Date: May 14 2016 1:37 AM Title: Oversight
As an additional query, do you know if you're going to come back to finish Detention? Or was this one just a one-time thing to get an idea out of your head?
Just wondering since you have a really unique touch to your writing that I don't see often, and Detention looked like it was shaping up really well, Jessica in particular being a particularly great (for whatever reason alpha bitch's always seem to make good GTS). Either way, it was nice to read some of your work again :)
Date: April 08 2016 5:41 PM Title: Oversight
Glad to see a bit of your work again. Excellent as usual :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2016 9:10 AM Title: Oversight
I forgot to review sorry xD
Date: March 17 2016 9:08 AM Title: Oversight
Hello,man!
I must say i have been following your writing since you started and i really liked the detention and curse story.Please keep writing.I know you might not like this but i gotta say you're one of the most creative story tellers that have advanced in such a short time judging by the time you started.You,gtswburg and other feet-oriented novel/story/ writers are why i started writing my own story even tho it sucks.I just have 1 request from you.Could you write a non-unaware story that's about stinky feet,socks,sneakers,nasty girls,sweat torture,toejam,cheesy feet and what now?! (I know i got a bit carried away but i really like to request stuff to writers that have inspired me to start my own writing.
Thanks for stopping by and reading my review and sorry for my try-hard english (LEL)
I give maxium starts to this.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the kind words! It's hard to write that kind of stuff in a practical setting. I try to write things that are within the realm of, or at least sound like they could be within the realm of possibility, if the reader is willing to be a little imaginative. However, it's hard for me to write something where the girls are inherently evil, because in reality, a girl's first instinct upon meeting with a shrunken human probably will not be make them eat her toejam, unless the story is intetionally given a setting where this becomes possible. Such as a pyschotic girl (ex. Rosie) or an unaware story, where the girl had no conscious part of it. The hard part is coming up with the setting where this becomes a possiblity, for the sake of realness.
Date: March 17 2016 2:41 AM Title: Oversight
I must say, we'll done. I think you have a very creative mind. Is Emily in your class?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
It's all fiction :)
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 2:41 PM Title: Oversight
Also if you're sticking around FT that story commission is still on the table if you want it :). Just email me :)
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 10:04 AM Title: Oversight
Welcome back :). Great Unaware story! Tom is so lucky!!!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 10:00 AM Title: Oversight
Rod Serling would be jealous. Welcome aboard!