I get what you're saying, but she knew he was there and knew Ricky as Drake's friend, and she wasn't at all bothered by it. I know Rachel destroyed the device, but still, she knew of Ricky at the time and didn't seem to care that her son's friend would possibly stay like that for the rest of his life when they destroyed the device.

Yes, she's more hospitable, but she's done some bad things too with full knolwedge of Ricky's existence (even though she didn't know Drake was in a similar predicitment). Of course does it ruin the story? No. It's something small, and honestly, it's only my opinion.

I like Drake a lot as a character with limits in the crazy situation he's in. Kaylee is an interesting character too, along with the vast majority of the other characters in the story. So overall a good story, and again, it's only my opinion.

Reading this story, I feel like Ricky, as a character is too weak willed.

Perhaps it's just me but I think Ricky is missing a character arc so to speak. He started out weak and he's stayed that way. I mean Ricky is just pushed over, basically stomped on, mistreated and treated like an object. At one point I'm just expecting him to snap.

I mean don't get me wrong or anything, it isn't a big deal. But after all the things Ms. Dobson has done to Ricky, betraying his trust, forcing him into hers and Rachel's playtime against his will etc. but one blowjob and the promise of others somehow makes it better. To me, it doesn't, after all that's happened to him because of her. 

I feel that he shouldn't even consider accepting the deal. maybe tell her off for all she's done, including idly watching Rachel intentionally as she destroyed the device which means Drake and him at present can't go back to normal. She didn't get angry or anything, she even went along with it putting Ricky on her stap on. To me he should be far angrier at Christine, unless he did it to get to Kaylee faster, which would explain why he basically shrugged off the other question.

Overall, I like the story it's just Ricky is just too weak willed and everyone seems to just ignore that Christine has done incredibly horrible things for Drake (by destroying the dvice) and to Ricky (almost all their encounters), but that's just my one nag.

Oh, my email thing is not set up as of currently and do not hav kik, do you have an oovoo account? (Blame my friend for trying to break onto my iPad and resetting the passwords when she typed the password 2 much) And hey do you play mcpe? Minecraft pocket edition? Or Minecraft whatsoever? Lol I'm a huge gamer.

Author's Response:

Lol yes I Play Mine craft on my console. I'm a huge gamer as well xD 

You mean this was not the awesome stuff? I think this was one of the best chapters in a while.

I miss Christine. I love her seductiveness and her aggressive attitude. I would love to spend every night with her and participate in her experiements. (Maybe the new Tom character can end up in her clutches.)

That hour felt fast. To me, it was like 10 minutes. I think if you mentioned something like "and after many orgasms from Christine, her time was up". Something to show that time has elapsed. Instead it kinda felt like she orgasmed every 30 seconds.

Erotic chapter, not sure if the awesome chapter will beat this one, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks guys and dude I will leave the imagination of my character to your brilliant mind. And yes I am Into this stuff *hint *hint ;)

Author's Response:

I'm tempted to leave you my number xD but not so publicly. Wouldn't want random people texting me all the time lol

This story is just simply amazing. This is basically the reason why I just made this account so I could review. Helpful tips: so yes I am female and mabey Kaitlyn gets shrunk down while Ricky gets back to full size? Ricky had a crush on her right? So Ricky treats her with repeat and cares for her while Kaitlyn learns what it kinda means not to be a cruel sexpot? Tip 2: If you could add a female tiny named Soina dat be da bomb (your number 2 fan) as TomSpeedy absolutely takes first! ;).

Author's Response:

LOVE MEETING FEMALE MICROS! I legit get so happy. I've always wanted to know a girl that's into this stuff. *hint hint* 

Actually, 3 cliffhangers in 1 chapter. The 3rd one is the anticipation of TomSpeedy. (Might be easier if the character was named Tom.)

You already know what kind of character I want Tom to be. A toy for Christina, or even Jessica's mom is cool too. Just a toy taped, gagged, to the front of their panties and kept there all day. (The dream!)

Yeah! I can't wait for the Ricky and Christina chapter (or chapters).... :)

Looks like the real fun is about to begin. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is definitely my favourite story I think ever on this site. I love it even though it includes older women which is not my thing AT ALL, but I guess that also shows how much I love this story.

Author's Response:

Awww you are just too kind! I am glad you are enjoying this story and I can't beleive how many people find this as their favourite. Like, I didn't even think I could be a good writer but all of this support and Love has given me a different outlook on it for sure.

@ratt35

Yeah, I don't mind if you use my name. I would be honored to be in your story.

As for the personality, let me guess. I (the reviewer) am a super horny person who enjoys all this sexy stuff, but my character will actually hate all this but is forced to do some sexy things which I (the reviewer) will like.

If yes, I approve. Well, actually, I approve of any personality. I'm just glad that a Tom might be in this story. Maybe I can influence where he will end up. After all, I love giving you ideas.

@Ratt35,

More tinies?!! I'm not sure if I should be excited or disappoint. Excited becuase more tinies means more opportunities for fun. Dissapointed becuase less focus on Drake and Ricky.

Hmm. Maybe there is a tiny called Tom Speedy who is like a long time friend of Ricky and he somehow shrinks and is found by Christina! The only guy I see shrinking is Charles, but I think a guy named Tom can shrink and he can be a prisoner for Christina. I pick Christina since Rachel just loves ass and Patricia has Charles. I think Ricky can bounce around from girl to girl and Tom should just be kept by one sexy woman all the time. (Christina).

Now wouldn't that be something.

Author's Response:

You inadvertently just gave me an idea for a character to include. Due to one of the plot lines, there were going to be a few characters introduced. If you don't mind, I will inlcude your name, but I will give him his own personality. It may not be yours but you may like it so why the hell not?