Date: December 16 2015 12:08 AM Title: Phase Two: Information Trading
Natasha = 100% • 91. In other words, over 9000. In all seriousness though, great story so far, keep it going!
Date: December 15 2015 2:27 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
I'm going to guess that Val either a.) felt guilty about MURDERING her so called friends (unlikely) or b.) had a nightmare about being put in Diana's underwear. I'm really hoping that Diana figures out that Val is nothing more than a vile cunt who's not worth her time.
Author's Response:
Val has a lot of reasons to have nightmares, really.
Oh, once you see what I've got planned . . .
Date: December 14 2015 10:47 AM Title: Phase One: Line It Up
I like the parts about Natasha snuggled in Diana's tight shirt and swaying to sleep. Maybe, if Natasha's smart, she'll ask Diana to put her in her panties; get her excited and perhaps thinking of someone other than Val as a turn on.
Perhaps Natasha will tell Diana that Rei is in charge of their group. If Diana truly wants a domineering woman than Rei is a better choice than homocidal Val.
If Anne is going to remain confined (fingers crossed she will) then dropping her in Diana's used sweat socks which would then be knotted and hung up out of the way so she's left to smell Diana's foot fragrance (calling a woman's foot fragrance her foot "odor" is such a misnomer in my opinion. The scent is too beautiful to be called an odor) would be nice. Her knotted inside one sock, then that sock knotted inside the other so the air is heavy with the smell of Diana's feet and exscape is simply impossible for her.
Rather than hang her up, put the socks with her knotted inside back in the glass. That should really concentrate the fragrance and eliminate any fresh air from her nose and lungs. This is just a suggestion; but please keep the story going the way you want.
You know, Natasha could always train Diana to respond to her hand jestures like a lion or tiger trainer. SNAP that tiny whip! Imagine Natasha sitting atop Diana's head on a combination head harness - saddle, pulling her rains and kicking her spurs.
Author's Response:
I like the way you think. Really, I do.
That's one way of going about things. Will Rei reach the same conclusion you did with the information that Diana likes being put to task?
Oh, there's a plan for Anne, alright. In fact, funny thing, even if I'm flooded with requests to save everyone else from being punished, Anne still has at least one more thing coming. So yeah.
You are a foot guy, geez. I've never seen someone so . . . enthusiastic about something before. It's pretty refreshing to see someone who isn't all subdued and wannabe cool. You know what you want and go for it.
Now I'll have that picture in my head all day.
Date: December 13 2015 12:59 PM Title: Phase One: Line It Up
Please keep Natasha alive.
On a related note, Diana could have Val love her all she wants, so long as she has somewhere dark and secluded, like a lock box. Val would succumb eventually.
Author's Response:
You'd be surprised what the plan is. It's dirty, it's fucked up, and it's hilarious, and I can't wait to get there.
Oh my, you REALLY don't like Val, do you? Something about killing Penny made her dead to you. I'm guessing.
Date: December 11 2015 9:06 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
Oops, I wrote Trish instead of Diana. I copy clip the stories here into word documents so I can adjust the page and spacing of the paragraphs. In other words it's easier for me to read the stories from word than on this page.
Whenever I do, I change names when they remind me of someone I know. Imaging reading a hot, sexy story and one of the lovers has one of your parents names. You get my drift.
So with that in mind, I change the name from Diana to a, shall we say less family oriented Trish.
Author's Response:
OH. That makes sense.
Disregard the last part of my response, then.
Date: December 11 2015 8:39 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
Penny flatened, well like a Penny. Did Diana really go to bed just now with Penny's remains on her butt cheek? Cruel, yet intriguing image.
It sure was a violent chapter. Two killed in the span of a few minutes.
Now you say you relate A LOT to Diana. So I ask, do your feet really get so sweaty they could drown a tiny? HA HA HA HA HA You should bottle it, lots of people would love to kick back with a nice refreshing bottle of Lady's Foot Sweat!!!!!
Now Rei is taking over the remaining 7 Samuria. Considering Diana's recent murder spree, perhaps Blake's 7 would be more appropo {70's-80's sci-fi} She better watch it, leaders don't seem to last long around Trish. But hey, she even inspired Becky to stand up. Will Rei figure out Diana wants to be a tiny for a domineering girlfriend?
Val is a real bitch. Did you model her after someone in particular?
Trish seems to be breaking down with a conscience. Maybe being bitched around has it's limits with her. After all, she probably wants some physical domination as much as the verbal humiliation cast upon her. Hard to do with a single tiny; but 7 or 8 Liiliputions could always tie her down and have their way.
Keep it up, you're on a marathon roll with this story.
Author's Response:
I hadn't even THOUGHT of that . . . nnf.
