Date: August 04 2021 3:55 AM Title: Jack
Wow! Adeline! was this a great story! I was in suspence the whole time! and could feel like I was there! I was very turned on, but at the same time sorta scared because you have a way of writting that makes the reader feel its real! you should write for Holly wood movie Scripts! then to top it off my name is Dave and your Dave sorta acted like I normaly would so when he got swallowed it really hit home and thats like when I felt scared because it I could feel that he wasnt going to come back and could imagine his fear of realizing that once he was going down how he must have been really scared even if he like me had a Giantess fetish I suppose we all would be frightened if we were swallowed for real!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2016 2:49 AM Title: Jack
Thank you for returning after such a long time and as usual, writing truly wonderful stories.
Date: July 12 2016 1:13 AM Title: Jack
This was a Great Story Adeline! I wish you would write more like this, but then again I pretty much love all your stories! Thank you, and please keep on writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. So glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2016 9:00 PM Title: Jack
did popeye eat spinach and beat the shit out of you after you swallowed him? like, you heard his brass threme song echo from your stomach, and then you got the mother of all stomachaches? Good story btw.
Author's Response:
In the cartoon, he ate the spinach and beat the crap oout of the giant. In my fantasy, he ate the spinch but not before I swallowed him. And while he did try to fight his way out of my stomach, he could not escape and had to live out his days inside me living off of whatever I ate and drank.