[Report This]Date: April 28 2026 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 2. Selena heads out.
Hope you're doing well. I have to be honest when I first started reading this, the opening felt simple enough: a mutual growth experience between a couple, playful and intimate. But the moment Selena walked outside and grew to 120 feet, and you described the narrator sliding between her breasts, resting his arms on each one while she towered over the town, the story shifted into something much more immersive. You didn't just describe a giant woman you described what it feels like to be held there, to see the town from that height, to feel the ground tremble with her steps. That kind of sensory detail (the warm breath washing over him, the breasts jiggling as she walked, the screams from below sounding like tiny high-pitched squeaks) is what separates a good giantess scene from a great one. Not many writers get that balance right without real practice, and I genuinely respect the effort you've put into this.
The characters feel believable too Selena's casual confidence, the narrator's pure excitement shouting for joy between her breasts, the way she squats down to pick up a Honda Civic like it's a toy. You built a world where size matters not just for spectacle, but for intimacy and power at the same time.
I'm a paid artist and I specialize in turning stories into comic pages. The way you handle scale the comparison of her face being 18-20 feet tall, each breast being 9 feet wide and 6 feet out from her chest, her palms wider than the narrator's entire height those are the exact details I look for when visualizing panels. I'd love to bring your story to life visually. If you're interested, feel free to reach out:
Email: trippsyyarts @ gmail . com
Discord: tripsydraws
Looking forward to hearing from you. My question is this: when the device's beam hit Selena and she grew to 120 feet in 30 seconds, you specifically mentioned the beam lasted 15 seconds then shut off, with growth continuing for another 30 seconds was that delayed growth effect intentional world-building on your part (like the energy needing time to fully settle into her body), or was it a narrative choice to stretch out the transformation moment for the reader?