
Author's Response:
Paul does have an issue objectifying women, but any shrunken man would be attracted to giantess Brooke. He's just unlucky in that he glammed onto the first giantess he has a shot with, who happens to have very determinate goals for her tiny quarry.
Date: October 31 2016 10:30 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 3)
Interesting. Enjoyed the conversation about what shrinking was like. For a minute there I thought he went in the wrong room.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
When I first planned this chapter, I wanted Paul to seek out Kimberly but fall into Brooke's clutches by entering HER room on accident. But that changed when I decided that it would be out of character for Kimberly to be sleeping under the same roof as her fiancé. Her parents wouldn't have it.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2016 7:17 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 2)
To paraphrase the Wizard of Oz (re: his cardiac advice to the Tin Man):
"Voice amplifiers will never be practical until they can be made unbreakable."
Seriously, though; this chapter was a hilarious "foretaste" of what is to "come." That is; what Paul will no doubt experience--literally--at Brook hands. Oh, I'm sure it will be semi-innocent fun from her viewpoint! But, for Paul, it's going to be proof that one should always be careful what one wishes for...as one just might get it.
Author's Response:
Yep. He's going to get way more than he bargained for. What I love about writing this chapter is how in control he thinks he is, contrary to his size and Brooke's privately revealed personality. Brooke has stated earlier in the story, for the reader's benefit, her inclination towards a dominating relationship with a shrunken man. Only Kim knows, which is why she tried to warn him.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2016 6:45 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 2)
Oh, poor, poor, ...little Paul, he was such a good little man. "R.I.P."
Brookie's gonna have some fun now! Can't Wait!!! ;`)
[Report This]Date: October 24 2016 6:16 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 1)
wWoo! - Mr. Paul could be in a very dangerous situation here! Kinda stupid to have himself personally 'hand-delivered' to the Party at his new (three-inch) size? Lol! But, then again, this IS Paul were talking about...
Ms. Brookie might take advantage of this poor little guy, (So deserving) she could accidentally hurt him, ...or squash him with her 'inexperience' and uncaring nature...
...we can only hope! ;`) I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha, you'll really dig these last few entries, then. Paul is in for a world of hurt... and pleasure.
Date: October 24 2016 1:47 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 1)
Ooh, I can hardly wait to see where this goes. Would you consider a chapter on what Catherine does to little men? How does she handle them. Are they worthless to her?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Catherine is purely a tertiary character. I can say confidently she won't appear in the story again.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2016 1:00 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 1)
Next chapter: "Killjoy Kim" (?)
;-)
Author's Response:
Or maybe she's looking out for him, afraid of the trap set by Brooke that he could be walking into. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 21 2016 7:15 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
And, btw? Happy Centennial Review!!!
:-D
[Report This]Date: October 21 2016 7:14 PM Title: 8 inches (Going Public)
Excellent chapter! I just have one question, though. Do you mean Paul the Philippian...or Paul the Philanderer?
Author's Response:
Paul wasn't from Philippi, he was from Tarsus. He wrote to the church in Philippi. Just FYI
[Report This]Date: October 17 2016 7:14 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
...all caught up! *Whew!* So compelling the way that you portrayed Andy's upstanding character and his Fatherly composure while dealing with these slowly growing females! I found it to be so amazing, ...as they became so much bigger, he continued to shrink...
So tastefully done. Even, when Debbie's little sister Alice had him trapped inside her bedroom, very tastefully done! The fear of becoming her toy was completely terrifying and erotic at the same time!
If Pauls past, has anything to do with what's about to happen to him, ...he;s really in for it! Ha ha ...I can't wait!
I found the sudden death of his wife to be most devastating, I've been there myself, and I could really feel what he was experiencing; Kim stepping in really saving his life! And, since she already had a childhood crush, ...it was so natural for her to do
Great Stuff man I really enjoyed this,... can't wait to see what happens to Mr. Paul!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Date: October 14 2016 7:34 PM Title: 3 inches (The Widow)
Greatly enjoyed the chapter. The bird part where she covers him with her hand was great. When they tell the parents will the mother think about squashing him?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
That's the second time you've asked about little Andy falling into his prospective mother in law's hands. No, there's no peril planned for that encounter. Although there might be some amusing banter and size embarrassment.
