Date: February 02 2016 9:42 PM Title: Out in the City
So, I love the foreshadowing with his phone being dead... I think it'd be cool if they established come kind of communication! :)
Author's Response: I agree, this story could use some awareness. The interaction would be a bit weird though, since they are are so small, but I'll try my best.
Date: February 02 2016 9:37 PM Title: The Numbers Game
Great mix of action and storytelling!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's actually kind of hard to write a giantess story and also have characters that people would actually care about. I'm still not sure what to do with Sarah. Romance seems like the obvious choice, but I can't really figure out a way that isn't forced. Also, it's pretty cliché, but then again, so is the premise of the whole story.
Date: January 31 2016 11:09 PM Title: Out in the City
Yup, latest addition is excellent! I really like the detail and the PoV of the tiny people. I hope the action/reaction pace carries on and it's not over in 1 or 2 chapters. This would be great to make a truly epic story out of!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to keep a good balance and also add more action, because, well, that is indeed the highlight of the story.
Date: January 31 2016 10:41 PM Title: Out in the City
Keep going need longer chapters
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on making them longer, but the box where you write really deceives you. The writing there looks much longer than it actually is.
Date: January 31 2016 5:42 PM Title: Out in the City
Great story keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you. I will try my best.
Date: January 31 2016 4:47 PM Title: Strange Surroundings
Good stuff, and I hear you about the chapters being longer when I write them than they are on the site... The only thing I can think to do is now that we're into the meat of the story be extra descriptive.
Author's Response: Thank you. I will try my best to add description. If you have any tips you'd be willing to share then please go ahead.
Date: January 31 2016 4:39 PM Title: Out in the City
Not sure where this is going but I love the idea and you write well. Super intrigued to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! If I'm being honest I don't really know where this is going either. I just write what comes to mind. Sarah was really someone I added right before I wrote the story, so we'll see where it goes.
Date: January 31 2016 4:32 PM Title: Out in the City
Dear god please more feet
Author's Response: There will definitely be more to come :) I share the same feeling as you
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 3:36 PM Title: Out in the City
Ok. I'm intrigued... :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear it :)