Date: May 25 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely LOVE this story. The emphasis on the gross (and to many, less kinky people unwanted ;) ) details is amazing and refreshing. I wish more writers would talk about things like chronic halitosis, level of noise, and the horrors that one would experience if actually inside somebody's mouth.
Can't wait for the next part. Exceptional potential for a prequel chapter. Maybe show us glimpses of Carrie's trials, her first gasp of morning breath, when she decided to finally eat, maybe another encounter with the boy from before bed.
Date: May 22 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
this story was awesom. if possible PLZZZ make another like this. I love the tongue ring aspect and i want to hear what its like during meeals and stuff specifically like in a story. not just an overview. over all it was an awesome story.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit.
I can't say I've ever read a story that was so immersive. Your words kept all five sense were constantly engaged. It was almost felt like I was a part of that apocalyptic blowie. Have you considered doing this professionally?
I absolutely can't wait for what happens next.
Author's Response:
You're too kind, hahah. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. The sensory overload was what I was really going for because at that size in that position, you'd be completely overloaded. Next time I think I can do it even better. I really do appreciate that you got that from the story, because that's what I was going for. It is the end game for my life to be able to sustain a living from my writing, but who knows if I'll ever get there. Right now I'm just a twenty-something guy writing fetish porn.
I hope I can keep up the good work for the next part of the story, and thanks again for your kind words.
Date: May 19 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Why do you not write more? The despair and precariousness of the heroine's position, and the fury with which she fights to keep it, amuse me greatly. I love how she decides to die, and then betrays herself with immense effort - very wicked! I approve unreservedly.
Author's Response:
Not enough time, my friend! I'm trying to write more though. This is two stories in two weeks which is basically a new record. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I like that way of describing her fight to survive, as a betrayal. I think I'd have just let go, myself. Cheers, and thanks for reading.
Date: May 19 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would hate to be on the receiving end of such a blowjob... Anyway this is a great start to the story. I can't wait for what happens next.
Author's Response:
Hahah. Well I can't say I'd totally hate it because I'm a disgusting pervert, I know what you mean. If I ever get a blowjob from a girl with a tongue ring though, I know what I'm gonna be thinking about the whole time. Hopefully the next chapter is just as enjoyable, whenever I get to it!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I cannot wait to see what the next one is.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm not sure which one I'm going to go with next, but I hope it'll be out soon!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2016 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This has been one of the best stories I've read here. It's refreshing to see someone not being afraid to use the Giant tagline. While it's not my main area, I too have recently had an urge to write about that sort of power play.
In relation to your story, I really enjoyed it. I would have liked to have seen more of a conscious Melissa other than that one sentence to show she was aware. Her persona would have been developed more with a smug attitude.
Your descriptions are top notch and it was a very enjoyable read. Carrie's fight at the end and the emotional resilience seemed a bit forced / contrived if I had to give some form of criticism, but that's me grasping for straws.
Well done, I hope to see more of your stuff.
Thornton
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed. Giant isn't my FAVORITE stuff to write about but it's just been on my mind lately. The giant was more of a passive tormentor in this one, but he performed his part well.
This was weird for me, I wanted to try writing a story where there was no discernible motive for the giantess. Like, most stories come up with some sort of "this is revenge for stealing my boyfriend yada yada" thing and I didn't want that here because I wanted part of Carrie's struggle to be trying to understand just WHY her roommate had done this to her.
I didn't know whether I was going to have her live or die until the moment I was writing it, so that might be why it felt weird, because it was the only part of the story I didn't have planned.
Cheers and thanks again for reading.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2016 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Unique! I love the description. I'm wondering if you were going to continue this plot line. I mean you could go all the way. Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed! I was proud of the descriptions in this one, very much. I think I could continue it, I mean, with Carrie's choice to continue fighting it does seem to beckon for another chapter at least.
Date: May 19 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
This might seem like a random and creepy question, but where are you from?
Author's Response:
Very random, but not creepy at all. I'm from the wilds of Pennsylvania.