. . . Yeah, actually, I sweat a lot. Back before I came out and my parents disowned me, they bought me one track uniform for every day of the week, because they thought track met every day. So, I still own seven shirts and shorts with my school's logo. Back on topic . . . I wouldn't even know where to start with that one.
At this point I'm starting to feel silly for naming characters that are just gonna die stupidly fast. And that is quite the question, isn't it? Bigger one: who do you think is going to take on the role of potential Val replacement?
Yes, actually. There was this girl I knew that my friends called the Empress. She bitched me around, made me think I had a chance, and then . . . kinda stomped on my heart, really. There's a reason my left hand is still fucked up, to this day.
*blushes* I LIKE that mental image. Thank you for that.
Why, thanks!
Question: who the fuck is Trish? I get it from the context, but . . .
Date: December 11 2015 1:01 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
why you gotta do this to me?
I honestly would've liked to see Penny live a bit longer but you gotta do what you gotta do, I guess. *sob* MY WAIFUUUUU!
Author's Response:
Did you even read the name of the chapter?
Yeah, surprisingly Penny could have been saved, she's marked here in my notes with a question mark which tells me that her death isn't completely necessary to the plot. The only request I got with her changed the WAY she died, not that it happened (originally she was gonna be eaten, too).
It's okay, it's okay. Actually, the fuck am I saying, I'm turning into a regular . . . what is the name of that guy who does Game of Thrones?
Date: December 11 2015 12:56 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
*begins sobbing uncontrollably* *runs facefirst into a wall*
[Report This]Date: December 11 2015 10:48 AM Title: From Bad to Worse
Ah, you remembered! :)
Now, my part of the bargain I believe was to do a commission for you. I was thinking Mai / Shadow Realm for Yu-Gi-Oh, maybe a bit of the Harpy Lady Sisters.
You'll have to elaborate on what you mean by the elements, I could totally go for something a bit fantasy realm. If you're looking for specific character types, I've a decent idea of what to write.
However, if you have a bit of time, could you have a look at Thornton Chronicles. It's an old enough story that I put up, but it does have a bit of dominant F/f on it with Alisha. Anyways, let me know what your thoughts would be and I'll get started on your story right away. :)
Thornton
Author's Response:
Never would have put it out of my mind.
Sounds . . . interesting. I admit, it's been a long time since I've watched DM (the first series of Yu-Gi-Oh), but I remember Mai and her Harpies.
It's a character archetype trio, that is also usually accompanied by the actual elements: Fire is Passionate, someone who gives in easily to emotion (regardless of what that emotion is, usually anger or love); Ice is Detachment, someone who is either emotionless or lacks empathy (meaning that the character is either a sympathetic one who's been traumatized into being a shell, or a villainous one who is sadistic, psychopathic, selfish, or some combination thereof); Lightning is Directness, someone with highly straightforward goals, who typically knows what to do and how to achieve said goals, usually at the expense of everything else.
I'll give it a look.
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 8:09 PM Title: Dramatic Irony
I'm vaguely certain at least 3 people (the shrunken ones) are making it out of this alive (four if Diana is okay with sex slavery and vengeance) VENGEANCE, I SAY! It's funny, this is one of the first stories where I've never actually wanted most characters to die. Also, Natasha is a Woobie if I've ever seen one.
Author's Response:
Ooh, I think you'll have fun tracking your guess.
I write sympathetic bitches, what can I say?
Yeah. In a few early drafts, I wondered whether to give her a tragic death, let her live by the skin of her teeth, or if I was actually going to give her a happy ending. I don't wonder anymore.
Date: December 09 2015 3:48 PM Title: Dramatic Irony
I hope Diana minds being used. Man do I love when bitches get what's coming to them.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm pretty sure that this story will either make your day or completely piss you off by the end.
Just the way this story is going so far.
Date: December 09 2015 12:11 PM Title: Dramatic Irony
Suspense grows as to whether Val can retain control now that Penny knows Diana is looking to be loved.
Wish there was a bit more discription of being between Diana's breasts for the day. The warmth, the scent of Diana, the feeling of embrace. The nautical analogy is nice. Conjures thoughts of a giantess's bra as a hammock for a tiny sailor like Natasha.
Diana should just put Anne and her glass on a bedroom shelf and forget about her. Let Anne look on as Diana goes about life. Anything that happens in the bedroom with Val or anyone else Anne won't be able to tell to the others. Just look on day after day. I mysel prefer the old hanging birdcage for tinies, and hope to end up in some woman's myself one day
As far as important small facts, Diana did inform Natasha, and by entension the group, that she gets off "TO", not "WITH" Val. Any girl(s) willing to be "WITH" Diana will have a big friend on their side and over Val.
