[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Is this what the French would call
"shrunken man-age a trois?"
OK! Being serious, now. A second round of congratulations for being able to upload three new chapters in one day. That, alone, deserves five gold stars from me! Of course, I normally give out that award, anyway.
But, that's only because I seldom read anything here that displeases me enough to award a way _lower_ score.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Whoa! Too bad she didn't catch him hiding out in her bra. Then, you could've had her say (quite legitimately):
"BUSTED!"
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Whew! That was a "clothes" call.*
*Sorry! I have an incurable fondness for puns. Just e-mail Timescribe if you don't believe me.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well, that was suitably awkward!
Congratulations. You have joined that select group of elite authors whose stories have proven so riveting that I have veered from my usual method of reviewing (i.e., chapter-by-chapter).
I just had to keep reading, first!
Author's Response:
Indeed, I am honored! In fact, I was so motivated, I wrote a few more chapters just today. If I keep getting decent feedback, I'd love to write even more!
[Report This]Date: December 15 2015 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ten chapters, with almost 3700 hits, and _still_ no reviews? I admit there have been some discrepancies, like the misspelling of "bare." Plus, the inexplicable reduction of eight pledges to five in the same paragraph. But, zero reviews?!
"Come on, people, now. Smile on this author. Everybody get together and review this here story, right now. Right now! RIGHT NOOOOOOW!!"