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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nearly eight years later, and still no chapter 17? Then, this story is legally dead. Which means you really should change the completion status to "yes."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 13 2008 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

A suitably suspenseful cliffhanger. But, an unacceptably long interval since you posted it. Please, dude! Upload chapter 17, already!

I have so many questions I want answered.

Does Lisa keep her promise to return the little guy to Oatmeal Drive? If not, does she let Jennifer in on the secret without telling Aimee? If so, will Jennifer come to Neil's rescue and reunite him with his family? And, if not, will she turn him over to someone else for a monetary reward? Like, say, Neil's boss, Jessica Wilson?

Please, please, PLEASE get cracking!!!

Reviewer: hertinypal Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2007 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree that this story is awesome! Is it over? I was hoping that tracy and joanne would get to have chris back again. I liked the ending. cute litttle twist BUT I pictured scenes with him back home having to deal with a sister that picks him up and teases him constantly and a gf who continues to not see how humiliated he is by his new positon as a doll man. That would be wonderful to see.

Now what is with all those question marks SLIPSTREAM? Very disconcerting despite the greatness of this story. Any way to fix that? LOL

I will coment more in detail per chapter as I reread each part. I read it so fast yesterday and just wanted to make my initial comments. NOT AS GREAT AS SLOWSHRINK TALE but thats one of my alltime favorites, This one is right up there and there are some wonderful mean spirited giantesses in poor chris's life!

awwwwww... poor guy.

 

HTP

Reviewer: hill806 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2007 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

hi, tht was really long yet i kind of diddnt want it to end, it was fantastic. please tell me u can contine this story.

Reviewer: Knightofdawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2007 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've read the entire story its good but all the "?'s" are really annyoing... duno what it was but try and avoid it if possible.

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