[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 10:34 PM Title: Working Out
Adam's little voice is wrong. He _most definitely_ should have opted to go it on his own back when he had the chance! Because, what he's going through now would have, at least, been over with long since...discourtesy of Amanda's neighboring co-ed, Elana.
Author's Response:
Elana would just make him a living vibrator. Nothing more. So it depends. And the problem withescaping a giantess, is that there are people with different peversions. And the issue of not knowing who (or what) might catch you. SO Adam might have become a vibrator, or an insole (To Sam the athlete) or a science experiment (To Shauna the science major). Personally Id prefer either Sam or Elana.
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[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 6:42 PM Title: A Run And A Realization
Why does Adam always pass out at the end of the chapter? Maybe next time you can try a cliffhanger. Doesn't have to be the next chapter, but it will be cool to try it out.
Gym would be interesting, but Adam won't see anything from his position. Amanda just likes stepping on him from school to the gym to her home.
Well, let's get this workout started. I can't wait for the next chapter! (Next chapter title could be titled "workout" if you can't think of one.)
Author's Response:
Adam has passed out the last two times we've seen him because lack of signicant oxygen supply. I don't like doing it, and I won't do it often.
Yeah. Next chapter Is going to have switching perspective between Amanda and Adam to show what's going on. Amanda has only been running her warm up lap. So Adam is bound to wake up. That tape win;t hold forever.
And It probaly will be.
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[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 11:30 AM Title: A Run And A Realization
Excellent.
Amanda coult put it in your underarms.
Make a tattoo.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for your review.
Unfortunately, not sure exactly what your asking? I'm sorry, but If you could make your message more clear id love to respond in a more informative manner.
Thank you however, Have a Great day!
Date: February 27 2016 8:11 AM Title: A Run And A Realization
With deepest thanks--and humblest apologies--to the Outsiders. :-)
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 8:07 AM Title: A Run And A Realization
Well, here in the real world it's already Saturday! So, I guess the old song is true.
"Time won't let him...HOLD ON!
Time won't let him...HOLD ON!
Time won't let him...off that fast."
Date: February 27 2016 7:57 AM Title: A Run And A Realization
it will be cool if Adam could give an epic speech about how he doesn't have to be punished and how he's changed, and makes the reader go "damn this kid". Might not work on Amanda, but maybe it will lol
Author's Response:
Very true, it will be, but would Amanda listen? Protest=Stomp. But there will be something like that. Eventually.
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 27 2016 7:53 AM Title: A Different View
i usually cant think of more than 500 words of content in one time lmao. Interesting how Amanda might not give Adam away, even if he dared betray her again, cuz he's "neat"... right?
Author's Response:
That word might is funny isn;t it? But among other reasons, she probaly won't give him away. Like why would you? He's a living toy, he's obedient (or rather he was, and will be again if she breaks his spirit)
But what will break first? His spirit? Or his Body? (Sorry, couldn't resist)
Thanks for the review, hope you enjoyed, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 1:04 AM Title: A Different View
Let's hope he stays blissfully unconscious until its shower time.
Author's Response:
No, Adam is in a place beyond hope. He is the target of a woman he has angered. No force, action or power can help him.
Thanks for your review, Hope you liked the chapter, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 26 2016 2:44 AM Title: A Fight
Good chapter, but I don't understand the "fight". Was it explaining Amanda's punishment or the /guy/ calling him a fucking idiot and all that. I might've misread something lol
Author's Response:
Fight isn't the right word, but I couldn;t think of a better name honestly. I'd have liked to call it Rant, but Fight sounded better. Very sorry about the missleading title. Still, hope you enjoyed.
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[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 7:57 PM Title: A Fight
Very good!
Farts...
Author's Response:
Maybe? Maybe not?
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[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 5:39 PM Title: A Fight
P.S.---I know you're going to try your hardest to prove my prediction wrong. But, I really don't think that's possible! :-(
Author's Response:
Oh... We'll see. I mean Adam is like a tiny breathing piece of Iron. Tough, lots of stamina, ect. It'll be hard, but he can do it.
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[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 12:34 PM Title: A Fight
So...where was the fight? She put him on her ass and the voice has given Adam a rant. A fight usually is back and forth and Adam didn't really argue much.