Youl lost me with your last reply, about hearing my reply before. Did you mean when I side great work, keep it up?
Author's Response:
Oh, just you wait. There's something big in store.
{*description} To be honest, I don't think I'm all that good at descriptions. I tried a dozen times to attempt to make a description for it, didn't like any of them, said "fuck it" and this is the result. Also, that image is really Sweet Dream Fuel.
That, actually, is a pretty cool idea. I actually have something else in mind for little Anne for the moment, but it's a good idea.
There's the theorycrafting! There's using your noodle!
No, I'm pretty sure someone else brought up the whole "real women exist who might enjoy being a giantess" thing before. I'm not sure where I've seen it before, but I have.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 11:43 AM Title: Dramatic Irony
another good chapter! And who the hell draws narrow hearts. I was trying to figure out what valv meant lol.
Author's Response:
A lot of people just can't draw the heart shape. I've seen that shape smushed into a pancake, made to look like a V, and just straight-up deformed into every shape imaginable.
And thanks!
Date: December 08 2015 12:21 AM Title: Anticipation
You're really knocking these out. The plot thickens! It's nice to see substance with a story, any story, rather than just straight out "Giantess crushes all. The End" type stories.
So Penny is the smart one. Perhaps she can be a REAL BITCH MISTRESS to Diana??? Maybe without faking it!!!!! Val's just a user and conniving. Diana should start using her back in a punishing sort of way; but that's just because I don't like liars.
I think your last reply, where you said you'd have no problem swallowing a hot babe or being swallowed by a hot babe made my week. It reminded me of someone I use to chat with. If we ever chat in a private forum I'll tell you a little about her. For now, knowing that there are women out there who want to swallow tinies (albeit other women in your case) gives all us wanna-be tinies something to dream about.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I do plot. Choreo's helping me with the FUCK YEAH aspect, but I can do plot.
Maybe, maybe, maybe. Bah.
I'm glad I made you happy. Although I swear I've gotten this response before.
Date: December 07 2015 2:10 PM Title: Accelerated Agenda
DARN! Story got violent!!! Makes me wonder, since you associate, allbeit slightly, to Diana, do you fantasize about swallowing shrunken women?
I love the sock lint from between Diana's toes. I have to admit, being a connoisseur of women's feet I was hoping Andrea would be able to keep it down. "YUMMY SCRUMPTIOUS!"
It's great that Anne is still trapped in the glass. Nice touch leaving her in there.
Since Diana did in fact swallow Andrea alive, are we going to read any Diana dumping out Andrea in the toilet action. Perhaps into a small glass jar and then sealed up and put on display for the other girls to gasp at in horror of their own fates.
I prefer not to make to many suggestions to you, since I like reading what you have in mind all of your own fancy. Great Story!
Author's Response:
. . . Yeah. Things are building up to the more vicious parts, and if the ending goes the way I originally planned (ie, no requests that impact the plot) we're gonna be short a few girls really soon. Also, I don't relate slightly to Diana: I relate a LOT to Diana. She's pretty much tit-for-tat who I was at 17, down to her height. And yes, I'd love to gulp down a hot woman just as much as I'd want to go down her throat.
Well, it's canon that the perfume makes you unable to keep anything down, period. Even if it's something absolutely delicious and nutritious, the perfume will keep you from being able to hold it down while you're under its effects.
Well, she hasn't been let out yet, so obviously she'd still be in there.
Diana's actually only being violent on Val's orders, and in fact only came up with the footrub from the twins and the food torture thing on her own. Everything else was on request from Val, in order to appease her crush. Before you ask, Val probably wouldn't ask Diana to do that, because it's a reminder that Diana could do it to her, too.
Why, thank you for your review, and I hope you still like later.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2015 7:35 AM Title: Accelerated Agenda
Well, I would prefer Natalie survives. I don't think Val is too angry at her and she already suffers from not being able to talk.
The rest of this is merely opinion based. I can't wait to read more and want to see where your own creativity takes this story. This is just what I thought up could happen.
1) I think Val should die either by refusing to do something actually sexual with Diana and then Diana realizes she isn't liked back at all, or the other girls catch on to what Val is doing and "push" her off the table.
2) you should split the (twins?) deaths apart, so one dies and the other is like a broken toy without their other half.
Again, I can't wait to read more and see what turns this story takes. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
*Natasha
Sorry, had to. Anyway, about the rest of it:
Natasha is escaping Val's ire for the moment for exactly that reason. Given how mad with power she's getting though, it's only a matter of time before she starts turning to the girls who haven't done anything wrong yet. Whether she's stopped before, at, or after that point remains to be seen, if she's even stopped at all . . .
