Date: September 10 2021 2:27 AM Title: Early Guests
Five years without a new chapter?
RIP, story line. :-(
Date: January 15 2019 6:09 PM Title: Early Guests
this is great
Date: July 16 2016 9:03 AM Title: The Test
Fantastic writing. I am so eager to read the upcoming chapters since I really hope that you continue with ths story.
Date: May 29 2016 12:23 AM Title: The Test
Is it continuing on?
Later,
Diesel
Date: May 24 2016 8:54 PM Title: Early Guests
This is a cool and fun chapter and is he going to get push and trap deep in his Step Sister pussy with out her knwen it for a while like for a day or two
[Report This]Date: May 17 2016 7:03 AM Title: The Test
I like this story a lot, and often come to check just to see if this is updated. I like the writing style and ofcourse the un-aware. Please keep up the good work and dont listen to the few who dont like it. you have big fans out there waiting for you to come up with more gold. and if silver, Happy too!
[Report This]Date: May 16 2016 12:48 PM Title: The Test
Your characters are absurdly inconsistent to the point where the story has become nonsensical.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2016 3:15 PM Title: The Test
Very good!!!
Continues, Fart, Vore, Crush.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2016 1:27 PM Title: Early Guests
Love this chapter! The ending was great. What man wouldn't want to be trapped in his sexy model step sisters panties!
Date: May 04 2016 12:11 AM Title: The Test
So far, you have a very good narrative and the story flows quite well, and I am exited for the next chapter of the story. However, I feel that althought your descriptions of character emotions and what drives their decisions is on point, I feel as though your lacking in emotional character interactions, particulatly after lucy injured kevin during sex. She borderline raped him and although they may love each other, I still feel that it would be important for her to have made a straightforward apology for that, or to show how kevin felt about her losing her self control. Maybe he would feel some resentment towards her? Possibly, he would be even more afraid of her or get mad at her. I'm keeping in mind that you wanted some kinky-giantess-unaware-sex-scenes, but wouldn't they also be useful for furthering the plot and/or character development? All in all, great story.
Date: May 02 2016 10:25 PM Title: The Test
Love the story it would be awesome if perhaps Kevin rolled into a worse position in the panties, and maybe also she has a gassy day.
Date: May 02 2016 8:16 PM Title: Early Guests
Very cool chapter. How will he get out of this one? Or will he?
Excellent,
Diesel
Date: May 01 2016 11:59 PM Title: The Test
*signs petition for you to continue this story* this is my favorite story. you unaware writing style is perfect!
Date: April 16 2016 11:55 AM Title: Fixing Things
Will there be more, or is this it now?
[Report This]Date: March 15 2016 5:09 AM Title: Fixing Things
I can't until Darcy gets here. I'm looking foward to some unaware :D.
Live Well and Write On ~TheSmitty
[Report This]Date: March 13 2016 3:17 PM Title: The Test
P.S.---thanks for,at least, amending my suggestion. ;-D
Date: March 13 2016 5:40 AM Title: Fixing Things
Nice chapter. Well done. It is good that he is back to 2 inches. Love this story.
Later.
Diesel
Date: March 12 2016 10:39 PM Title: Fixing Things
Great chapter, I hope they manage to mend their relationship abit. Anyway I hope Lucy gets the chance to explain that she didn't know her husband was inside her when she masturbated .. The pity killing thing is another matter, I think regardless of her reasoning , that was a terrible thing to almost do and that is the ONE thing she SHOULD feel bad about, but everything else isn't really her fault. If anything, Kevin put himself in this situation in the first place without thinking about the negative aspects of his fantasy so he can't put the blame on her for this at all really...
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 8:51 PM Title: Fixing Things
Maybe I'm being needlessly paranoid. But, this felt like a semi-calm interlude before the proverbial storm.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 5:50 PM Title: Life or Death
The story is Excellent.
I thought Lucy would crush her husband, or swallow it and digest it, would be nice.
I'm anxious for Lucy's sisters.
I hope Kevin is crushed or digested by Lucy or her sisters.