Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good his tales.

Place complete digestion, it would be very good!

Change in fat and feces.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just found this one after reading your more recent story. Like that one, this one is swift, doesn't bother with what doesn't need bothering with, and gets down to the meat of the matter (lame pun intended).

Now, I'm curious where you will be going as a writer. Will you be writing more of these swift vignettes or do different pieces?

Author's Response:

Thank you, and I greatly appreciated your review of my other story. You gave me conformation that my basic design principles worked: Swift action, Tease in the intro (so no one reads 2500 words before discovering it's not their kind of thing) and a refusal to get bogged down in details that honestly don't matter. It's a vore story, not an episode of Lost.

As to the future? 

I like this format: it's a strong, simple, meat-of-the-matter* approach that I think works well. You'l certainly see more of them. I do, however, have some longer tales in the works that will focus much more on plot, characters, and inquiries into the physiological nature of vorarephillia itself. As to my development as a writer, I suppose time will tell.

Thanks again,

-InHerBelly

*Yes, i'm stealing this lame pun.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this. Was well written with a nicely executed, simple concept. Hope to see more stories from you