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Reviewer: Shiggydiggy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I really like(d?) this story, it has some unusual things going for it with partial modification and shrinking. I'm interesting to see where it goes, if you choose to continue.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good story. I always liked the female teacher and boy relationship. Many times, I see the male teacher and female student and I just don't enjoy those as much.

I think you switched chapters 1 and 2.

Other than that, I look forward to reading more from you.

Reviewer: jonnyjames9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Pretty solid, especially considering the fact that this is your first story.

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