Date: March 08 2016 10:03 AM Title: Divine Comedy
I've been meaning to write a review but have been preoccupied. This will be a very short review; but I love the developement happening in this chapter.
Diana displayed two things in this chapter that really made her character more attractive; intelligence and control-dominance. Diana came across as a sort of casual Goddess this time around rather than a rudderless victim. All knowing! All powerful! Take into account the girls partook of Diana's forbidden private property and the rath of being shrunk into her toys, Diana is pretty much their true Goddess. Time to pray girls???
Hopefully Natasha makes love with Diana, preferrably as a tiny. Maybe even a change in carrying her; from Diana's bra prisoner to her panty prisoner (good name for a story). Hmmm, perhaps Rei might make a nice little panty vibrator trying to snuggle up to get warm after a couple of days freezing alone.
You mentioned a story exchange. I don't post my stories. Simply put, I know anything put on the internet can come back to haunt you in the future, so I avoid it. If you wish, perhaps we can meet in a forum someday and I can send you one or two as attachments (if that's possible in a forum). You can do with them as you please, just remove me from any reference.
Author's Response:
Well, glad I cheered you up.
I'm pretty sure "Her Panty Prisoner" *is* the name of a story on here, and if it's not I'll make it one eventually.
Well, if you want, you can send them to me via email. I'm silentoneyuri72@gmail.com
Date: March 02 2016 5:29 PM Title: Divine Comedy
Long time reader, first time reviewer. Love the story! I'm a huge fan of F/f, and this has been great read. I saw in some of the other comments, and I'm sorry to hear about the heart break. Take your time and focus on real life. We'll be waiting for ya when you are ready.
Author's Response:
Thanks, LA!
Well, then you'll love my stuff, because that's just about all I write.
It's alright, really. It's kinda depressing that I still get my hopes up every time only for whatever girl I've found to shoot me down or be stringing me along, but that's life I guess.
I really should finish the story, though. I don't wanna be one of those asshole writers who leaves their readers hanging, really I don't.
Date: February 21 2016 10:49 PM Title: Unexpected Complications
Since you haven't updated in nearly a month, I will consider one of two possibilities, either you are dead (Which would suck), or you're depressed. If you are, send me an email at mrenderman12345@gmail.com and talk to me. I can be a listening ear for anything you wanna say. Seriously, I'd love to do anything I could to help you out.
P.S. You're an amazing writer!
Author's Response:
Honestly, the world just chooses the worst times to dump on me. Like when giantessworld is on a cliffhanger.
Seriously, though, it's honestly just more dating issues. I know I should be used to it by now, but . . . I'm turning 23 this year, and I haven't had a single date that didn't ditch me or turn out to be a prank. I'm horrible for making my issues interfere with my writing, but . . . I don't know.
Choreo helps, really, and I try to stay positive, but honestly it's looking like this year won't be any better than last year. GiantessLover122, the user who was supposed to put up a second chapter to "Insect Nobility" (a project that was supposed to have 12 total users and 12 total chapters posted by the end of the year, a goal I thought was reasonable), has straight-up vanished on me, and I don't know where all my good ideas are going.
I'll try to at least resolve the cliffhanger soon. Promise.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2016 1:24 PM Title: Unexpected Complications
Sorry to hear about what happened. I'm sure you'll find the right girl one day. Anyway, I just created an account, but I have been keeping up with this story as a guest, and I cant wait for more! I really like it, and I am invested in the story.
Here are a few names I'd like to suggest for the next story: Emily, Elizabeth (or Liz, or Lizzie, or any nickname like that.), Stacy, Olivia, and Nicole. I'm not sure if it's an all Female Cast of Characters or not, so I apologize if you wanted a male name in there as well.
Date: February 15 2016 2:52 PM Title: Unexpected Complications
Look who's back! I apologize for the late review, been busy myself even though I saved this over to my computer a while ago. I haven't worked on any of my stories either (none ever posted).
I'm sorry to hear about your heart break, that's sad and you deserve better. She's out there, somewhere.
Pleasent new chapter. Too bad Diana doesn't take the dealer up on his offer of a few tinies to kill, even if they are guys. Heck, once she shrinks them and takes them home, no one would know if she simply drops them in her toilet and leaves them there till she has to go or if she shrinks them down double small for the girls to brutalize and take out their frustrations on. That would even be a nice side business for Diana if she could convince some or all of the girls to fulfill "requests".
