Date: February 21 2016 11:56 PM Title: From Bad to Not So Bad
Now that's a better place to be. Didn't you say something about taking suggestions? If you put mine in the story, then thanks so much. Now I wonder, what "work" does he have to do. I guess I'll find out
Author's Response:
Hey man. I have taken the suggestions, and both will come up sooner or later, yours included. And that work he has to do... well, Adam might not like it so much, it'll really tucker him out. So yeah, hope you enjoyed, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2016 10:02 PM Title: From Bad to Not So Bad
Oh, brother! I can just picture Amanda's reaction to finding him, there. A half-angry/half-amused demand as to what he thinks he's doing. And I can just hear Adam's feeble reply.
"Would you believe I was hot and thirsty and just wanted a quick sip of milk?"
Author's Response:
Hey man thanks for your review. Very much appreciated.
I mean I would have done that, but that umplies that she is pregnant. I dont think Adam is that dumb. I know this is fantasy. (Adam isnt dead from loss of heat of oxygen being to large for his lungs to handle, he was stepped on and didnt immediatekt explode everywhere, ect.) but when I was sriting, I wasnt really thinking that sorry to say haha.
Thank you for you review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 8:19 AM Title: A Desperate Situation
Interesting development, to say the least! What's next, I wonder? A bisexual three-way with GuyGoneSmall's Melissa?
Author's Response:
Only one way to truly find out i suppose, the Next CHapter! Anything is possible there.
well, two things actually. That and Adam getting out of this anytime soon. Nope, he wont be getting a break anytime soon from Amanda.
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 3:24 AM Title: A Desperate Situation
I just had this thought of Amanda giving Adam a massage with just her feet. I was picturing her wearing pantyhose and just rubbing her feet on his body. It will be a nice reward after servicing her for a whole day.
Just curious, isn't Amanda's foot too big to bite? It's like trying to bite a wall. Her toes are slightly curved like giant yoga balls and even those are hard to bite. I'm surpriesed that Amanda even felt that. Then again, it must have been a good bite becuase of he blood that came out.
I like how she wraps him around her toe. However I thought when she said she will "wrap him", I thought she was going to get some tape or something . Lol. More like Adam wrapped himself to the toe.
If Amanda wants to punish Adam, she can leave him inside a high heel since those things are too tall for him to climb out of. It can serve as a timeout. (Or even as a bed, so in the morning Amanda puts her shoes on and surprise!)
Maybe Amanda gets generous and puts Adam on other places on her. So far, she gives kisses when she is in a good mood. I wonder if they will be more closer than just kissing soon. (Yes, I have a naughty mind.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey man, thanks for the review. Im just going to respond to your message in order numerically.
1- Well see. After all, Amanda is just living her life now with a pet/toy at the whim of her pleasure. Will we see it? i dont know. (Well I do, but I dont wish to spoil all your fun)
2- Yes. But keep in mind, Adam bites her foot when her foot is entierly wrapped around him. There is nowhere for him to move, and he will asphyxiate if she dosen't let go. And he only bites like, the smallest area possible. And the only reason Amanda would notice is because her nerves would be supprised. She's just enjoying playing with her toy when suddenly OUCH! Something must be up with Adam. Better go check in on him. ANd that blood is mostly from Adam coughing it up after over an hour of being abused by Amandas toes, its his, not Amanda's.
3- Yeah. But they're in a bathroom. She probaly would have if she had time to get to her room, but she has to get to her next class. And Adam obeying is in part what ends up sparking his realization that he shouldn't be. That's where his inner voice comes out. Also, when your giant RA gives you an order in a bathroom, its a good idea to listen, lest she flush you down the drain lol.
4- That's not a half bad idea... Maybe Amanda is listening
5- Maybe, but I think you'll be supprised when she decides to introduce Adam to your naughty idea. But a better question is, what if she gets ina bad mood with Adam? something he probaly dosent like to even imagine the horrors of.
6- Thanks, the next one is in development, along with the one after that. Adam has a long road ahead of him. Also, for anyone who reads these for spoilers in the story, the stuff with the feet will be taking a break real soon.
Thank you very much man (or lady, I wont judge) Your comments and insights are much appreciated. Thank You Very Much, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 20 2016 3:08 AM Title: A Desperate Situation
Doesn't it get a bit boring after a whole day of between toes? I mean, if you're between breasts or something, he and Amanda can talk, or at least Amanda can keep an eye on her "beloved" toy. Oh well, why should she care.
Author's Response:
Very true. Don't worry, days only half over, still lot of time to go quite wrong for Adam. And If adam gets moved up in the world, its probaly for a different reason. Besides, as far as Amanda is concerned, this is her toy. A living toy. She'd rather not that Adam get hurt or heaven forbid die. I mean if he did she wouldnt have a fun toy to play with anymore.
Anyway, thanks for the review, Hope you are liking the story, and Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 18 2016 6:43 PM Title: A Rude Awakening
Well, "semi-gentle" is definitely preferable to "full-fledge sadistic," right off the bat. So, yeah, he made the right call by _not_ trying to escape while she was in the shower. But, sooner or later, she's going to be tempted to show off her little pet to one of the other college girls she gives advice to. Which means he's either going to be shared with one of them, right off the bat.. Or one of them is going to be "full-fledged jealous" enough to try and permanently steal him away for herself!
The only way to ultimately prove me wrong on both counts is to post chapter 4, ASAP. ;-)
Author's Response:
No Puns in this post?! I'm almost disapointed haha.
Yes, Adam is no dope, Amanda would not be happy if she found her now toy trying to escape after just giving in. That is to say the absolute least of how she would feel.
And About the second half... Lets just say I add my tags accurately... Be they sooner or later, I wouldnt add a tag without that coming up in the story.
And I think regardless of me proving you wrong or not, your going to get a satisfactory answer in Chapter 4 either way.
Thank you for your review, Have a Great Day!