Yes! Tape! Now he is really forced to worship it. This is going to be an interesting 3 hours for Adam.
I wonder what Amanda has in store for him. She always is full of surprises.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: 1- the title A Fightvwas more interesting than A Rant. Oops. Sorry
2- maybe. You'll see
3- It's no good for Adam. Not at all.
Thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
(Sorry this is short. I'm sort of busy right now, not a lot of time to give a detailed response. Sorry
[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 7:58 AM Title: A Fight
Nope! Uh-uh! Sorry; I don't see it. I really don't see him surviving till the end of chapter 10.
I say Amanda is going to get carried away with herself and butt-grind him to a literally bloody pulp! :-(
Date: February 25 2016 12:00 AM Title: A Bad Night
Amanda's point of view? Should be very interesting. I much look forward to it
Date: February 24 2016 10:30 PM Title: Learning Curves Are Painful
Amanda isn't being as nasty as I expected. I mean, she would've put Adam in her sock the first night if the underwear wasn't chosen. I would think she's more sad than mad
Author's Response:
Amanda isn't being mean, no your right. But keep in mind, she is threatening Adam with a pretty serious situation: Love me or I'll give you to a girl who won;t treat you nearly a tenth as well as I do. She is more trying to make Adam hers, essentially brainwashing him. That's her plan. Obviously she dosent want to get rid of him, but If he wont accept her, She will make him regret it. But she is very sad. Her toy lied, he tried to escape and he almost did if not for her timely arrival. Poor Amanda lol.
On a side I'm thinking of putting one of the next chapters in the view of Amanda. Just so everyone can see things from her perspective and how she is taking all of this. I mean the poor thing almost lost her favorite toy.
(Also I'm considering doing this because I wrote myself into a wall and need to move time along. If anyone is opposed to this message me or leave a comment. Of not, Amanda Chapter will go up as one of the next few chapters)
Thanks for your comment and review, Have a Great Day!
Date: February 24 2016 7:26 PM Title: A Bad Night
Nvrmind, I figured it out. Mockasin is actually a shoe. I thought it was an adjective describing the sock. You wrote about a lot of socks so I thought this was like a special sock. Lol. Ok, that scene makes sense now.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 7:23 PM Title: Learning Curves Are Painful
First off, I don't mind how you respond to my reviews. In fact, it actually helps so I can tell what you are responding too.
Second, I'm not really the biggest fan of feet, as you can tell, but you definately make feet seem sexy in this story.
Third, there was a scene where she puts a pen cap on Adam's chest, and says that he has to massage her. What happened to the cap? I thought he was going to use it to massage her.
Then, what happened at the end? Can you clarify what happened? Is her foot also inside the sock? Is he just inside a sock? If he fell into the sock, how is he looking at another sock in her hand? Why would he be running to her toes? I'm just confused. I'm sure I will figure it out. (Or I misread something.)
The punishment doesn't seem that bad. Massaging and kissing toes seem kinda lighter than I expected. Maybe the voice is right. She is gentle! Maybe...
Lastly, I love the rapid posting of each chapter as well as the long responses to reviews. Most authors just say a simple "glad you liked it" or a "thanks for the review" type of thing. I'm happy that you actually engage with your readers.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! (Probably tomorrow!)
Author's Response:
1- That's good.
2- Uhh... Thanks. I am confused as to how I do that. I don't really think I do to be honest. I'll take the complement though haha. ANd don't worry not everything revolves around Amanda's feet. There are some differences to break up the monotiny.
3- She puts the cap back on her pen and does her work. Adam is being punished, there is no way Amanda will be giving him any mercy. If he wants to apologize to her, he will have to work hard, no help, no mercy. Else he'll be gone.
4- I see your second comment, but let me answer the whole thing, just in case anyone might not have understood it either. AManda put him in a shoe that has lots of fuzz in it. She put a worn sock in with Adam to 'keep him company' and to make sure he dosent try and get away... dirty bastard tried to get away once, might try again, especially to avoid her punishment.