You do like the drama in your stories, don't you? First Val, then Natasha and now Becky. If Becky truly wants to get on Diana's girlfriend list, she should suggest someplace a lot more personal to snuggle; or just out and out crawl down inside Diana's panty. It would make for a nicer home than the table top.
The thought of being in Diana's mouth is interesting, perhaps she could make one of the girls her lollipop (a long stick up her hiney optional; but nice touch). We all like the look of a sexy woman licking a big all-day-sucker, well what if Diana's lolly happens to be alive and a permanent-sucker. HA HA, just thinking of Paris waddling around hunched over with a long pole sized stick, one end far up her butt, the other end dragging far behind her. Hmmm, maybe the bottoms of her feet could be glued to oposite sides of the stick so her legs are bent and wide open as if presenting her "crotch" for Diana to lick (might as well glue the stick up her butt too). She would be stuck as a lollipop!!!!!
I still think Val should be collared, leashed and led about on all fours (due to her broken ankles). Does Becky want to muzzle a pet bitch???
Names: Suzie, Stacey, Wendy, Cathy, Lana (Lana the Lollipop, he he he) Melissa, Isabela, Andrea, Mia, Julieta, Nicole.....
Author's Response:
I hope so, DW. I hope so.
I was sure you'd start asking questions about this mysterious whoever-the-fuck dealer. But nope, nobody wants to know mystery dealer, which is good because I don't have much to tell XD
I AM MADE OF DRAMA! Seriously, though, this is mostly to showcase how far Val is willing to go to fuck shit up, more than Becky being a serious contender. As Val assumes, she hasn't a chance.
My, my, more of your interesting ideas. A story trade might be a good idea with you.
Oh, Becky wants more than to muzzle a bitch. Becky wants to choke a bitch.
I'll take those into account.
Date: February 04 2016 9:24 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
I love this, it totally sidesteps the whole "how does shrinking work?" question, and has some super odd social dynamics.
Plus, hot.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2016 4:37 PM Title: Unexpected Complications
Well.... Cliff hanger.
I LOVED the story. Loved the entire thing. Made me realise that I have a super long way to go on my whole writing these types of stories before I can consider myself as good as you are.
I loved the entire thing. IT has so much depth and thought and character development. You're doing great!
A note for name: Chloe. Annebelle. Evelene. Just a couple. Happy writing.
Author's Response:
Um . . . well. To be honest, I don't even consider myself all that good- that honor (at least in my mind) would go to people who are much, much more in tune with how this site as a whole works. I'm just a plot girl, honest, and not even a good one- pretty much everything I know was gleaned from roleplaying and from my IRL "mentor".
That said, thanks for the compliments! I'm glad to know people like what I write, and hopefully you'll stick around to the end!
Thank you! I'll be sure to use at least one of those suggestions!
Date: January 30 2016 1:45 AM Title: Unexpected Complications
Finally! The wait is over, and I swear if you leave me waiting like that again, I will punch someone (Only half-joking). Seriously though, I checked your page every day for the past month if you had updated. Anyways, keep the chapters going, they're wonderful. I can easily say that this is one the best, if not the best story I've seen on wattp- I mean giantessworld. Hell, this is more interesting than anything else on their anyways. So, happy writing, and get me that next chapter quick!
P.S. I hope you're feeling better, and that whatever's causing your depression stays away. Have a great rest of your day!
Author's Response:
Oh, geez, don't mean to incite violence. I was raised a good girl, damnit!
Yeah, I was depressed because I tried my hardest to find a girl, any girl that would date me. Got my hopes up because I landed one date . . . and she told me to hit the curb. My soul still hurts just thinking about it.
I'm working on it, don't worry. Pray for me to find a girlfriend (or at least a fuck buddy) so that I don't fall into the self-pity spiral again!
Date: January 21 2016 10:08 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
Where are you?!? I need my updates!
Author's Response:
I've been kinda busy lately, and my Internet takes random crapping-out moments.
The next chapter should be up soon, though.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2016 4:01 PM Title: To the Future
Usually I'm not into stories, but this one is amazing. Thank you so much for writing this and keep up the stellar work!
