Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2007 2:52 PM Title: Can't Keep Those Flip-Flops On...

Hey, good story, but your grammer was a bit .... so-so. I mean I've seen worse but you could do better (Don't switch tenses. If you switch tenses then a crow will eat your soul.)

Anyway, I don't know what else to put as to your writer's block, but I should come around a bit, just ask NFALC or Stanley williams.

Good luck and respond

Zalrus IX