5- Yeah it does. Imagine being one inch tall. Amanda wears BIG shoes, her feet are titanic to Adam. Its a punishment because Adam has to push as hard as he can against her feet to please her. Imagine that for a moment will you? Labor is no fun, but two and a half hours of it without any stopping is not fun. Try mixing cement or chop a tree down at that size. Doing it for a little is not easy, hours on end is a nightmare. Physically, how long can Adam give 100% maximum effort? not that long. He would barely finish one foot in the time he would be working that hard. Its just my opinion, but that's me. And the kissing thing is more humiliation.
6- Thanks. I see that, and i don't get why. I love conversing with 'fans' (If I can call all you who like this story that) On ideas, clearing up confusion, reviewing suggestions, all that stuff.
7- Maybe. I have to drive pretty much all day tomorrow, so I ight not get a chance, but If I don't there will be two on friday or saturday. Or BOTH! I have the time. If you really wan't to know I write the next chapter the moment after I put the current one up, halfawy through I stop, and finish it the next day. Ideas and suggestions/sceen ideas come in better this way, and I can accomodate to them. It allows me to see what you guys want in the story. Maybe that's to much, But I like to talk with all you guys.
Anyway, thanks for your review, very much appreciated. Thanks, Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 12:31 PM Title: Learning Curves Are Painful
So, I guess it's safe to say that Adam's Wednesday and Thursday are NOT going to be great days?
;-D
Author's Response:
Oh you wish. Adam is going to be in an actual hell. You might say it'll be a pain in the ass.
Date: February 24 2016 12:20 AM Title: Escape?
That cliffhanger tho. I hope Amanda understands he has some weird voice in his head and gets convinced it's not his fault but some other spiritual energy from another universe that has nested in his brain. But as Adam said, I doubt it though.
Author's Response:
Well... This is awkward... There's a new chapter... Oops.
But No. Adam can't explain what he dosen't understand.
Pretty much, Adam has three days till he is either thrown away, given away, repents for his fuck up, or submit. Or a combination of both.
Thanks for your review (sorry for being late with a reply before a new chater) Have a Great Day!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 9:15 PM Title: Escape?
I wish I had an inner voice providing me with wisdom. It's thinking, but also with another perspective thrown into your head. Seems pretty cool.
I bet Amanda left him there just to test his obedience. She probably knew where he was the whole time. Maybe even installed cameras and came back to her room when Adam began going to the door.
Either Amanda will punish Adam or she will simply just lock him up. Perhaps both. She can lock him up and punish him by keeping him in her underwear or even inside her. (Or is this a reward? Well it's a reward in my eyes. Haha!)
She might just take Adam wherever she goes from now on. She can tie/tape him to places in her body or on her clothes.
I mentioned this earlier, but she can drop him in one of her high heels as a future spot where he can't run away.
The inner voice said Amanda was pretty nice so far. Let's see if that is still the case in the next few chapters!
I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
I hope you dont mind the way I repond to your messages lol.
1- Don't we all.
2- Maybe. Maybe its just fate, god(s), dumb luck, or destiny that is yelling at Adam "YOU ARE A TOY- BE A TOY!" that or its those forces saying to Amanda "Hey... You deserve a reward. Heres the thing you've wanted since you were a child. Go crazy." I think those explanations are the best. Theyre the ones I like the most.
3-Maybe. And the being inside thing; depends. Aanda would like it, but she would be mad in her mind Adam is 'having a good time.' while where Adam is sitting, its probaly not that cracked up, you know, the SUPER severe close quarters. And the lack of oxygen, and if he is where I think you are implying, then he's probaly drowning too.
4- Maybe. But she probaly wont be so nice about it. "Oh you almost broke your neck? Cool, back in you go." "Oh you bit my foot? Under my heel you go."
5- Again, Maybe. There's a pair of absolutely the most foul smelling Ballet Flats calling Adam. And some tape to make sure he dosen't get any ideas about leaving early.
6- Oh Not a chance in any layer of hell, mercy is granted to the good toys who dont try and run away from their owners. There is a furry of anger ready to just crush Adam tomorrow... hint, tomorrow Amanda dosen't have any work, but she also dosent have much class. She does have a couple of hours free to do what she wants.
Neither can I!
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