Author's Response:
. . . Not sure what to make of that first part. Honestly, what?
But, still, thank you. Knowing that someone who's normally not into something I do (even if it's the story itself, what the actual fuck) liked what I'm doing is a huge self-esteem boost. I'm taking my time on the next chapter, because if I write it out wrong I'm gonna fucking offend somebody, but it's coming.
Date: January 05 2016 2:41 PM Title: To the Future
I would like to see more of this story, to its conclusion.
Date: January 02 2016 10:14 PM Title: To the Future
Would saying please kill you? Nah, just kidding. Seriously though, love how it is going so far, and I really wanna to see the Diana x Natasha love story progress. Overall, just keep doing what your doing. Enderman out, until the next chapter of course!
P.S. If you make me wait that long for a chapter again, I may have to resort to more drastic measures, such as begging, and you don't wanna see me beg. (It gets ugly)
P.P.S. I didn't review that whole time of waiting out of spite, or I'm just making an excuse...
Date: January 01 2016 3:29 PM Title: To the Future
Calm down now. The reason no one reviewed the previous chapter is the same reason you were away from writting: busy with the holidays. That said, welcome back. Too bad your not into guys, being commanded to "Review!" like that is a turn on. {BIG SMILE}
I like Val being stuck under tha glass; but to bad Diana doesn't make her stay a bit more uncomfortable. I don't know, maybe a sex crazed gerbil in there with her that wants to go up her hiney.
This is an emotional chapter, in a sweet way. Hopefully Diana isn't upset with Rei for trying to trick her. After all, Diana was going on a murder spree. If she is mad at her, how about a good old fashioned spanking. Heck, all the girls kinda deserve one.
As to disposing of Anne and Lynn, Diana could always swallow them in front of Val as a warning.
I have to wonder, Diana murdered 5 girls. She's in serious trouble with the law should anyone she restores to full height report her. Val would report her. Rei already plotted against her and all the other girls backed her on it. So who exactly other than Natasha could Diana trust restored to full height?
Maybe Diana and Natasha could become lovers and keep the others small, or even smaller so if Diana's shrunk she still rules over the rest.
Oh the part about Natasha's bra's being tight, very sexy! Maybe she could fashion herself a new bra using two of the girls as cups or underwires??? Diana could just snuggle down deep in Natasha's clevage and live there.
Guess any remaining girls could be made into a matching pair of living thong for Natasha.
Did that satisfy Your Command to "Review!"? Ok, perhaps Obeying You was more for me than I should admit. {he he he}
Author's Response:
I think that, at the moment, Diana has more preoccupations than just Rei. Mind you, there are still things on the way for our crisis ringleader . . .
That's kinda not who Diana is, and it's doubtful Natasha would think about it, either- and she's pretty much the one in charge for the moment.
That's reliant on 2 things: 1. one of them reporting her, and the two that you mentioned are in trouble right now, 2. them being believed, because most people wouldn't believe you if you showed them. So really, Diana's in the clear unless someone who wants to report her holds on to some kind of proof. That'd kinda be difficult.
Okay, that mental image was hot as fuck, thanks muchly.
Yes, yes it did. Thanks!
Date: January 01 2016 3:54 AM Title: To the Future
Have you ever considered or attempted applying to Medicaid? (Assuming you're in the US)
Author's Response:
I'd given it some thought, but I probably have a fuckton of prior conditions at this point.
Plus, even the copay would be way out of my price range. Even the Wi-Fi I usually post from is a jury-rigged setup, and my one IRL friend covers my phone bill. I am living a few pennies above the poverty line, and well . . . I've had debates with myself if I should let go of my last scrap of pride and dignity and just go on welfare.
Date: December 17 2015 1:52 PM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm
Not to harp on the subject; but any woman who would say that to you is not the type that you really want to be with. Crush in your sex {don't want to talk crude about your person} maybe. Though reality is they're not worthy of you beyond your disdain.
You'll find her, someday ; )
Date: December 17 2015 11:21 AM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm
I go away for a bit and come back to TWO new chapters. Oddly enough, I'm sick too; just like Diana {minus the murderous, lust filled, drunken stupor}.
