Date: November 30 2015 1:13 PM Title: Hot Feet
Hm... I wonder if one of the reasons a few of the girls dislike Diana is because their own sexuality is in question...
Date: November 30 2015 1:07 PM Title: Hot Feet
Whoa Kiddo! Please allow me to play the part of the creepy internet guy for a bit. Hearing, or more appropriately reading that only two people care about you is selling yourself short erroneously.
First, I'm not sure how young you are to have not been intimate with anyone yet; but take my advice and DO NOT RUSH IT!!! I have plenty of divorced friends who rushed it and wound up with either a baby, a disease or both. Eventually down the line they separate. They always do.
So do not be in a rush to make a mistake you'll spend the rest of your life regretting and REALLY loose out on the great times that lay ahead of you.
Second, don't kid yourself that only two people care about you. Even if you only know two people in all the world, there are more out there that simply haven't had the chance to tell you how they feel.
I read part of a book by Richard Bach { famous for Jonathan Livingston Seagull } called "The Bridge Across Forever". In one chapter he is imagining a discussion between him and his mentor, and his mentor asks "What would the perfect woman of your dreams be doing right now?" {paraphrased} and his response was "She would not be here doing this." Think about that!
If you are looking for, let's say a controlling, domineering woman do you think you'll find her at a group discussion for oppressed people or more likely at a power luncheon for top female executives? Believe it or not, you'll more than likely find her at the group discussion for oppressed people. It's part of a psychological balance most of us try to achieve.
Another example, if you're outdoor and athletic and seek a partner who is a bookworm, go to the library or book store. You won't find her on the track field doing sprints.
You have talent as a writer; and live's experiences will only make you better. live not just for the moment; but for the future. Never dwell upon the past unless it brings a smile.
I'm not a wise person. I can not say turn left or right and everything will be fine. I can tell you that ONLY YOU, and no one else decides the life you shall live. If you truly seek a guiding hand to control you and tell you what a good little girl you are (as I do, only pet, not girl. he he he) then look for her doing the types of activities you wish her to do.
She's out there waiting for you kiddo.
Author's Response:
. . . Holy shit.
I'm in my early twenties, by the by. I've been living alone since my family disowned me when I was 17 (they all told me to my face that I was an abomination that should go kill itself- yes, they started referring to me as an "it"), so excuse me for not being exactly peppy.
Oh, I wouldn't rush into something. Still, though, to have never even been on a date (not for lack of trying) is kinda pathetic.
Let's see, there's my IRL friend who talked me out of suicide once, there's Choreo- there's the people who I know give a shit. I might as well not have a family anymore. Then there's my neighbors and coworkers, none of whom have even asked for my name. My landlord knows it, but I've only ever talked to him about rent and fixing the issues with this place. Then there's everyone on this site, who I know next to nothing about. That sums everyone up.
Thanks for the dating advice, though! I'll take that to heart. Maybe now I might find a girl willing to put up with me XD
But really, thank you. When it seems that everything is out to get you, it's moments like this that make everything a little better.
Date: November 30 2015 11:47 AM Title: Hot Feet
Kindly allow me to start off by stating I HATE THE NEW WEBSITE FORMAT. Where can we complain about this horrible new layout?
I really liked this chapter, as it was human to human interaction rather than typical bloody carnage moments. I'm also hoping all the girl's survive and continue on as Diana's playthings. As you said before, only Diana knows all the effects of the shrinking potion; perhaps even poor little squashed Evy will reform alive as part of the gym sock she was mushed into. { Sock Puppet - Ha Haaa }
If I were to change anything, it would have been to add the scent and taste of Diana's feet to the girl's experience as well as the warmth. Remember the first time you experienced a lady's lovely feet? The beautiful fragrance that overpowers your senses and makes you lose your mind as the intoxicating odor fills your nose and consumes your thoughts.
Hey, with that in mind, how about Val supervising a pedicure for Diana? Eight of the girls' heads used as toe spreaders as they chow down on toejam flavored pizza bits and two girls painting the nails.
Whatever you do I'm sure it will continue to be great.
