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Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Rewrite it than in English or find someone doing it for you. It's totally not readable in this form, sadly.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't want to be rude, but what the heck is this? I didn't read much because I couldnt find a single sentence I understood. Grammar all wrong, logic meaning, nothing makes sense. I guess your mother language isn't English, so like mine. But Geez... Or did you use Google translator?



Author's Response:

Yes, google tradutor.

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Translation for English.

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