"Ouch!" for Anne. If I were to die as a tiny in a beautiful woman's pussy, I think I'd probably want to go by way of drowning in her sweet nectar. Admittedly the quick crush showcased Diana's physical dominion over her tinies, too bad the crunch didn' give her a little orgasmic spasm. Or did it???
You say Diana found out about Val; but who remembers what happens during a drunken stupor {The worst words to hear: "Do you remember what you did last night?" followed by a close second "The test came out positive!" (Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha) }. Just saying.
Will Val be able to redeem herself if Diana does in fact forget the evening's events? Or if Diana remembers, will Val stay in the glass as Diana makes herself a protein smoothie for breakfsst?
It will be one heck of a morning for Diana, waking up most likely hung-over and still sick with Anne's crunched, dead body in her pussy AND the knowledge, if she remembers, that Val lied to and used her. How will Diana dispose of Anne's body? Maybe as part of her breakfast too.
You know with Val's ankles broke, she would be forced to crawl around on all fours like a doggie. That is unless Diana carries her everywhere while they heal. Since Val is a bitch, might as well collar and leash her up as one. {Yeah, I have that fetish: "arff arff arff"}. Question is, who would be the one holding her leash?
They may have discussed it earlier; but I didn't see any misgiving by Natasha at the mention of going on a date with Diana or that she "has a thing for" her.
Hey, two chapters ago you had Diana say "I'm already big and ugly"; since you relate to Diana, well actually you're her - she's you, you don't really think that way about yourself do you??? I don't know what you look like; but for some reason I doubt you're even remotely unattractive and are much to hard on yourself if you should erroneously believe that.
Author's Response:
The world may never know. But seriously, I've kinda always been partial to the idea of just being smashed inside another girl. The idea of drowning terrifies me, if I'm perfectly honest.
Even if Diana forgets, the other girls will be right there to remind her.
Oh, Val is most certainly fucked no matter which way you slice it. While Diana doesn't own a blender (I STILL don't, actually), perhaps snacking on the bitch would be ideal, eh? Only one way to find out . . .
I honestly hadn't put much thought into the disposal of Anne's body. I mean, obviously it has to happen, but it's just not something one thinks about often. But yeah, Diana's got a shitty day ahead of her.
Oh, you'd be surprised what I've come up with for Val.
Even if it was in her head to object, really there's no other choice the way the girls see it. Because, if Diana's not dating one of them, she might go out and get a real girlfriend, and given Diana's personality . . . she'd probably get with someone with a serious beef with the Bitch Brigade.
I don't THINK, I KNOW. Put bluntly, I wouldn't date me. I'm awkward, I have fucktons of scars because I'm an idiot, my left hand just straight-up doesn't look right, and . . . however much of a chest you think Diana has, you're probably overestimating. I've had girls tell me to my face that they couldn't get drunk enough to sleep with me. So yeah.
Date: December 16 2015 10:32 PM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm
Geez, you should've been dead. So how'd you liver take it?
Author's Response:
I still don't know. No medical insurance. I haven't seen a doctor or dentist or anything since I was 17. I'm alive, I guess. I had the world's shittiest hangover, though.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 9:28 PM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm
DING DONG THE BITCH IS DEAD. Unfortunately, if Diana really is "drunk" drunk, as opposed to a little loopy, chances are she'll only remember about a quarter of these events in the morning.
Author's Response:
Unless you're talking about Anne, Val isn't dead yet. Utterly, horribly fucked, but not dead.
Well, what's the largest bottle of cold medicine you've ever seen? Now imagine that as really strong alcohol. That's what happens to cold medicine after its expiration date. All the ingredients start to ferment stupidly fast, simultaneously. After about a year, you have Everclear.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 8:47 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
Diana should pee or poop in the glass with Val in it! Or tape Val to the toilet seat!
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 2:24 AM Title: Phase Two: Information Trading
Natasha- 100% Val- also 100% because I want her to suffer. Since Diana lives in a shit apartment, if she chooses to force Val to love her, she could slip a necklace chain onto a nail, nail it to a wall, then give Val a sort of metal-link collar (like the ones on necklace extenders) and keep her chained there while Diana's gone, like a dog on a leash. :) I am one depraved kinky cunt.