Oh by the way, not to be too personal, since you mentioned you're kinda the Diana type; if you were in a position of being shrunk for a girl like Val; might I ask what you'd want her to do with you? Or better yet, why not write a story of exactly what YOU would want done to you? Sure, we know you have no interest in us guys; but I assure you that you being into women you're worshipped here and we'd all love to here your own personal fantasies more.
Author's Response:
In regards to the scent thing, I actually have yet to land a date and I'm broke as fuck. I just can't describe it if I haven't experienced it. I can guess, but that probably won't be good enough, ne? I love the concept, zero experience in practice.
You provide a specific enough request, I will eventually provide. I'll see what I can do on that one.
Oh, trust me when I say that when it comes to precisely what I'd want, there are writers here far better at it than I am. In the position of being brought down to bear with a girl like Val as my titanic Mistress . . . *drools* . . . Yeah, there's a reason I'm trying to get better at writing the smut angle, helped somewhat by my friendship with Choreo. I have quite a few stories on this site bookmarked, and if you'd like I could tell you which ones, but I'm . . . not ready to write that one yet. I'm not good enough.
Thanks for the compliments. Really. I need the boost to my self-esteem, seeing as I can think of two people who give a fuck that I exist. Just for that, I'll work harder on getting #6 out faster.
. . . Yeah, the random German(?) in the new site is starting to pissed me off. I have no idea who I can complain to, so I've mostly been doing it to myself XD
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2015 9:19 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine
Loving this story! Fantastic writing, the primary characters have well defined personalities. I look forward to any future additions!
Date: November 23 2015 11:37 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine
Fantastic story. I really like how Diane submits to Val. It would be great if Val becomes Diane's Goddess.
Since I like human-dog play, Diane barking like Val's Chihuahua earlier was a nice touch. Since Diane told Kayla to do this before and Kayla lost then reneged on her bet; will Kayla now follow Diane around worshipping the ground she walks on and being her "bitch" just like a puppy? Perhaps kissing each spot Diane has stepped on.
Evy's death was a bit saddening. Not so much for her demise as her death leaves Diane with one less tiny. Too bad they're not indestructible.
Keep up the terrific work.
On a side note, reading that you're a woman writing shrinking stories {"disappointed in her lack of new reviews"} was surprising and quite exciting. Knowing that real women exist who would like to shrink people, even if possibly only other women going by this story, is sweet news to hear. Thanks for being you!!!
Author's Response:
I hope hope hope that you enjoy the story as it unfolds, but NO SPOILERS.
Perhaps . . . I might have been given an idea.
Remember: Diana is the only character who knows the exact effects of the shrink perfume, because she bought the stuff. So there's that.
Well, yeah. I surprise a lot of people. Especially because I'm like Diana- tall and kinda butch-looking, but this complete and utter pushover. I swear if I was straight I'd own this community like nobody's business, but no . . .
Thanks for reading, and for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 22 2015 7:01 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
Apologies, forgot to leave a rating. :)
Date: November 22 2015 6:58 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
I'm hoping to see this get darker. I do like the dominant tiny thing you have going on with Val, and I think my favourite word in the whole thing so far is Ravenette. It's so simple yet descriptive, so thank you, I'll be stealing that.
In relation to the storyline and ideas for torment, it's of absolutely no surprise that I'm very much a fan of the 'butt' category, but I won't write out a whole paragraph on what I'd exactly like you to write, instead, I'll just throw in the comment that I'd like it to happen to the British girl. Not because I'm Irish... just, because.
Lastly, if you are the type that actually detests writing about ass. Can I request you do your best, and in return I'll write a story / chapter to your specifications.
Author's Response:
I love the "dominant tiny" device myself, and it does come up in a few of my other works. Currently on the back burner is an AU story set in "Silent Dance" . . . and I'm gonna shut up there so that fans of the series don't jump down my throat to finish that.
Ravenette is a word I stumbled across accidentally. Turns out an old word for "blond" is "goldette", and so I wondered how it would work for other hair colors. When it came to describing my own black hair, I settled on ravenette because I'm a special snowflake, dammit. XD
Butt stuff, with Penny. Got it.
It's not that I don't like that kind of content, I just . . . suck at it. You can read "Light and Dark" for more details, but I've just never been good at certain types of content. I love feet, and yet if you asked me to write a foot-based story I'd be terrible at it. The only thing I'd call myself good at is vore, and . . . yeah.
