Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 6:24 PM Title: Survival Lust

Great stuff! Smut was definitely something that missing from the main stories. Lutice was really sexy here and i was actually surprised both by how much she gets turned on by him and actually cares about him. Both things that are almost directly opposed since exposing Sanders to her lust would kill him.

Also, i liked how you sprinkled abit of characterization into this by showing Lutice in pain when she thinks about why she kills little people like theyre nothing...At least she acknowledged that something is wrong by questioning her own logic. Anyway good stuff!