Reviews For Devil-Eyed
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 27 2023 8:15 PM Title: Neko

I really like the concept of the story and the locale. It was a good erotic story, but I can't help thinking it could have been even better with the following: 1) more descriptive on the vore side, 2) some back story on the guy being eaten would have helped; we don't get much reaction from him; how did Okira and he know each other, and 3) perhaps Okira could have been surprise shrunken down and eaten just after Rin had swallowed the guy.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 1:51 PM Title: The Belly of the Beast

Great writing, nice characterization, very good pace.

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 4:15 PM Title: The Belly of the Beast

Very Mass!!!!

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