When Paul comes back, I think you'll like what happens to him.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2016 8:57 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
O.M.G! I just discovered this amazing story! I have to say that I did, (regretfully) jump ahead a bit, ...and, go directly to the 'one-foot' chapter; then, I backed up and started reading the first chapter. I read the first five and I just had to stop and review!
Simply intoxicating. I'll have to bookmark this one and return later, but, ...this is most definitely the best written shrinking tale that I've ever read...
I will read this entire story, very slowly, and savor it. Thank you so much for posting it!
Your writing is excellent. Your descriptions perfect. Your imagination, amazing!
Great Stuff Man! I love the slow shrinking aspect, and this is just what I've been waiting to read, ...I love it!
I hope it's not nearing the end just yet, ...I'd like to catch up before you finish...
Author's Response:
I think 4 or 5 more posts ought to do it for this story. Early on I was posting quite frequently, but it will probably take me at least 3 weeks to finish this. Plenty of time for you to catch up.
Thank you very much for the praise. I don't really deserve it. I owe a lot to other stories, like "The Adam's Affliction," "A second Chance," and "Big Little Sister." I think "Micronauts" and "Stepdaughter in Charge" and "Property of Omega Pi" have way more going for them than this story. If you like "Kimberly," you should check those out.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2016 7:18 PM Title: 3 inches (The Widow)
Bravo! A poignant chapter that did not go dramatically overboard.*
*A rare talent, even with professional writers. Especially the ones who dream up the angst for live-action superhero shows!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Carycomic. I always enjoy your enthusiastic comments!
Date: October 08 2016 12:56 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 3)
I've been reading this since ch. 1. I love this story. I have to say though, Andy ditching his voice amplifier is one of the stupidest things I've ever seen a shrunken person do, its ridiculous. That and the lack of concern for Andy's safety after Kimberly lost him was really unrealistic. Dont get me wrong, I know this fetish, lots of times I even go straight to the sexy time too, but if the story actually has a plot, with characters that were developed to be gentle and caring ( as I prefer them), having them go straight to sex mode after finding a lost tiny seems off, especially since in previous chapters Kim has been more concerned with Andy's welfare. It comes off as her character being inconsistent.
Author's Response:
It's established in the "Enbosomed" chapter that going swimming with the voice amplifier would short it out. Andy takes out his voice amplifier here to avoid breaking it in Kimberly's wet mouth. If he still had it while in her mouth, it would malfunction and she wouldn't able to hear him during or after their mouthplay.
I don't understand what you mean about the lack of concern for Andy's safety, as Kim was basically haunted by the fact that Andy was missing the whole time. It drove her to distraction while her mom and bro were over. And she took as much care as she could when he went into her mouth the first time.
Thanks for reading!
Date: October 07 2016 7:22 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 3)
Wonderful chapter. I was hoping he would end up with Trina holding him . Will she get paul and teach him the error of his ways?
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Paul's image is rehabilitated a bit since his disastrous date with Kim. But that doesn't mean he won't get in trouble again. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 07 2016 2:17 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 3)
Normally, I'd make a pun here. Something along the lines of "Boob-a-licious!" or "Andy certainly wins the booby prize." But, that would only demean this fine, touching chapter.
So, I won't. ;-)
Date: October 04 2016 1:58 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
A wonderful story, thank you for sharing it. You have a gift with words.
I rendered an image from one of the chapters as it so well written.
http://fav.me/dak03cf
Author's Response:
Really cool! Thanks, GFSM!
[Report This]Date: October 03 2016 2:32 PM Title: 1.21 inches (Smallest, pt 2)
Whew! That was a close one. She almost swallowed him like a pill. In fact, if Andy ever writes a book about his shrunken experiences, he could/would/should call it:
"The Pill On The Floss."