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Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I really, really, liked this one. I especially liked how you described elements of their appearence as time went on, as opposed to the more typical 'description dump.' I also just generally liked the concept. I actually felt tense while reading the coin flip, imagined that feeling that your life would depend on something so casual. It's really powerful.

Great stuff, keep it up c:

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great stuff.

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!

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