[Report This]Date: July 01 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Elizabeth is crazy.
She seems like that girl that will tie Scott up to her body. She might use tape, rubber bands, floss, you name it, I think she will use it to keep Scott.
This makes me wonder, what happens after these 3 days. Will she hide Scott from the other girls? Her weakness is Trinity. If Trinity demands for Scott then Elizabeth has to make a hard desicision.
For now, we know that Elizabeth is agressive, and impatient for pleasure, and possibly torture.
Its going to be chaos for Scott now.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think it's Elizabeth.
I wish it would be Haleigh's mom, but I don't think she even knows that Scott is there. Only the girls know that he is with Haleigh.
Perhaps it's Trinity who thinks that Haleigh isn't mean enough and her time with Scott is over.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: June 30 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey! You just make a error. This is double chapter 12. Must you post chapter 13.
Author's Response:
I have no idea why it keeps duplicating the chapters, the real chapter will be up soon enough.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far so good! Continiue writing, and I'm hoping for more to come.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
I--almost literally--can't wait.
:-)
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah, this chapter was quite nice. Very interested how the story will play out. Since now there is a couple. But very excited for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
That fight was amusing. I wonder if Elizabeth will unleash her anger on Scott by the time she gets him.
Haleigh hasn't been involved much in this story, until now.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
One could say that Haleigh struck as fast as a comet.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
I don't blame Kayla for getting mad at what Scott almost called her. Technically, she's the daughter of a bee-yotch!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! This chapter was fantastic!
It seems like you read my mind:
-Milf
-panties
-unaware
-legs crossing
-and there's more to come!
I'm still wondering where Kayla hid that quarter, if she hid it at all. However, I'm glad he didn't find it.
Wow, Kayla's mom seems experienced, ignoring what's in her underwear. She probably hides stuff in there all the time. If this was a young virgin, she would be going all crazy with Scott in there.
I have a feeling that Kayla will pull out Scott and mistake him for a sex toy or something. Then she uses Scott for pleasure. Meanwhile Kayla is enjoying the show of watching Scott get humiliated.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
For his sake, Scott had better hope Kayla's Mom _stays_ unaware of him. Otherwise, Trinity, Liz, and the others might _never_ get him back!
Date: June 25 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just finished the newest chapter and I am very pleased with what will come in the near future! You're a good writer and I hope you complete this story and continue on to make some more! :D
Author's Response:
Many thanks! I will finish this story, and I will make more stories!
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh, brother! Even at his current size, I don't think one purse-ride is long enough for him to heal.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, Kayla doesn't even care that Scott has broken bones! (Unless he is already healed up by now).
Maeghan was right, the next girl doesn't mind Scott being crippled.
That scene with Maeghan's mom was great, and I like how she had no idea that Scott was there. Hoping for maybe more interaction with Kayla's mom.
I had this thought of maybe one of the girls hugging her mom while Scott was in the girl's cleavage, and as they hugged, he popped up and lands in the mom's cleavage, and he slowly slides down into her panties. The girl then has to wait until her mom changes clothes to get Scott back.
That suggestion seems like a bit too far, so another example might be one of the moms accidentally sitting on Scott. Or the girl gets horny watching her mom sit on Scott and the girl decides to sit on Scott as well.
Back to Kayla. I think she will tie Scott up to her. I don't know where, but I think she will tie him up to various parts of her body.
This was a great sequence of events. I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Isn't it going to be tough to worship? I mean he broke bones. What did he break? Anyways nice, I'm enjoying this story so far.
Date: June 24 2015 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, you might like being downtrodden (literally) beneath someone's heel. But, I'm afraid that's "toe" to ask of me. ;-D
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just read all 6 chapters. I like this kind of story.
A group of girls with different methods of "fun" that they have with Scott.
I agree, the butt action was great with Maeghan.
However, there was one thing that got me thinking. When Cora told Scott that she can't leave him in her room becuase her mom might find him, well, I actually wanted to see that happen. So I was wondering if one of the girl's mom will find Scott and use him for a day. That could be interesting and possibly be very sexy.
Can't wait to see what happens next with Scott!
Author's Response:
I pondered this idea. It might come in the future, and I teased it in the newest chapter. :) glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: June 23 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
"Socks" to be him.
Author's Response:
Does it really? I would love to be in his position. :P
Date: June 23 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please keep going with the story, I'm interested to what happenes to the main character of the story. Along with the "Circle of Goddesses".
Author's Response:
I do plan on finishing it, I promise I will not abandon it. Enjoy the story and what's to come :)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
It seems like a good story going forward. I'm still unsure about it, to form a opinion.