If you are up for requests, like you implied, well . . . I'm a lesbian, I like vore/insertion/feet (in no particular order), and I have yet to see the classic elemental trio (fire/ice/lightning) be done on this site. I'm a bit of a geek (if you couldn't tell from my references to Pokémon, Yu-Gi-Oh!, Gurren Lagann, several different Nintendo properties, and Soulcalibur). Anything that fits one or more of those specs would be utterly fantastic.
My next update to this will probably be in a week or two, given that I should be doing my next Holiday Special sometime soon.
Date: November 22 2015 9:19 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine
Definitely getting very dark.
And people like Kayla just get me, well, mad.
Author's Response:
We're gonna get a lot darker. *sinister laughing*
Me, too. I'm still wondering how to mess with that one.
Thanks for reading, and for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 22 2015 12:26 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine
WHOO! Stupid cunts get what they deserve! Kayla's logic is infuriating in an accurate way, she accuses Diana of raping her yet she had the logic "if you cum you liked it" which is an excuse a lot of rapists use upon confrontation, similar to "but she/he was ASKING for it!"
Author's Response:
Yeah, this particular chapter was a guilty pleasure to write. To quote a friend of mine, "Most people tend to be stupid as hell, holding ideas that make you wonder how they've lived this long."
Did you know that a lot of people, rapists or not, have that same logic? Never understood it.
Thanks for reading, and for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2015 10:11 AM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
I was really planning on waiting on this one till at least 6 or 7 chs in but I broke down and said fk it. Boy am I pissed I did because im already really likeing this one. Yes this is less story telling and more smut but thats not a bad thing.
I am really wondering what happens with Val and Diana. Shoot I kind of wish Diana's first plan with Val came true.
Over all I really enjoyed the story so far.
Author's Response:
. . . Why were you waiting?
Yeah, as I said before, I kinda realized that I'm overly thinky in how I write, so I tried to write more for the fetish kicks this time. I'm still not convinced I'm good at it, but I'm trying, dammit.
Only time will tell what happens between Diana and her shrunken charges. Time and me.
Thanks! You wanna suggest a possible job or torment for one of the girls?
Date: November 21 2015 2:14 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine
Love your story.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 8:01 PM Title: What You'd Least Expect
I tend to focus on the things that really DON'T matter, (or shouldn't). How old is Diana, 17ish? What job could she be holding to pay for her apartment that also goes in complience with child labor laws? (I live in the woods, cheapest apartment round here is upwards of 500 bucks, no way Mcdonalds pays that much.) I'm going to assume she was kicked out due to homophobic parents (more often than not, unfortunately). Maybe a well-off family member accepts her orientation and helps her make rent?
Author's Response:
Well, given that Diana is based off me . . .
No family support, but the apartment is pretty much falling apart and going for extremely cheap. Work is a cashier's job, yeah, but not McDonald's.
And, yup, kicked out because of homophobia. My parents (and, by extension, Diana's) were assholes, anyway.
Date: October 22 2015 1:55 PM Title: What You'd Least Expect
Interesting. Wonder who's really gonna be in charge in the future...
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 4:27 AM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
Wow! This honestly looking like its going to be a really unique story, you have a lot of interesting characters and concepts. I don't think I've really seen a girl who wants to be submissive put in the role of domineering giantess. I wholeheartedly look forward to new additions.
Author's Response:
I just kinda had the idea, so I figured- "why not?" The fact that it might be a unique thing is icing on the cake.
Hopefully I can live up to your expectations!
Date: October 19 2015 5:32 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
I saw this, and I saw Jacksmith's "A Little Blackmail 5" on the most recent page. I chose to read this one first, and I like the fact that you already got the shrinking done with.
Author's Response:
Yeah, this one is going to be more smut-based.
I'm still aiming for a solid plot, don't get me wrong, but this is a site to titillate and arouse, and I haven't done enough of either.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2015 12:34 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
I like that you picked up the concept, it's a real shame the original story didn't go anywhere. (I'm guilty of this...)
Author's Response:
Same, actually- if I don't get interest quick, I have a bad habit of dropping projects, which makes the people who actually liked them get frustrated with me XD