You'll be getting a glimpse of what's been going on behind the scenes with Val pretty soon, actually, and I'm debating how much of Sunday I should skip over to get to that. Decisions, decisions . . .
Yeah, Lynn and Becky are twins. Regarding the deaths of one or both of them . . . it's a secret!
Date: December 06 2015 2:46 PM Title: Accelerated Agenda
If it's not any trouble to request something, I'd like Natasha to get a piece of paper and chunk of pencil lead at some point. I'd also appreciate if the bichiest girl left out of all of them ended up being forced into a life of sex slavery to Diana.
If you could make a list of the remaining girls, 1 being "following the crowd out of fear" and 5 being "sadistic megabitch" that'd be great.
Author's Response:
No problem at all, actually.
Yeah, I've been slacking on Natasha's POV, precisely because I'm trying to figure out how best to represent her.
Scaling down--
Anne: 5 (directed most of everyone else's raw bitchiness at Diana, and had enough of her own to power fifty alpha bitches)
Penny: 5 (actual sadist, straight-up enjoys fucking with people)
Val: 5 (safe for now because of Diana's crush on her, but has a mean streak a mile wide, and is extremely maniuplative to boot)
Rei: 4 (surprisingly kinda mean in general, but doesn't really care who she's being mean to)
Kayla: 3 (isn't really doing this for kicks- she's actually kinda nice, outside her rampant homophobia)
Tamara: 3 (going along with this to fit in, plus it's easy and cathartic)
Lynn: 2 (legitimately believes what Anne tells her, but only acts on it because it's Anne telling her to do it- she hero-worships the more popular girl)
Natasha: 2 (would rather be the bully than the girl getting picked on, and sticks with Anne for safety and popularity)
Becky: 1 (does whatever her sister is doing, and is scared of Anne)
Paris: 1 (has moral convictions, but is completely terrified of getting Anne angry, and is in fact the most likely person to survive barring Val if Diana grows a conscience quick)
Date: December 06 2015 6:01 AM Title: Accelerated Agenda
I hope what Diane wants to hear is all the girls having an orgy together (at least, that's what I'd want to hear, heh...) But why are you so gung ho about killing all of them? I can gurantee you that Andrea never regretted what she did. You know what might be fun is to take one or more of the girls, put them in solitary for a week, and see how that works out for their humility. An added bonus would be an offhand remark that while they were locked up, everyone else was killed.
Author's Response:
I'm only so set on it because that was the original plan.
I'm getting a lot of "maybe" and "it'd be cool if", but I'm not deviating from the plan unless I get an honest-to-goodness request, and . . . I only have two of those. Both of which just changed the way the espective victims died.
Thanks for the review, though, and that is a cool idea.
Date: December 03 2015 9:41 AM Title: Revelation
DANG! The story turned really dark, fast. Val's quite the evil little bitch. I was hoping she would actually like Diana back and not simply pretend to. Guess I'm just a romantic at heart.
I was surprised Val just wants Andrea killed, and so quickly. Is Diana just going to smash her with her fist? One would think that Val would want Andrea to suffer, maybe stuffed up Diana's butt and left there for good where the effects of the shrinking potion will keep her alive indefinitely (ok, that's my personal fantasy; but I am both a pervert and worshipper of the female derriere).
I'm also a bit suprised Val hasn't used Diana for her own personal pleasure. Let's say sitting on Diana's lips and gettting tongued while Diana pleasured herself earlier.
Hmmm, perhaps Val could order Diana to make all the other girls have a massive orgy so they know what it's like to be with another woman. Any who refuse she could tape face first to another girl's privates.
Ha ha ha ha, the mention of being taped to one another reminded me of The Human Centipede. Perhaps Diana could tape a few together as a human centipede and let them crawl about like a perverse pet.
Anne under glass is a nice image. Maybe Diana will pee in the glass with her still in it; or tilt it up slightly and fart in it so Anne will have to smell it in (hopefully not killing her; but it's your story).
Great story as usual. Hope you are doing well my friend!!!
Author's Response:
If you outright request, I will write. Not sure how good I'd be at most of it, but I can do as you ask . . . provided you ask. While a few of the girls have locked-in fates already, the others are up for grabs. A list of everyone is in the end notes of last chapter, if you want.
As am I, but I'm also a stone-cold realist a good chunk of the time. Shit's gonna go worse before it gets any better.
In any case, I'm glad you like it, and I hope you enjoy it as it continues!
Date: November 30 2015 1:37 PM Title: Hot Feet
Just keep me in mind should you ever need to vent. On the funny side, I myslef would love to find a woman who thinks of me as an "it". He He He He He
Till next time!